Flash Fiction: Fences and Forgiveness

In the quiet suburb of Maplewood, the fences were high but the tensions were higher, especially between two neighbors: John Green and Rick Dale. Both had lived side by side for years without much interaction, their mutual disinterest a bridge too wide to cross. John, a meticulous gardener, took pride in his immaculate lawn and blooming flower beds. Rick, on the other hand, was the proud owner of a large, boisterous Rottweiler named Max, whose barks echoed through the neighborhood like rumbling thunder.

The uneasy peace shattered one sunny afternoon when Max managed to break through a weak spot in the fence and charged into John’s yard. John’s beloved Beagle, Toby, was enjoying the sunshine, and the intrusion ended in chaos. Toby was severely injured in the attack. Although he survived, the incident left him with lasting injuries and a palpable fear of other dogs.

Furious and heartbroken, John confronted Rick, demanding that he restrain Max and repair the fence. Rick, somewhat remorseful yet defensive, promised to fix the fence but shrugged off the severity of Toby’s injuries, chalking it up to animal instincts. The conversation ended with harsh words and heightened animosities, leaving John to stew in his anger as he cared for his recovering pet.

Over the following weeks, John watched as Rick made a half-hearted attempt to repair the fence but did nothing to train or better secure Max. The sight of Max roaming near the flimsy boundary fueled John’s resentment. Sleepless nights plotting revenge became his new routine. He imagined sabotaging Rick’s yard, lodging complaints with the homeowners’ association, or even letting Max out to get him impounded. Each scenario played out in his mind with a vindictive satisfaction.

One evening, as John sat on his porch, his plotting was interrupted by the sight of Toby, tail wagging, trying to peek through the fence at Max. Despite his fear, Toby’s curiosity about his neighbor seemed undiminished. It was then that John realized that his desire for revenge was poisoning him more than it was affecting Rick or Max. The sight of Toby, still gentle and forgiving, made John ashamed of his dark thoughts.

With a deep breath, John decided on a different course of action. The next morning, he invited Rick over for coffee. Rick, surprised by the gesture, accepted cautiously. Over cups of strong brew, John expressed his fears for Toby’s safety and his frustration with the ongoing situation. He proposed they jointly pay for a professional to reinforce the fence and even suggested they could share the costs of a trainer for Max.

To John’s surprise, Rick agreed, embarrassed by his previous neglect and moved by John’s change in approach. The men spent the next few Saturdays working on the fence, their cooperation awkward at first but gradually becoming more amicable. Max, under the guidance of a trainer, became less aggressive, and Toby slowly regained his confidence.

Months later, John and Rick, now on much friendlier terms, watched as Toby and Max cautiously sniffed each other through the secure fence. It wasn’t a perfect friendship, but it was a peace hard-earned and much preferred over the bitterness of revenge. In repairing the fence, they had also mended fences of a different sort, learning that forgiveness could be more satisfying than retribution.

Author: Richard L. Fricks

Former CPA, attorney, and lifelong wanderer. I'm now a full-time skeptic and part-time novelist. The rest of my time I spend biking, gardening, meditating, photographing, reading, writing, and encouraging others to adopt The Pencil Driven Life.

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