12/15/23 Biking & Listening

Here’s today’s bike ride metrics. Temperature at beginning of ride: 52 degrees. Bright, sunny day; a little windy.


Photos from today’s ride:

None today.

Why I ride:

Biking is something I both love and hate. The conflicting emotions arise from the undeniable physical effort it demands. However, this exertion is precisely what makes it an excellent form of exercise. Most days, I dedicate over an hour to my cycling routine, and in doing so, I’ve discovered a unique opportunity to enjoy a good book or podcast. The rhythmic pedaling and the wind against my face create a calming backdrop that allows me to fully immerse myself in the content. In these moments, the time spent on the bike seems worthwhile, as I can’t help but appreciate the mental and physical rewards it offers.

I especially like having ridden. The post-biking feeling is one of pure satisfaction. The endorphin rush, coupled with a sense of accomplishment, makes the initial struggle and fatigue worthwhile. As I dismount and catch my breath, I relish the sensation of having conquered the challenge, both physically and mentally. It’s a reminder that the things we sometimes love to hate can often be the ones that bring us the most fulfillment. In the end, the love-hate relationship with biking only deepens my appreciation for the sport, as it continually pushes me to overcome my own limitations and embrace the rewards that follow the effort.


Why you should ride:

Encourages Relaxation:

Cycling is not just a form of physical exercise; it also has a profound ability to encourage relaxation. Here are various ways in which cycling contributes to a relaxed state of mind and body:

  • Physical Activity and Stress Reduction: Engaging in physical activities like cycling can reduce the body’s stress responses. Exercise triggers the release of endorphins, the body’s natural painkillers and mood elevators, which promote relaxation. The physical effort of cycling also helps to use up the energy created by stress, aiding in calming the body.
  • Rhythmic Pedaling as a Meditative Practice: The repetitive nature of cycling, with its steady, rhythmic pedaling, can have a meditative effect. This rhythmic motion can help focus the mind, drawing attention away from stressful thoughts and allowing a sense of calm.
  • Outdoor and Nature Exposure: Cycling outdoors, especially in natural or scenic settings, can enhance relaxation. Being in nature is known to reduce stress and promote a sense of peace. The sights, sounds, and smells of the outdoors can be very soothing.
  • Mindfulness and Presence: Cycling requires a level of present-moment awareness, which is a key aspect of mindfulness. Practicing mindfulness has been shown to reduce stress and promote relaxation. When cycling, the focus on the immediate environment and bodily sensations can help achieve this state.
  • Cardiovascular Health Benefits: Regular cycling improves cardiovascular health, which can help in reducing tension in the body. A healthier heart and circulatory system can contribute to a more relaxed state overall.
  • Reduces Mental Clutter: A bike ride offers a break from daily routines and responsibilities, providing an opportunity to clear the mind. This mental break can be refreshing and relaxing, especially after a long day or during stressful periods.
  • Social Relaxation: For those who enjoy group rides, the social aspect of cycling can be relaxing. Social interactions and the sense of community found in cycling groups can contribute to overall relaxation and well-being.
  • Achievement and Satisfaction: Completing a challenging ride or reaching a cycling goal can bring about a sense of achievement and satisfaction. This positive feeling can promote a relaxed state, as it counters feelings of stress and anxiety.
  • End of Ride Relaxation Response: After a cycling session, the body often experiences a natural relaxation response. The decrease in physical activity coupled with the sense of accomplishment can lead to a profound state of relaxation.
  • Improves Sleep Quality: As cycling improves sleep quality, it indirectly promotes relaxation. Better sleep means the body is better rested and more capable of handling stress, leading to a more relaxed state during waking hours.

In summary, cycling’s ability to encourage relaxation is multifaceted, combining physical, mental, and emotional elements. By incorporating regular cycling into one’s lifestyle, it’s possible to cultivate a more relaxed state of being, beneficial for overall health and well-being.


Please watch

Here’s a couple of links to groups I like. Hopefully, they’ll encourage you to start riding a bike, no matter your age.

Cycling for those aged 70+(opens in a new tab)


Solitary Cycling(opens in a new tab)


My bike:

A Rockhopper by Specialized. I purchased it November 2021 from Venture Out in Guntersville; Mike is top notch! So is the bike. The ‘old’ man seat was salvaged from an old Walmart bike. Seat replaced with new one from Venture Out.


What I’m listening to:

NONFICTION

20 Master Plots: And How to Build Them, by Ronald B. Tobias

Give your story a solid foundation – a plot that engages readers from start to finish!

The best stories linger in the hearts and minds of readers for decades. These tales gain their power through plots that connect with the audience on both an emotional and intellectual level.

Ronald B. Tobias details these 20 time-tested plots. Each is discussed and analyzed, illustrating how a successful plot integrates all the elements of a story. Tobias then reveals how to use these plots effectively in your own work.

Tobias then goes to the next level, describing how to choose and develop plot in fiction. He reveals how to craft plot for any subject matter so that you develop your work evenly and effectively. As a result, your fiction will be more cohesive and convincing, making your story unforgettable for readers everywhere.

Blinkist nonfiction book summaries:

None today.

Podcasts:

Waking Up app series/courses:

None today.

FICTION

Novels:

Amazon abstract:

GMA BOOK CLUB PICK • AN NPR BOOK OF THE YEAR • From the New York Times bestselling author of I Was Anastasia and Code Name Hélène comes a gripping historical mystery inspired by the life and diary of Martha Ballard, a renowned 18th-century midwife who defied the legal system and wrote herself into American history.

“Fans of Outlander’s Claire Fraser will enjoy Lawhon’s Martha, who is brave and outspoken when it comes to protecting the innocent. . . impressive.”—The Washington Post

“Once again, Lawhon works storytelling magic with a real-life heroine.” —People Magazine


Maine, 1789: When the Kennebec River freezes, entombing a man in the ice, Martha Ballard is summoned to examine the body and determine cause of death. As a midwife and healer, she is privy to much of what goes on behind closed doors in Hallowell. Her diary is a record of every birth and death, crime and debacle that unfolds in the close-knit community. Months earlier, Martha documented the details of an alleged rape committed by two of the town’s most respected gentlemen—one of whom has now been found dead in the ice. But when a local physician undermines her conclusion, declaring the death to be an accident, Martha is forced to investigate the shocking murder on her own.

Over the course of one winter, as the trial nears, and whispers and prejudices mount, Martha doggedly pursues the truth. Her diary soon lands at the center of the scandal, implicating those she loves, and compelling Martha to decide where her own loyalties lie.

Clever, layered, and subversive, Ariel Lawhon’s newest offering introduces an unsung heroine who refused to accept anything less than justice at a time when women were considered best seen and not heard. The Frozen River is a thrilling, tense, and tender story about a remarkable woman who left an unparalleled legacy yet remains nearly forgotten to this day.


Blinkest fiction book summaries:

None today.

Music:


Here’s a few photos from previous riding adventures:

Novel Excerpts–The Boaz Scorekeeper, Chapter 61

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.
The Boaz Scorekeeper, written in 2017, is my second novel. I'll post it a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

I was sitting in my study drinking coffee Saturday morning November 4th.  There was no good reason to be hesitant about checking the Grand Cayman account.  There was no way in you know where that Fitz Billingsley was going to wire $4,000,000 to a Caribbean Island.  I thought it a stretch for him to put together that much money in one week.  I booted up the laptop computer that I had used to write the demand letter and searched for Fidelity Bank Limited’s website.  I entered the login information for Edward Simmons and clicked on ‘Bank Accounts.’  Once again, I was shocked.  The account balance now was $6,005,833.33.  Within the ‘Account Transaction’ section, I saw a $4,000,000.00 deposit had been made Thursday afternoon at 4:30 p.m., Alabama time.  Not only had Fritz wired the requested amount, but he had done it nearly a day and a half early. I felt like celebrating but knew that sharing this information with anyone, even Karla, would end in disaster.

I then checked my law office email account and there was one from Fitz.  He said that he had been instructed to contact me and donate $500,000 to the Boaz Spinning Mill project.  He asked me to call him on Monday.

12/14/23 Biking & Listening

Here’s today’s bike ride metrics. Temperature at beginning of ride: 54 degrees. Bright, warm sunny day.


Photos from today’s ride:

None today.

Why I ride:

Biking is something I both love and hate. The conflicting emotions arise from the undeniable physical effort it demands. However, this exertion is precisely what makes it an excellent form of exercise. Most days, I dedicate over an hour to my cycling routine, and in doing so, I’ve discovered a unique opportunity to enjoy a good book or podcast. The rhythmic pedaling and the wind against my face create a calming backdrop that allows me to fully immerse myself in the content. In these moments, the time spent on the bike seems worthwhile, as I can’t help but appreciate the mental and physical rewards it offers.

I especially like having ridden. The post-biking feeling is one of pure satisfaction. The endorphin rush, coupled with a sense of accomplishment, makes the initial struggle and fatigue worthwhile. As I dismount and catch my breath, I relish the sensation of having conquered the challenge, both physically and mentally. It’s a reminder that the things we sometimes love to hate can often be the ones that bring us the most fulfillment. In the end, the love-hate relationship with biking only deepens my appreciation for the sport, as it continually pushes me to overcome my own limitations and embrace the rewards that follow the effort.


Why you should ride:

Encourages Relaxation:

Cycling is not just a form of physical exercise; it also has a profound ability to encourage relaxation. Here are various ways in which cycling contributes to a relaxed state of mind and body:

  • Physical Activity and Stress Reduction: Engaging in physical activities like cycling can reduce the body’s stress responses. Exercise triggers the release of endorphins, the body’s natural painkillers and mood elevators, which promote relaxation. The physical effort of cycling also helps to use up the energy created by stress, aiding in calming the body.
  • Rhythmic Pedaling as a Meditative Practice: The repetitive nature of cycling, with its steady, rhythmic pedaling, can have a meditative effect. This rhythmic motion can help focus the mind, drawing attention away from stressful thoughts and allowing a sense of calm.
  • Outdoor and Nature Exposure: Cycling outdoors, especially in natural or scenic settings, can enhance relaxation. Being in nature is known to reduce stress and promote a sense of peace. The sights, sounds, and smells of the outdoors can be very soothing.
  • Mindfulness and Presence: Cycling requires a level of present-moment awareness, which is a key aspect of mindfulness. Practicing mindfulness has been shown to reduce stress and promote relaxation. When cycling, the focus on the immediate environment and bodily sensations can help achieve this state.
  • Cardiovascular Health Benefits: Regular cycling improves cardiovascular health, which can help in reducing tension in the body. A healthier heart and circulatory system can contribute to a more relaxed state overall.
  • Reduces Mental Clutter: A bike ride offers a break from daily routines and responsibilities, providing an opportunity to clear the mind. This mental break can be refreshing and relaxing, especially after a long day or during stressful periods.
  • Social Relaxation: For those who enjoy group rides, the social aspect of cycling can be relaxing. Social interactions and the sense of community found in cycling groups can contribute to overall relaxation and well-being.
  • Achievement and Satisfaction: Completing a challenging ride or reaching a cycling goal can bring about a sense of achievement and satisfaction. This positive feeling can promote a relaxed state, as it counters feelings of stress and anxiety.
  • End of Ride Relaxation Response: After a cycling session, the body often experiences a natural relaxation response. The decrease in physical activity coupled with the sense of accomplishment can lead to a profound state of relaxation.
  • Improves Sleep Quality: As cycling improves sleep quality, it indirectly promotes relaxation. Better sleep means the body is better rested and more capable of handling stress, leading to a more relaxed state during waking hours.

In summary, cycling’s ability to encourage relaxation is multifaceted, combining physical, mental, and emotional elements. By incorporating regular cycling into one’s lifestyle, it’s possible to cultivate a more relaxed state of being, beneficial for overall health and well-being.


Please watch

Here’s a couple of links to groups I like. Hopefully, they’ll encourage you to start riding a bike, no matter your age.

Cycling for those aged 70+(opens in a new tab)


Solitary Cycling(opens in a new tab)


My bike:

A Rockhopper by Specialized. I purchased it November 2021 from Venture Out in Guntersville; Mike is top notch! So is the bike. The ‘old’ man seat was salvaged from an old Walmart bike. Seat replaced with new one from Venture Out.


What I’m listening to:

NONFICTION

20 Master Plots: And How to Build Them, by Ronald B. Tobias

Give your story a solid foundation – a plot that engages readers from start to finish!

The best stories linger in the hearts and minds of readers for decades. These tales gain their power through plots that connect with the audience on both an emotional and intellectual level.

Ronald B. Tobias details these 20 time-tested plots. Each is discussed and analyzed, illustrating how a successful plot integrates all the elements of a story. Tobias then reveals how to use these plots effectively in your own work.

Tobias then goes to the next level, describing how to choose and develop plot in fiction. He reveals how to craft plot for any subject matter so that you develop your work evenly and effectively. As a result, your fiction will be more cohesive and convincing, making your story unforgettable for readers everywhere.

Blinkist nonfiction book summaries:

None today.

Podcasts:

None today.

Waking Up app series/courses:

None today.

FICTION

Novels:

Amazon abstract:

GMA BOOK CLUB PICK • AN NPR BOOK OF THE YEAR • From the New York Times bestselling author of I Was Anastasia and Code Name Hélène comes a gripping historical mystery inspired by the life and diary of Martha Ballard, a renowned 18th-century midwife who defied the legal system and wrote herself into American history.

“Fans of Outlander’s Claire Fraser will enjoy Lawhon’s Martha, who is brave and outspoken when it comes to protecting the innocent. . . impressive.”—The Washington Post

“Once again, Lawhon works storytelling magic with a real-life heroine.” —People Magazine


Maine, 1789: When the Kennebec River freezes, entombing a man in the ice, Martha Ballard is summoned to examine the body and determine cause of death. As a midwife and healer, she is privy to much of what goes on behind closed doors in Hallowell. Her diary is a record of every birth and death, crime and debacle that unfolds in the close-knit community. Months earlier, Martha documented the details of an alleged rape committed by two of the town’s most respected gentlemen—one of whom has now been found dead in the ice. But when a local physician undermines her conclusion, declaring the death to be an accident, Martha is forced to investigate the shocking murder on her own.

Over the course of one winter, as the trial nears, and whispers and prejudices mount, Martha doggedly pursues the truth. Her diary soon lands at the center of the scandal, implicating those she loves, and compelling Martha to decide where her own loyalties lie.

Clever, layered, and subversive, Ariel Lawhon’s newest offering introduces an unsung heroine who refused to accept anything less than justice at a time when women were considered best seen and not heard. The Frozen River is a thrilling, tense, and tender story about a remarkable woman who left an unparalleled legacy yet remains nearly forgotten to this day.


 

Amazon abstract:

NATIONAL BESTSELLER • The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo series continues: Lisbeth Salander must face the most important battle of her life, and will finally put her past to rest in this thriller that will “leave Salander’s legion of followers clamoring for more” (The Wall Street Journal). • Also known as the Millennium series

Mikael Blomkvist is trying to reach Lisbeth Salander—the fierce, unstoppable girl with the dragon tattoo. He needs her help unraveling the identity of a man who died with Blomkvist’s phone number in his pocket—a man who does not exist in any official records and whose garbled last words hinted at knowledge that would be dangerous to important people. But Lisbeth has disappeared. She’s sold her apartment in Stockholm. She’s gone dark. She’s told no one where she is. And no one is aware that at long last she’s got her primal enemy, her twin sister, Camilla, squarely in her sights.

Look for the latest book in the Girl with the Dragon Tattoo series, The Girl in the Eagle’s Talons, coming soon!


Blinkest fiction book summaries:

None today.

Music:


Here’s a few photos from previous riding adventures:

Short Story: The Mystery of Kindred Spirits

I’m delighted to share one of my short stories with you. Each tale is a window into a world of imagination, woven from the rich tapestry of life in and around my hometown of Boaz, Alabama. These stories, set against the backdrop of familiar streets and the echoes of shared history, aim to transport you to a place where the extraordinary meets the everyday.

"The Mystery of Kindred Spirits" follows two local teenagers, Connor and Amy, as they embark on an unexpected journey of discovery. Connor, a mystery-loving enthusiast, finds solace in the pages of detective tales and the adventures hidden in the nooks and crannies of Boaz. Amy, an artistic soul drawn to the unusual, spends her time unraveling the fascinating lore at the local Museum of Curiosities. Their paths cross in an English class project at Boaz High School, sparking a series of events that weave their individual passions into a shared quest.

"The Mystery of Kindred Spirits" is more than just a story of uncovering hidden truths; it's a narrative that explores the bonds of friendship, the power of shared interests, and the joy of unexpected companionship. As you delve into this story, join Connor and Amy in unraveling the mysteries not just of Boaz, but of each other’s worlds.

Some of you may have heard about or read, The Case of the Perfectionist Professor (here's the link), the first novel in my Boaz Sleuth series starring Connor Ford (I'm currently working on book two). "The Mystery of Kindred Spirits" is the first of hopefully many short stories about Connor's early life.

So, settle in and let’s uncover the secrets hidden in the heart of Boaz, where every corner promises a new mystery and every encounter could lead to a lifelong friendship.

Without further ado, let’s dive into "The Mystery of Kindred Spirits."

Nestled amidst the rolling hills and thick forests of northeast Alabama sits the small town of Boaz. Founded in 1878 and incorporated just shy of twenty years later, Boaz began as a modest farming community. But over the decades it blossomed into a haven for artists, dreamers, and eccentrics from all walks of life.

These days, roughly ten thousand folks call Boaz home. The town center consists of a charming Main Street dotted with mom-and-pop shops, like Main Street Comics, a favorite haunt of Connor Ford, a local teenager with a penchant for mystery and the unknown, where he loves to scour the overflowing boxes of old Detective Tales magazines. At the end of Main Street stands the beloved Boaz Community Theater, a quaint, historical gem that once served as a gathering place for town events. Now lovingly restored, it hosts a variety of local happenings, from the high school drama club’s annual plays to classic movie screenings under the starry Southern sky. Just off the main drag is Bozeman’s Diner, cherished by locals for their famous chocolate malts and shameless love of all things fried.

Beyond downtown, rolling pastures stretch for miles before meeting the thick woods that surround Boaz. A canopy of jack pine and water oak trees shade the many winding trails where Connor spends hours exploring. Out near Route 168, the Boaz Museum of Curiosities stands as a beacon of intrigue. It’s the favorite haunt of Amy, another local teenager, who is drawn to its eclectic collection of peculiar artifacts and fascinating lore. The streets may roll up early most nights, but Hidden Hollow Lane is known to bustle well into the wee hours on summer weekends as teens gather and legends spread.

Boaz Sheriff Duggan has long indulged Connor’s detective fantasies, even deputizing him on slow days. And the proprietors at Murphy’s Five & Dime always have an eagle eye out for mischief-makers, keeping Connor’s parents informed if he loiters too long reading crime paperbacks behind the aisles.

This quaint southern town has its share of unusual nooks and characters. For Connor and Amy, although unknown to each other, Boaz provides the perfect backdrop for adventure. Around each corner waits the promise of mystery.

***

It was the first day of freshman year at Boaz High School. Nervous energy buzzed through the halls as students found their assigned homerooms, clutching class schedules and scanning room numbers on classroom doors. For many, it marked their first venture into the hallowed halls of high school. New adventures lay in store, but first came the uncertainty of new classes with unfamiliar faces.

Students shuffled through the creaky wooden doors of Mr. Abernathy’s English classroom. A venerable teacher of thirty years, Jerome Abernathy had a bombastic presence that commanded any room he entered. Salt-and-pepper curls sprang from his head at erratic angles beneath his tweed cap. His wardrobe changed daily but a crimson bowtie always adorned his collar.

As students filed in, the scent of chalk dust mingled with worn pages and fresh coffee brewing on Mr. Abernathy’s desk – the quintessential aromas of English class. Sepia-toned photos of literary legends like Poe, Austen and Twain lined the walls. Scrawled quotes covered every inch of chalkboard real estate. The desks may have born the scratches of generations, but fresh daisies popped from the windowsill pots – Mr. Abernathy believed gloomy places dampened young minds.

When the final bell clanged, Mr. Abernathy leapt nimbly onto his elevated podium. “Welcome students to the wondrous realm of literature and composition!” His voice filled the room as he passionately outlined the syllabus. Assignments included original poetry, analytical essays…and an extra-credit mystery novel analysis project.

Lanky fifteen-year-old Connor Ford sat near the back, nose buried in a dog-eared paperback of The Maltese Falcon. His shaggy brown hair dangled above his eyes, utterly engrossed in the page as Sam Spade barged into the hotel room to confront the conniving trio.

Connor pictured the scene vividly – Spade grilling the manipulative damsel in distress, the twitchy gunman sweating bullets, the corrupt whaler blustering excuses. He savored every hard-boiled line of dialogue, imagining himself in the detective’s shoes bringing down the duplicitous gang. Mystery novels were Connor’s obsession. An escape to enthralling worlds of intrigue that made rural Alabama seem utterly pedestrian in comparison.

Part of Connor’s mind also drifted to the new treehouse taking shape behind his family’s log cabin out in Hickory Hollow. He was hoping to work on the ladder with his dad later that day, once Crane Ford returned home from his shift at the Republic Steel mill over in Gadsden. Some quality father-son bonding while hammering a few more rungs into place would be the perfect capper after an exciting first day of high school.

Just before the bell rang signaling class’s start, a petite girl breezed into the room humming softly to herself. Connor peered discreetly over his book to steal glances at her. She had a navy and yellow floral scarf with intricate designs that swished around her shoulders as she walked. The vibrant colors suited her creative flair. As the girl scanned the unfamiliar faces, Connor noted her slender build, black wavy hair partially pinned up, and graceful neck revealed by the pinned back locks. But it was her eyes – intelligent and penetrating brown orbs darting around the room – that Connor found most striking. She seemed to take in every detail, much like a detective surveilling a scene.

The girl took a seat up front just as the bell chimed, pulling out a sketchpad with frayed edges from her bookbag. She flipped through pages filled with exquisite ink drawings of fantastical creatures and landscapes that seemed to spring from her vivid imagination.

Amy found solace in her art. After her father passed away when she was seven, drawing helped fill the painful void of grief and loneliness. It allowed her to escape into extraordinary worlds of her own making. Her mother’s long nursing shifts often left Amy to fend for herself in their cramped apartment. Sketching let her focus her energies into something productive during those empty hours.

Now at fourteen, filling blank pages was second nature to Amy. Dragons swirling over misty chasms, fairies peeking from blossoming trees, creatures both whimsical and wise…Art was her refuge, and she hoped to stir the same wonder in others someday with her illustrations. For now, her sketchpad was a portal to find beauty and meaning amid the chaos.

Connor guessed this raven-haired girl was about 5’8” – tall for a fourteen-year-old. He wondered if her skillful hands could bring to life these vivid worlds from her imagination. Clearly creativity flowed from her more than analytic thought. But Connor sensed there were hidden depths beneath the surface waiting to be revealed.

Mr. Abernathy, renowned among students for the dramatic reading voices he used when reciting literature aloud, welcomed the class with vigor. He could barely contain his enthusiasm on the first day of teaching his favorite subject – English literature and composition. After reviewing the syllabus and class expectations, Mr. Abernathy announced the first major assignment.

“You’ll be teaming up for a special project analyzing the classic murder mystery novel The Mystery of Howling House,” he declared while pacing energetically up and down the rows of desks. Connor leaned forward with great interest as Mr. Abernathy held up a dog-eared paperback bearing a spooky manor on the cover. Dissecting a complex whodunit filled with suspects, clues, and secrets sounded like a dream project to Connor’s analytical mind. He loved how books served as portals to action-packed imaginary worlds, transporting him away from sleepy rural Alabama if only momentarily.

Meanwhile, the raven-haired girl let out a nearly inaudible sigh at the teacher’s announcement. Connor noticed her sketchbook turned to a fantastical scene of a fairy perched on a toadstool. Clearly her talents lay more with unrestrained creativity rather than decoding the logical puzzles of a murder mystery plot. Connor surmised that her artistic spirit chafed at the structured analytical nature of their assignment.

Mr. Abernathy began reading student names from his roster to announce the pairings for the project. “Connor Ford and Amy Vickers,” he called out. Connor and the dark-haired girl locked eyes briefly across the classroom. So her name was Amy Vickers! She offered a polite smile before turning her gaze away again.

Connor’s curiosity was piqued. What sort of partnership would unfold between this unlikely duo? At first blush, the free-spirited artist and mystery aficionado appeared opposites in many ways. But perhaps their differences in temperament and interests could prove complementary. Connor knew that overcoming assumptions and uncovering hidden truths was key to solving any good detective story.

As Mr. Abernathy detailed how the six week partner project would work, Connor fantasized optimistically about working with the intriguing Amy Vickers. Students could meet in the school and public libraries to collaborate, or even call each other at home to discuss their literary analysis and theories. Connor loved that idea. He hoped that through spending time together, he and Amy would discover some common ground and rapport. At least, Connor found himself eager to sleuth out what made this artistic girl tick. With the right partner, even the most improbable mysteries could be solved. And there was something quietly captivating about Amy Vickers that made Connor confident they could crack this case.

After officially assigning the project partners, Mr. Abernathy launched into an energetic first day lecture on the hallmarks of mystery storytelling – red herrings, motive, dramatic tension and the satisfying payoff of a puzzle solved. Connor sat riveted, absorbing the teacher’s every word, mentally organizing his own thoughts on the genre. Meanwhile, Amy took notes dutifully in her sketchpad, but let her mind wander a bit, occasionally doodling tiny flowers and vines that curled in the margins of the page.

When the bell finally rang, Connor lingered to pepper Mr. Abernathy with enthusiastic questions about his favorite mystery authors and their techniques for intricate plot structure and hiding clues in plain sight. Amy gathered her things and approached the teacher, who was still engrossed in discussion with the exuberant Connor.

“Mr. Abernathy, I’m Amy Vickers,” she interjected gently. The man turned and smiled warmly at Amy. “Wonderful to meet you, my dear! I’m looking forward to your project and please let me know if you need anything.”

Connor suddenly noticed the time and realized he needed to head to Algebra class located at the opposite end of the school. He thanked Mr. Abernathy hurriedly, who gave the boy a knowing wink. “I think you and Ms. Vickers will make quite an illuminating detective team.”

Amy and Connor fell into step walking out the classroom together. “Well looks like we’ll be sleuthing buddies,” Connor said in a chipper voice, adjusting the backpack on his tall frame. Amy glanced sideways and gave a small smirk. “Yeah, should be interesting,” she replied breezily before moving ahead at a quick pace toward the stairwell.

Connor watched Amy get swept up into the swirling crowd of students. He sighed, shaking his head in amusement. This pairing was certainly a mystery unto itself. Hopefully by spending more time together, Connor thought, they would soon start unraveling each other’s true character and seeing eye to eye. After all, he mused philosophically, the most unlikely duos could discover their hidden connections if they just kept an open mind. And Connor was confident that he and the enigmatic Amy Vickers would soon be hot on the trail of camaraderie.

***

It was the first Sunday after school had started, and Connor could hardly contain his eagerness to dive into the partner project for Mr. Abernathy’s class analyzing The Mystery of Howling House. Finally, a school assignment that tapped into his love of suspenseful whodunits! He decided to call Amy Vickers right away that weekend to strategize their approach before Monday. After getting her number from the class directory, Connor dialed Amy’s home phone. She picked up on the third ring.

“Hello?” answered Amy. She sounded bemused at getting an unexpected call from her aloof project partner.

“Hi Amy, it’s Connor Ford!” he began enthusiastically. “We’re partners for Mr. Abernathy’s mystery novel project. I thought I’d call so we can start breaking down our plan of attack.”

“Oh right, the project…” Amy said, her tone polite but less enthused.

Connor pressed on eagerly, “I figure we should split up the reading by chapters and analyze each one for clues, red herrings, potential suspects. We’ll track the clues on a chart to try and crack the case before the big reveal at the end!”

“Uh huh…” said Amy slowly. She paused before responding. “I guess each taking a few chapters makes sense.”

“Exactly! I can take the first three chapters if you want to start from chapter four?” said Connor, grabbing a pen to start divvying up their reading sections. “We should compare our analysis so far in another call midweek. How about Wednesday at 7pm?”

“Sure, Wednesday is fine,” said Amy simply.

An awkward beat passed until Connor spoke again. “Cool. Well, happy reading! This project is gonna be awesome. Let me know if you have any other thoughts for how we should track clues and suspects. The game is afoot!” he said in an exaggerated mysterious tone.

Amy laughed lightly. “Will do. Talk to you Wednesday, Connor.” She seemed relieved their logistical call was winding down.

After exchanging goodbyes, Connor hung up grinning. Calling the intriguing artist to discuss mysteries wasn’t something he ever expected. But their project together had officially begun! Surely, there were many twists and revelations to come, he thought. For now, they had their reading homework cut out for them.

***

On Monday morning, Connor arrived at English class early, eager to continue bonding with his new project partner Amy over their shared assignment. He had brought a stack of his favorite mystery paperbacks to show her. Connor just knew that if he could get Amy hooked on the intrigue and suspense of a good detective story, she would learn to appreciate the genre as much as he did.

When Amy walked in right before the bell, Connor immediately sprang up and approached her desk excitedly. “Amy! Check out some of these awesome mysteries I brought,” he said, fanning the books out eagerly. He described the premise of each one enthusiastically – tales of stolen jewels, murder plots, mistaken identities, and shocking twists.

Amy nodded along politely, though her reserved body language suggested she remained unconvinced.

Connor picked out one paperback titled The Secrets of the Sculptress. “Since you’re such a great artist yourself, I thought you might like this one. It’s about a series of murders where the victims are found next to eerie statues, and an sculptress gets implicated,” he explained enthusiastically.

Amy flipped through the first few pages. “Hmm, sculpture does interest me,” she admitted.

“You should borrow it and tell me what you think,” pressed Connor with a knowing grin.

“Oh, well I’m not usually much of a mystery person…” Amy protested weakly, but Connor insisted.

“I promise it’s got great atmosphere. What do you say, just give it a try?” He raised his eyebrows hopefully.

“Alright, alright,” Amy relented with a small chuckle, tucking the book into her bag.

Later in class, Connor noticed Amy discreetly slip the book out during silent reading time. He watched out of the corner of his eye as she read a few pages and a hint of a smile appeared on her face before she quickly stowed it away again. Yes! He knew his plan was working. Now they just needed to keep up the momentum.

***

Connor was surprised when his phone rang Wednesday evening and the caller ID showed it was Amy. They weren’t scheduled to discuss their project analysis until the weekend.

“Hey Amy, what’s up?” he answered.

“Hi Connor, sorry to call out of the blue,” said Amy. “I know this is random, but I just finished reading The Secrets of the Sculptress and had to tell you how much I liked it!”

Connor pumped his fist silently. His plan was working!

“That’s awesome!” he said excitedly. “I had a feeling you’d enjoy that one with the creative murder methods. What did you think of the plot twists?”

“Honestly, I couldn’t put it down,” admitted Amy. “I was convinced the ex-husband was the killer, so when it turned out to be the best friend…mind blown! You have good taste.”

Connor smiled proudly. “So what stood out about the story?” he asked, curious to get Amy’s unique take.

“The layered red herrings were brilliant. And describing the eerie statues left at crime scenes gave it such haunting atmosphere,” analyzed Amy.

They dove deep discussing motifs, characterization, and use of dramatic irony to build suspense. Connor was thrilled to discover Amy had such thoughtful insights once invested in a mystery.

“Agatha Christie has a similar vibe,” Connor suggested. “Maybe we could read an Hercule Poirot book together next?”

“I’d like that,” said Amy warmly. They were no longer project partners but budding friends.

***

When Connor called Amy one evening later in their project, talk quickly turned to analyzing a suspect from The Mystery of Howling House.

“I’m telling you, that shady groundskeeper is definitely the killer,” argued Connor confidently. “All the clues point to it – the muddy boot prints, how he avoids answering questions, his shed filled with tools that could be weapons. It’s got to be him.”

But Amy wasn’t convinced. “I agree his behavior looks suspicious,” she countered, “but isn’t that a little too obvious? What if it’s all an elaborate red herring to throw us off?”

Connor scoffed playfully. “Amy, the guy practically has ‘murderer’ written on his forehead. You’re thinking too hard!”

“But that’s what the author wants you to think!” rebutted Amy. “What if I’m right and you’re following the trap?”

They debated passionately but enjoyably, each presenting creative theories to defend their position. Connor realized Amy had given him fresh perspective on subtle clues he’d missed initially.

After hashing out their interpretations for over an hour, they agreed it was time to take a break. “You definitely make me think outside the box,” admitted Connor with appreciation.

“And you force me to back up my hunches with evidence,” said Amy. “I guess debating theories is part of the mystery-solving fun.”

They decided to keep gathering clues before reaching a verdict. But both gained newfound respect for the other’s deductive reasoning through their lively discussion.

***

In class later that week, Connor and Amy were partnered up analyzing a new chapter of The Mystery of Howling House.

“Okay, so when the maid discovers the body, her scream alerts the blonde woman who runs downstairs,” summarized Connor.

Amy looked confused. “Blonde woman? I pictured the socialite with fiery red hair.”

“Really?” said Connor, furrowing his brow. “I was so sure it said she was blonde.”

They scanned the passage but found no physical description of the woman’s appearance at all.

“Would you look at that – the author never specifies!” remarked Connor.

Amy grinned. “Well in my mind, she’s a redhead. I can’t unsee it now!”

They shared a laugh at the realization they had each imagined the character so differently.

“Isn’t it funny how our brains just fill in the gaps?” said Amy.

“Yeah, we see the story through our own lens. Discussing it brings that out,” reflected Connor.

From then on, they made a point to share their imagined visuals when analyzing scenes. Both found it enriching to see the story through each other’s eyes while untangling the mysteries together. Their complementary imaginations strengthened the partnership.

***

As the weeks passed, Connor noticed his calls with Amy growing longer and ranging far beyond just analyzing their project. Their conversations flowed easily now as genuine friendship took root. One evening after laughing over memories from middle school, their chat took a more serious turn.

“Can I tell you something?” asked Amy hesitantly.

“Of course, anything,” said Connor warmly, sensing she needed to confide in him.

“Well, you know how I don’t have a dad…” Amy began slowly. Connor listened intently as she described her father’s sudden passing when she was seven. Her mother fell into a deep depression from which she’s still recovering.

Amy spoke of the profound loneliness she endured trying to make sense of it all as a child without parental support. She immersed herself in drawing fantastical worlds to escape a reality that felt unbearable. Art and imagination became her lifeline for channeling overwhelming emotions.

Connor ached imagining young Amy navigating devastating grief and isolation. Her revelation brought their friendship to a deeper level. He thanked her for entrusting him and promised she would never have to feel alone again.

In turn, Connor shared his own experiences of feeling overlooked, despite being an only child. His father’s demanding job at Republic Steel in Gadsden kept him away for long hours, while his mother, though a stay-at-home parent, was constantly engaged in household projects and community commitments. This often left Connor to himself, finding solace and escape in the quiet of his room. There, amidst the pages of mystery novels, he dreamed of being the daring protagonist at the center of every thrilling adventure, a vivid contrast to his own unnoticed existence. Like Amy, he used fiction as a refuge from feeling forgotten at home. He described a vivid imaginary world he created as an eight-year-old to escape and play the hero.

Amy listened thoughtfully, drawing parallels to her own childhood of conjuring whimsical realms.

By the call’s end, their spirits felt lifted after sharing pains of the past. A closeness had formed revealing they understood each other’s loneliness on a profound level. From heartbreak, they both sought solace in stories and creativity. As friendship bloomed, the future seemed a little less bleak. For the first time, they felt truly seen and supported.

***

Connor was nearly finished mapping out the intricate web of clues in The Mystery of Howling House when Amy called one evening brimming with excitement.

“Connor, you won’t believe what I just realized!” she exclaimed. “I picked up on a subtle clue that completely changes my suspicion.”

Intrigued, Connor added “I’m all ears, lay it on me!”

Amy explained she had noticed a small detail about the housekeeper that seemed innocuous at first. On the surface, the woman appeared kindly and devoted to the family she served. But upon re-reading a passage, Amy picked up on the description of her “piercing, darting eyes” and how she seemed to be listening at doorways.

“This makes me think her dutiful persona could be an act, and she’s actually keeping surveillance on the family for devious purposes,” deduced Amy.

Connor was floored. He had completely overlooked those subtle hints about the housekeeper’s surreptitious behavior. He swelled with pride that Amy had the deductive chops to catch what he had missed.

“Amy, that’s brilliant analysis!” he responded enthusiastically. “Now that you lay it out, the housekeeper definitely seems to be hiding something sinister behind her friendly facade. Well done!”

He could practically hear Amy beaming through the phone. “I have to admit, it feels pretty great to solve a piece of the puzzle before the expert Connor Ford!” she said playfully.

“I may never live this down, being bested at my own favorite genre,” laughed Connor heartily. “But seriously Amy, your skills are unmatched. We make an incredible mystery-solving duo.”

As they dove deeper into analyzing Amy’s theory, Connor’s respect for her intellect only grew. He realized they both brought unique strengths that allowed them to crack this case from all angles. He was normally wary of anyone impeding on his territory when it came to mysteries. But with Amy, her success only made him admire her more.

Connor always assumed he would need to be the leader in any detective team-up. Yet here was Amy, proving they worked best discovering clues together. Her brilliance and spunk were undeniable. And she certainly didn’t need his protection – if anything, Connor was starting to think he needed hers.

When the call ended, Connor sat pondering these revelations. Cracking the case was still a priority. But even more enthralling was unraveling the enigma that was Amy Vickers. Bold, whip-smart, innovative…she represented everything Connor sought in a partner. He yearned to tell her just what she meant to him. But first, he had to gather his courage and fully confront the mystery within his own heart.

***

Connor could hardly contain his excitement as he walked into English class. He and Amy had made major breakthroughs over the weekend analyzing clues in The Mystery of Howling House. He couldn’t wait to review their progress. When Amy arrived, they eagerly exchanged their work – Connor’s intricate relationship web mapping out suspects, and Amy’s detailed sketches of potential murder weapons found around the mansion.

Connor marveled at Amy’s drawings of the knife, candlestick, and lead pipe, impressed by the precise scale and details she incorporated. Meanwhile, Amy raved about Connor’s detective skills organizing all the characters and their connections to the murder victim.

As partners, their approaches perfectly complemented each other. While Connor focused on constructing a meticulous logical framework, Amy used her creativity to imagine physical details that brought the story to life.

“Your sketch of the knife is so well-done, I can practically see traces of blood on the handle!” remarked Connor.

Amy smiled, pride and excitement welling up inside her. “And your relationship chart captures subtleties I never even noticed among the characters’ interactions.”

Their teacher, Mr. Abernathy, came by to check their progress. Seeing the comprehensive work spread over their desks, he whistled approvingly. “Outstanding work, you two! Keep this impressive momentum going and you’ll have this mystery solved in no time,” he said before moving on.

Connor and Amy beamed at each other. “High five for being prime sleuthing partners?” asked Connor with a grin.

“Definitely!” laughed Amy, high-fiving him joyfully.

As Amy gazed at Connor, she reflected on how close they had grown tackling this assignment together. She had assumed working with the analytical brainiac would be tedious. But instead, Connor brought out Amy’s sharp side while appreciating her creative spirit.

In just a few weeks, they had formed a true bond over their shared passion for mysteries and thirst for adventure. Amy’s heart swelled realizing how perfectly Connor understood her – all her quirks, her constant racing imagination. When they were together, she felt truly seen.

The future now seemed full of exciting possibilities. Connor helped expand Amy’s world in ways she never expected. She could envision them continuing to make discoveries as an unstoppable sleuthing team. Maybe even a crime-fighting duo! The mystery of romance was also on Amy’s mind more lately. But for now, she would let that juicy question marinate as the next feat of their whodunit awaited.

***

As their 6-week project analyzing The Mystery of Howling House finally neared its end, Connor and Amy scheduled one final call to tie up loose ends before their presentation. They could hardly believe how quickly the time had passed.

Settling into what had become their usual evening phone routine, Connor decided to address the elephant in the room. “Can you believe it’s already been over a month since we started this partnership?” he reflected.

Amy chuckled. “I know, it flew by! Remember how we could barely make eye contact at first?”

“Tell me about it,” laughed Connor. “I assumed we’d have nothing in common. I’m really glad fate had other plans.”

“Me too,” said Amy warmly. “I never expected I’d love solving a mystery with you so much. But you’ve shown me how thrilling puzzles and plot twists can be!”

“And you’ve brought artistry to this analytical process. We’ve made a great team,” said Connor. He hesitated before asking nervously, “So…will we still stay friends now that the project is ending?”

“Absolutely!” said Amy without hesitation. “This is just the beginning. We have lots more mysteries to unravel together.”

Connor was flooded with relief and excitement. They enthusiastically brainstormed celebrating with a mystery movie night, playing detective-themed mini golf, and even investigating local “haunts” together.

As the call wrapped up, both were reluctant to say goodnight, the conversation flowing seamlessly as always. Hanging up, they reflected on how profoundly their perceptions of each other had changed.

Amy marveled at how Connor’s endless curiosity and insight awakened something within her. With him, the world seemed filled with fascination, like through the eyes of her childhood self. She felt stronger and more alive.

Meanwhile, Connor ruminated on Amy’s bravery, integrity, and brilliance. Her vibrancy inspired him daily. For the first time, Connor entertained romantic possibilities he hardly dared dream of before.

Though the mystery analysis was ending, their affinity was undeniable. This partnership had only just begun. Their souls were entwining like two vines reaching for the sun. Tonight marks the start of something new and extraordinary, thought Connor and Amy wistfully under the same moon.

***

The classroom of Boaz High School buzzed with a blend of nerves and excitement as students prepared for their project presentations. Amidst this flurry of activity, Connor and Amy stood out with their calm demeanor and ready smiles.

Connor glanced over their visual aids, meticulously arranged at the front of the room. “Looks like we’re all set, Amy. Think we’ve got everything covered?”

Amy, double-checking their notes, nodded confidently. “Absolutely. Let’s make this presentation one to remember.”

Their dynamic was a seamless blend of Connor’s meticulous attention to detail and Amy’s creative flair. As they waited for their turn, Connor couldn’t help but feel a bittersweet pang. “Can’t believe this is our last presentation together,” he murmured, his voice tinged with a mix of pride and wistfulness.

Amy caught the sentiment in his voice, her smile softening. “We’ve come a long way from our first brainstorming session, haven’t we?”

The chatter in the room began to settle as Mr. Abernathy called the class to attention, signaling the start of the presentations. Connor and Amy exchanged a final, encouraging glance before taking center stage.

Their presentation on ‘The Mystery of Howling House’ was a captivating blend of analysis and storytelling. Connor led the way, outlining the narrative structure and key characters, while Amy delved into the thematic elements and their relevance to modern readers. Their enthusiasm was infectious, drawing the class into the world of mystery and deduction they had so thoroughly explored.

Mr. Abernathy, leaning forward in his seat, nodded appreciatively at their thorough analysis. “Excellent work, Connor and Amy. You’ve certainly set a high bar for the rest of the class.”

As they returned to their seats, the class erupted into applause, some students even whistling in admiration. Connor felt a surge of pride. They had not only met the challenge but had enjoyed every moment of their collaboration.

He leaned closer to Amy, his voice barely above a whisper amidst the ongoing applause. “We nailed it,” he said, a broad grin spreading across his face.

Amy’s eyes sparkled with excitement. “We sure did,” she replied, her voice brimming with satisfaction and a hint of anticipation for what was yet to come.

As the bell rang, signaling the end of class, they gathered their materials, their steps light with the success of their presentation. Though the project was ending, Connor sensed that this was just the beginning of a series of adventures they would embark on together.

***

The last class of the semester at Boaz High School’s English room was a bittersweet affair. The air was filled with the chatter of students excited about holiday plans, yet Connor and Amy shared a quieter moment, reflecting on the journey they had embarked upon together.

“It’s hard to believe our project on ‘The Mystery of Howling House’ is already over,” Amy said, a thoughtful look in her eyes as she idly flipped through her notebook.

Connor nodded, his eyes momentarily drifting to where their project had once stood. “Yeah, it went by in a flash. But, you know, I was thinking, our adventures don’t have to end here,” he said, his voice tinged with optimism.

Amy’s face lit up at his words. “I’d really like that,” she responded earnestly. “We do make a pretty awesome team.”

As Mr. Abernathy wrapped up the class, reminding everyone to pick up their graded projects, Connor turned to Amy with a newfound resolve. “I’ve got an idea for our next adventure. There’s this local legend about a hidden treasure in Boaz. What do you think about us trying to solve it?”

Her laughter echoed warmly in the room. “Count me in, Detective,” she said playfully, extending her hand.

Connor shook her hand with a smile. “Perfect! Let’s start our planning at Bozeman’s Diner next week. I hear their milkshakes are the best thinking fuel.”

They spent the final moments of class discussing their plans, with Connor suggesting they explore some secret trails he knew. Amy eagerly agreed, thrilled at the prospect of their continued escapades.

As the bell rang, signaling the end of class and the beginning of a new chapter, they walked out together, their conversation flowing seamlessly. Stepping into the corridor bathed in the warm afternoon light, Connor felt a profound sense of anticipation.

He glanced at Amy, feeling a deep connection forged through their shared experiences. “From Howling House to Boaz and beyond, our adventures are just beginning,” he said with a heartfelt smile.

Arm in arm, they left Boaz High School, stepping eagerly into a future filled with mystery and camaraderie. In each other, they had found not just a partner in crime-solving but a kindred spirit for life’s many adventures.

Novel Excerpts–The Boaz Scorekeeper, Chapter 60

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.
The Boaz Scorekeeper, written in 2017, is my second novel. I'll post it, a chapter a day, over the next few weeks.

Neither one of us said anything as I drove west on Cox Gap Road.  When I turned left on Mountainboro Road, Gina said that she was growing weary of staying with Wade. She said that he was becoming more erratic and unpredictable.

“Explain what you mean.”  I said.

“He’s started carrying a gun.  Something he’s never done.  He is worried sick that something is going to happen to him.  Yesterday, he came home for lunch and said he had spent nearly all morning looking for Fred, including calling his cell phone.  Wade said he had gone to the Bank and spoken with Fritz.  He said Fred had gone to Gatlinburg and should be back by Tuesday.  Wade said that there was something strange about how Fritz looked at him, almost like he was lying.  His eyes darted around and he never did look Wade directly in the eye.”

“Did Wade say why he was wanting to talk with Fred?”  I said.

“He didn’t say exactly but I feel it’s about how James has been acting toward him and Fred.  You remember how mad James was on the transcript when he found out that Club Eden was still selling pretty Hispanic girls to the Russian mob.”  Gina said.

“Have you formulated a plan?  A plan for where you are going, what you will be doing?”  I said.

“I have an aunt in Atlanta, Mother’s sister.  Her two children, my cousins, are also there and own a florist.  You can tell by my blouse that I love flowers.”  Gina said looking over at Micaden and smiling ever so slightly.

“You know you will have to come back, maybe more than once, after we file suit.  The court could order mediation before a trial.  And, either separately or as part of mediation, there will likely be settlement negotiations you will need to attend.”

“Oh, another thing I was going to tell you.  Wade said he has a theory that Fred is gone for good and that, if that is true, there is no doubt that Boaz has a serial killer on the loose who is targeting the Flaming Five.  He said he and James were really in a terrible place.”

“From what I’ve heard, John and Randall’s disappearances could be something as simple as a disgruntled parent.  In a way, it sounds unbelievable that a father would go to such an extreme of abducting his son’s coach.  All to pay him back for his son’s lack of playing time or acceptable attention during Bible study?  Of course, you have heard many stories of people committing horrific crimes over seemingly insignificant things.”  I said.

“You’re probably right.”

“Can I ask you a question?”  I said to Gina.

“Of course.”

“You say you are ready to leave Wade, that you are growing very tired of your relationship with him, yet you continue to wear his wedding ring on your finger. I was just wondering why that is.”

“It’s a valid question.  First, the simple answer is a strategic one.  If I pulled it off Wade would notice and would become suspicious.  The second reason is a little more complex.  You know that Wade and I didn’t marry because we were in love.  Our lives together started with a shotgun wedding as I’ve told you.  This multi-diamond cluster that I’m wearing isn’t my first ring.  Wade’s parents bought us our first rings, just matching bands, just for the wedding, just for show.  You know, love is strange.  I would never have believed that I could be forced into loving Wade.  But, in a real sense, that’s exactly what happened.  Our move to Tuscaloosa right after the wedding was probably the best present we received.  There, we learned to depend on each other.  Wade, back then, was sweet, kind, considerate, much different away from his four buddies.  Four years later, just before we graduated, Wade proposed to me at Denny Chimes on bended knee and placed this ring on my finger.  That night, we went back to the apartment and made love like we never had.  It wasn’t just sex, it was real love.  The next morning Wade asked me if I was still okay with the ring and his idea of proposing as his way of showing me he wanted our lives to have real meaning as a married couple.  I told him I loved it all and that I would wear his ring forever.”  Gina said.

“One thing I have learned since High School is to be careful about swearing and believing that I would never change my mind.  When I was a kid growing up I was, as they say, knee deep into faith and my belief in God and Christ.  To say the least, that has changed radically.”  I said.

I pulled in front of the Gadsden Post Office telling Gina I had a few things I needed to mail.  She stayed in my truck.  With gloveless hands, I carried the ransom folder inside and let the two smaller envelopes slide into the outgoing mail chute being careful not to touch them.

I then drove us to the courthouse and told Gina I would only be a few minutes.  Again, she waited in my truck as I went to the Clerk’s office to kill some time.  I didn’t have any specific business I needed to attend to.  I simply wanted to show Gina I had a reason to drive to Gadsden other than going to the Post Office.

On the drive home, I decided to go the back way through Noccalula Falls.  We talked very little on the way back.  We did talk some about the beautiful Fall colors on the trees surrounding us as we made our way up the mountain.  A hundred yards before I reached Dogwood Trail on my left, I decided I would show Gina my secret office at Oak Hollow.  There was no doubt this was a bad idea.  I had never even mentioned it to anyone else, but someway Gina had broken through my defensiveness and become a trustworthy friend.  What could it hurt?  No one would ever know.  I truly had no ulterior motives, even though I was attracted to her.  I would never have attempted anything sexual or otherwise intimate.

“You got time to see where I do my really serious writing, both for work and for fun?”  I asked.

“Sure, you got a tree house?”

I turned left onto Dogwood Trail and was about half way there when I saw Franklin and Danny Ericson, John’s father and son, standing in the yard just off Blanton Riggins front porch.  His wife, Shelia, waved as I drove by.

“I really hope they didn’t see me.”  Gina said melting down into her seat.

“I suspect the Ericson’s were there talking to the Riggins about selling their house.  I heard a few weeks ago that Blanton was retiring from Goodyear and he and his wife wanted to move to Orange Beach.”

I drove on to Oak Hollow, unlocked and opened the gate, and drove down to the house.  My mind was about to explode.  First, I should never have come here with Gina even without being seen.  Second, I was confident that, at a minimum, the Ericson’s recognized me simply by my truck.  Third, if they saw Gina, it wouldn’t be long until Wade and James knew.  And, most likely, Wade would think Gina and I were having an affair.  But, the most explosive thought I had was I had voluntarily invited a future detective to come snooping around the one place I had, up until now, done everything I could to keep secret.

Gina and I spent thirty minutes inside the house with me showing her a stack of unpublished short stories.  She had been more interested in the wood-burning cook-stove in the kitchen than anything.  I made up a story about how I needed to keep this place a secret and had her promise she wouldn’t tell anyone.  When I told Gina that even Karla didn’t know about Oak Hollow, I could see she felt I saw her as a very close friend.

When we returned to Hickory Hollow, I asked Gina to let me know when she was safe in Atlanta.  I urged her to keep me posted of everything that happened between her and Wade.  She opened her car door, but before she got in, she walked over to me and hugged me once again saying, “I am so glad you are my attorney, but most of all for becoming a faithful friend.  I’m going to miss you.”

I told her I felt the same.  She walked back to her car and drove off.  It was the last time I saw Gina alive.

12/13/23 Biking & Listening

Here’s today’s bike ride metrics. Temperature at beginning of ride: 56 degrees. Bright, warm sunny day.


Photos from today’s ride:

None today.

Why I ride:

Biking is something I both love and hate. The conflicting emotions arise from the undeniable physical effort it demands. However, this exertion is precisely what makes it an excellent form of exercise. Most days, I dedicate over an hour to my cycling routine, and in doing so, I’ve discovered a unique opportunity to enjoy a good book or podcast. The rhythmic pedaling and the wind against my face create a calming backdrop that allows me to fully immerse myself in the content. In these moments, the time spent on the bike seems worthwhile, as I can’t help but appreciate the mental and physical rewards it offers.

I especially like having ridden. The post-biking feeling is one of pure satisfaction. The endorphin rush, coupled with a sense of accomplishment, makes the initial struggle and fatigue worthwhile. As I dismount and catch my breath, I relish the sensation of having conquered the challenge, both physically and mentally. It’s a reminder that the things we sometimes love to hate can often be the ones that bring us the most fulfillment. In the end, the love-hate relationship with biking only deepens my appreciation for the sport, as it continually pushes me to overcome my own limitations and embrace the rewards that follow the effort.


Why you should ride:

Encourages Relaxation:

Cycling is not just a form of physical exercise; it also has a profound ability to encourage relaxation. Here are various ways in which cycling contributes to a relaxed state of mind and body:

  • Physical Activity and Stress Reduction: Engaging in physical activities like cycling can reduce the body’s stress responses. Exercise triggers the release of endorphins, the body’s natural painkillers and mood elevators, which promote relaxation. The physical effort of cycling also helps to use up the energy created by stress, aiding in calming the body.
  • Rhythmic Pedaling as a Meditative Practice: The repetitive nature of cycling, with its steady, rhythmic pedaling, can have a meditative effect. This rhythmic motion can help focus the mind, drawing attention away from stressful thoughts and allowing a sense of calm.
  • Outdoor and Nature Exposure: Cycling outdoors, especially in natural or scenic settings, can enhance relaxation. Being in nature is known to reduce stress and promote a sense of peace. The sights, sounds, and smells of the outdoors can be very soothing.
  • Mindfulness and Presence: Cycling requires a level of present-moment awareness, which is a key aspect of mindfulness. Practicing mindfulness has been shown to reduce stress and promote relaxation. When cycling, the focus on the immediate environment and bodily sensations can help achieve this state.
  • Cardiovascular Health Benefits: Regular cycling improves cardiovascular health, which can help in reducing tension in the body. A healthier heart and circulatory system can contribute to a more relaxed state overall.
  • Reduces Mental Clutter: A bike ride offers a break from daily routines and responsibilities, providing an opportunity to clear the mind. This mental break can be refreshing and relaxing, especially after a long day or during stressful periods.
  • Social Relaxation: For those who enjoy group rides, the social aspect of cycling can be relaxing. Social interactions and the sense of community found in cycling groups can contribute to overall relaxation and well-being.
  • Achievement and Satisfaction: Completing a challenging ride or reaching a cycling goal can bring about a sense of achievement and satisfaction. This positive feeling can promote a relaxed state, as it counters feelings of stress and anxiety.
  • End of Ride Relaxation Response: After a cycling session, the body often experiences a natural relaxation response. The decrease in physical activity coupled with the sense of accomplishment can lead to a profound state of relaxation.
  • Improves Sleep Quality: As cycling improves sleep quality, it indirectly promotes relaxation. Better sleep means the body is better rested and more capable of handling stress, leading to a more relaxed state during waking hours.

In summary, cycling’s ability to encourage relaxation is multifaceted, combining physical, mental, and emotional elements. By incorporating regular cycling into one’s lifestyle, it’s possible to cultivate a more relaxed state of being, beneficial for overall health and well-being.


Please watch

Here’s a couple of links to groups I like. Hopefully, they’ll encourage you to start riding a bike, no matter your age.

Cycling for those aged 70+(opens in a new tab)


Solitary Cycling(opens in a new tab)


My bike:

A Rockhopper by Specialized. I purchased it November 2021 from Venture Out in Guntersville; Mike is top notch! So is the bike. The ‘old’ man seat was salvaged from an old Walmart bike. Seat replaced with new one from Venture Out.


What I’m listening to:

NONFICTION

20 Master Plots: And How to Build Them, by Ronald B. Tobias

Give your story a solid foundation – a plot that engages readers from start to finish!

The best stories linger in the hearts and minds of readers for decades. These tales gain their power through plots that connect with the audience on both an emotional and intellectual level.

Ronald B. Tobias details these 20 time-tested plots. Each is discussed and analyzed, illustrating how a successful plot integrates all the elements of a story. Tobias then reveals how to use these plots effectively in your own work.

Tobias then goes to the next level, describing how to choose and develop plot in fiction. He reveals how to craft plot for any subject matter so that you develop your work evenly and effectively. As a result, your fiction will be more cohesive and convincing, making your story unforgettable for readers everywhere.

Blinkist nonfiction book summaries:

None today.

Podcasts:

Waking Up app series/courses:

None today.

FICTION

Novel:

 

Amazon abstract:

NATIONAL BESTSELLER • The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo series continues: Lisbeth Salander must face the most important battle of her life, and will finally put her past to rest in this thriller that will “leave Salander’s legion of followers clamoring for more” (The Wall Street Journal). • Also known as the Millennium series

Mikael Blomkvist is trying to reach Lisbeth Salander—the fierce, unstoppable girl with the dragon tattoo. He needs her help unraveling the identity of a man who died with Blomkvist’s phone number in his pocket—a man who does not exist in any official records and whose garbled last words hinted at knowledge that would be dangerous to important people. But Lisbeth has disappeared. She’s sold her apartment in Stockholm. She’s gone dark. She’s told no one where she is. And no one is aware that at long last she’s got her primal enemy, her twin sister, Camilla, squarely in her sights.

Look for the latest book in the Girl with the Dragon Tattoo series, The Girl in the Eagle’s Talons, coming soon!


Blinkest fiction book summaries:

None today.

Music:

None today.


Here’s a few photos from previous riding adventures:

Novel Excerpts–The Boaz Scorekeeper, Chapter 59

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.
The Boaz Scorekeeper, written in 2017, is my second novel. I'll post it, a chapter a day, over the next few weeks.

I don’t know if it was Fred’s justice or the fact it was Halloween night, but I didn’t sleep well at all.  I got up and came into the kitchen for coffee just as Karla was leaving for school.  She kissed me and as she was walking out the side door told me Kaden was with Lewis, that he had gotten home around 6:00 yesterday afternoon and the two of them were taking a long weekend to fish and relax at our cabin in Guntersville.

I had purchased it last winter.  It was owned by a client who was brighter than most when it came to pre-divorce planning.  He said he believed it was inevitable that he and his wife divorce but he was going to postpone it for two years or so to extract some assets from their marital estate.  The cabin on Guntersville Lake was something I would not have intentionally sought after but I bought it for about half what it was worth.  Now, standing at the sink with my coffee, Karla backing out of the garage, I realized that I had done a smart thing making the cabin’s seller sign an acknowledgment that he had come to me for only a consultation and that I could not be his attorney in any upcoming divorce action.  The seller never got a chance to file a divorce action against his wife.  She beat him to the punch last month.  I didn’t know much about their case other than what was published in the Alabama Public Records database, but I did know that she was accusing her husband of absconding with over a million dollars.  Yet, he hadn’t been served a copy of the complaint.  It seemed no one knew where he was.

I walked to my closet and pulled down an old laptop computer and mini-printer that I had used to load the ransom files on from my office computer, the one I had disposed of just in the nick of time to avoid the unpleasant but natural result of the search warrant a few weeks ago.  After setting them on the round table in my study I drafted a ransom note to Fritz, and Fred’s wife Phyllis.

It read:

“Fred has been kidnapped and is dead.  Under normal circumstances you, as Fred’s loving family, would not be motivated to pay a ransom.  However, this situation is anything but normal.

Unlike you, I know a few things that can help you protect a large portion of the sizable estate you have been able to illegally accumulate.  First, you have no choice but to follow my directions.  Exactly.  You may have some knowledge that John’s family didn’t comply with the requests in my letter.  This disobedience cost John his life.  In your situation, if you fail to comply perfectly, not only will you lose your life, but also the lives of Fred’s two children, Fulton and Stella, will come to a dreadful end.

Here’s what you must do to retain life:

1. Before Saturday, November 4, 2017, wire transfer $4,000,000 to Fidelity Bank Limited in Grand Cayman, Cayman Islands.  This bank’s physical address is: Cayman Financial Centre, 36A Dr. Roy’s Drive, Grand Cayman, KYI-1103, Cayman Islands.  The bank’s Routing Number is 063012136.  You are to have these funds deposited to Account Number 90003070.  Please note that I do not care whether you withdraw these funds from the Billingsley estate or Club Eden.

2. Contribute $500,000 towards the project that is under development on the old Boaz Spinning Mills property.  See Micaden Tanner.  He represents a client who has recently purchased this property from the Radford family.

3. Assist U.S. Attorney Greg Gambol with his investigation of the City of Boaz, Club Eden, Wade Tillman, James Adams, and all other members of Club Eden.  Mr. Gambol, as well as Micaden Tanner, have been made aware of the sex trafficking scheme that has been going on in Boaz for the past five years.  These two attorneys worked together years ago in Atlanta.  Mr. Gambol is open to granting you full immunity in exchange for your full cooperation.  He will be contacting you very soon.

4. Testify, if asked by either the prosecution or a criminal defense attorney for James Adams, that you witnessed him threaten to kill both Fred and Wade.  You should know that several meetings between you and other members of Club Eden were recorded and that I have a copy of such tapes. 

Of course, you can involve family, friends, police, and other authorities with this situation.  That is completely up to you.  However, you are bright enough to realize such involvement will not be in your best interest, nor that of Fulton and Stella’s.”

I put on a pair of latex gloves, printed out the two letters, and addressed two envelopes.  One to Fred’s wife Phyllis, and the other one to Fritz.  I folded and inserted the letters into the envelopes, and sealed the flaps using an Aqua Ball.  I affixed two stamps to the envelopes being extra cautious not to lick them.  I then inserted these two envelopes into one manila folder and was about to leave for the Gadsden Post Office when Gina called.

“Micaden, the scorekeeper.”

“I’m outside in your driveway.  Can I see you?”

“I’m about to make a quick trip to Gadsden.  You want to ride along?”  I said without any thought at all.  What could it hurt?  Surely, no one would see us.  What if they did?  I am Gina’s attorney.

I gathered up my briefcase and the manila folder containing the two envelopes and walked outside.  Gina was leaning against her nearly new Impala in blue-jeans and a sleeveless flowered blouse.  Her formerly blonde hair, now black and curly, with gray streaks, was pulled back behind her head.  I couldn’t help but notice how good she still looked at 63.

12/12/23 Biking & Listening

Here’s today’s bike ride metrics. Temperature at beginning of ride: 47 degrees. Bright sunny day; more pleasant than yesterday.


Photos from today’s ride:

None today.

Why I ride:

Biking is something I both love and hate. The conflicting emotions arise from the undeniable physical effort it demands. However, this exertion is precisely what makes it an excellent form of exercise. Most days, I dedicate over an hour to my cycling routine, and in doing so, I’ve discovered a unique opportunity to enjoy a good book or podcast. The rhythmic pedaling and the wind against my face create a calming backdrop that allows me to fully immerse myself in the content. In these moments, the time spent on the bike seems worthwhile, as I can’t help but appreciate the mental and physical rewards it offers.

I especially like having ridden. The post-biking feeling is one of pure satisfaction. The endorphin rush, coupled with a sense of accomplishment, makes the initial struggle and fatigue worthwhile. As I dismount and catch my breath, I relish the sensation of having conquered the challenge, both physically and mentally. It’s a reminder that the things we sometimes love to hate can often be the ones that bring us the most fulfillment. In the end, the love-hate relationship with biking only deepens my appreciation for the sport, as it continually pushes me to overcome my own limitations and embrace the rewards that follow the effort.


Why you should ride:

Encourages Relaxation:

Cycling is not just a form of physical exercise; it also has a profound ability to encourage relaxation. Here are various ways in which cycling contributes to a relaxed state of mind and body:

  • Physical Activity and Stress Reduction: Engaging in physical activities like cycling can reduce the body’s stress responses. Exercise triggers the release of endorphins, the body’s natural painkillers and mood elevators, which promote relaxation. The physical effort of cycling also helps to use up the energy created by stress, aiding in calming the body.
  • Rhythmic Pedaling as a Meditative Practice: The repetitive nature of cycling, with its steady, rhythmic pedaling, can have a meditative effect. This rhythmic motion can help focus the mind, drawing attention away from stressful thoughts and allowing a sense of calm.
  • Outdoor and Nature Exposure: Cycling outdoors, especially in natural or scenic settings, can enhance relaxation. Being in nature is known to reduce stress and promote a sense of peace. The sights, sounds, and smells of the outdoors can be very soothing.
  • Mindfulness and Presence: Cycling requires a level of present-moment awareness, which is a key aspect of mindfulness. Practicing mindfulness has been shown to reduce stress and promote relaxation. When cycling, the focus on the immediate environment and bodily sensations can help achieve this state.
  • Cardiovascular Health Benefits: Regular cycling improves cardiovascular health, which can help in reducing tension in the body. A healthier heart and circulatory system can contribute to a more relaxed state overall.
  • Reduces Mental Clutter: A bike ride offers a break from daily routines and responsibilities, providing an opportunity to clear the mind. This mental break can be refreshing and relaxing, especially after a long day or during stressful periods.
  • Social Relaxation: For those who enjoy group rides, the social aspect of cycling can be relaxing. Social interactions and the sense of community found in cycling groups can contribute to overall relaxation and well-being.
  • Achievement and Satisfaction: Completing a challenging ride or reaching a cycling goal can bring about a sense of achievement and satisfaction. This positive feeling can promote a relaxed state, as it counters feelings of stress and anxiety.
  • End of Ride Relaxation Response: After a cycling session, the body often experiences a natural relaxation response. The decrease in physical activity coupled with the sense of accomplishment can lead to a profound state of relaxation.
  • Improves Sleep Quality: As cycling improves sleep quality, it indirectly promotes relaxation. Better sleep means the body is better rested and more capable of handling stress, leading to a more relaxed state during waking hours.

In summary, cycling’s ability to encourage relaxation is multifaceted, combining physical, mental, and emotional elements. By incorporating regular cycling into one’s lifestyle, it’s possible to cultivate a more relaxed state of being, beneficial for overall health and well-being.


Please watch

Here’s a couple of links to groups I like. Hopefully, they’ll encourage you to start riding a bike, no matter your age.

Cycling for those aged 70+(opens in a new tab)


Solitary Cycling(opens in a new tab)


My bike:

A Rockhopper by Specialized. I purchased it November 2021 from Venture Out in Guntersville; Mike is top notch! So is the bike. The ‘old’ man seat was salvaged from an old Walmart bike. Seat replaced with new one from Venture Out.


What I’m listening to:

NONFICTION

20 Master Plots: And How to Build Them, by Ronald B. Tobias

Give your story a solid foundation – a plot that engages readers from start to finish!

The best stories linger in the hearts and minds of readers for decades. These tales gain their power through plots that connect with the audience on both an emotional and intellectual level.

Ronald B. Tobias details these 20 time-tested plots. Each is discussed and analyzed, illustrating how a successful plot integrates all the elements of a story. Tobias then reveals how to use these plots effectively in your own work.

Tobias then goes to the next level, describing how to choose and develop plot in fiction. He reveals how to craft plot for any subject matter so that you develop your work evenly and effectively. As a result, your fiction will be more cohesive and convincing, making your story unforgettable for readers everywhere.

Blinkist nonfiction book summaries:

Ethics, by Baruch Spinoza

Nausea, by Jean-Paul Sartre

Read People Like a Book, by Patrick King

Podcasts:

Waking Up app series/courses:

None today.

FICTION

Novel:

 

Amazon abstract:

NATIONAL BESTSELLER • The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo series continues: Lisbeth Salander must face the most important battle of her life, and will finally put her past to rest in this thriller that will “leave Salander’s legion of followers clamoring for more” (The Wall Street Journal). • Also known as the Millennium series

Mikael Blomkvist is trying to reach Lisbeth Salander—the fierce, unstoppable girl with the dragon tattoo. He needs her help unraveling the identity of a man who died with Blomkvist’s phone number in his pocket—a man who does not exist in any official records and whose garbled last words hinted at knowledge that would be dangerous to important people. But Lisbeth has disappeared. She’s sold her apartment in Stockholm. She’s gone dark. She’s told no one where she is. And no one is aware that at long last she’s got her primal enemy, her twin sister, Camilla, squarely in her sights.

Look for the latest book in the Girl with the Dragon Tattoo series, The Girl in the Eagle’s Talons, coming soon!


Blinkest fiction book summaries:

Sophie’s World, by Jostein Gaarder

Music:

Adele –Greatest Hits


Here’s a few photos from previous riding adventures:

Novel Excerpts–The Boaz Scorekeeper, Chapter 58

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.
The Boaz Scorekeeper, written in 2017, is my second novel. I'll post it, a chapter a day, over the next few weeks.

I left him there and went for my four-wheeler.  I had brought it on a small trailer behind my truck.  Fred was a little smaller than John but still a big challenge to get him stood up, leaned over, and strapped to the four-wheeler. I had bolted a half-sheet of thick plywood crosswise and installed six hooks to use bungee cords to keep Fred in place. I also cuffed Fred’s hands.  I grabbed my duffel bag out of the cab of my truck and set off toward Aurora Lake.  I drove past the cabin glancing to my left to see the fire pit and tent still in tack.  I wondered whether the sons of the Flaming Five had stepped into the shoes of their Fathers spending their weekends here with chosen females, those from in and out of town.  I crossed the little creek that was fed by the runoff from the dam and headed northwesterly up our hiking trail.  I had to stop three times to remove dead or dying trees from my narrow path.  During the last 150 yards or so a streak of fear raced through my mind.  I was now knee deep in the most dangerous of all my Flaming Five missions.  It was daylight.  In effect, I was cornered.  My truck and Fred’s Camaro were setting by the cabin for anyone to see if they drove through the unlocked gate and down Club Eden’s driveway.  I was in possession of a semi-unconscious body strapped down with cuffed hands.  Someone could be out on the lake or hiking around it.  I concluded that I was taking too great a risk for any possible benefit that might someday arise from disposing of Fred here at Club Eden. Within fifteen minutes from the time I had tasered Fred, we were at the southwestern shore of Aurora Lake, about 100 yards from the dam and forty feet or so from my aluminum boat. 

I walked to it and pulled back all the limbs and brush I had piled on it.  I then slid it over to the shore’s edge.  I returned to Fred and started to get him up but decided to leave him lying there on his back.  He was beginning to moan just a little.  I took two small fold-out chairs and my duffel bag I had strapped to the front of the four-wheeler and set the chairs about five feet from Fred.  I sat down in one and unzipped the duffel bag and started laying out the contents on the other.  I had brought a high-quality tape recorder and camera. I had also brought my depth finder for my boat and a small notebook that contained a list of questions I had for Fred.  I now waited for him to return to planet Earth.

It was almost 4:30 p.m. when Fred turned his head toward me and said, “where’s Wade?”  For a first statement from one in physical custody, lying flat on one’s back, I thought Fred would have said something like, “what the hell are you doing?” or maybe “Tanner, you have lost your mind, let me loose.”   I told Fred that Wade was not coming and that he was headed to the bottom of the lake unless he complied with my requests.  I watched his eyes look around and lock onto the boat that was barely visible from the angle he lay.

I stood up and walked over to him and told him that I would let him sit up in a chair if he would behave.  He nodded his head.  I removed the bungee cords and helped him up and off the plywood deck. I sat him down in the chair I had been sitting in and pulled a lightweight set of chains and shackles from my duffel bag.  I alternated putting them on and removing the handcuffs.  I looped an extra chain around a six-inch diameter pine tree that was directly behind where Fred was sitting and used a small pad lock to secure it to the chain between his two shackled hands. 

“Why are you doing this Tanner?”

“Are you going to play that lame card?  You know exactly why.  But, I’ll play along for a bit.” I flipped on the tape recorder and told Fred he had to answer me out loud when I asked him a question. “Do you remember our High School graduation party we had here at Club Eden?”

“Yes.”

“What crimes did you and the other members of the Flaming Five commit that night and early Saturday morning?”

“I had nothing to do with any of that.  You know me and Wade stayed with you at the fire pit while James, Randall, and John took the girls and left.”

“Fred, playtime is over.  Here is how this is going to work.  I ask questions and you tell the truth, the full truth, unshaded in any way.  If you lie to me, and I certainly will know when you are lying, I will smack you across the face with this shovel.”  I pulled out an Army surplus shovel with a two-foot foldout handle.  I mimicked how I would strike him.

“I am as guilty as anyone for what happened that night.  After we all took turns raping Wendi and Cindi we realized we had to have a plan and the plan gave no option for them to survive.  Please know we had not planned on raping them.  In our arrogance, we believed they would willingly consent to having sex with us.  We were wrong.”

“So, do you admit raping and murdering Wendi and Cindi Murray the night of May 25, 1972?”

“Yes, but I didn’t actually kill them.” Fred said.

“And, who killed their parents, Bill and Nellie Murray?”

“I don’t know. I swear I don’t know anything about that.”

I used about a quarter of my strength and swung the shovel I was still holding.  It struck the right side of Fred’s face and his chair tipped over while his body leaned against the edge of the plywood.  I set him back up and noticed a rather shallow cut running from his right eye down to his chin.  It was bleeding, but not badly.

“Okay, enough of the shovel.  We all met two weeks or so before the beginning of your trial and created a plan.  One part of the plan was to offer a million dollars to settle.  You well know that offer was rejected.  The other part of the plan was to get rid of the Murrays.  John and Randall came up with the idea.  David and Walter carried it out.”

For the next thirty minutes Fred gave me details on how the Murray’s were killed, how David and Walter broke into their house Friday night while they were at the prayer meeting.  How David and Walter had waited on them, how they surprised them, tied them up, injected them with the cyanide, and placed them in their bed.

Fred also told me about how Club Eden had carried out three other murders, all by ancestors of the Flaming Five.  He told me the stories of murders taking place in 1901, 1926, 1946, and 1973.  All men who were threatening the status quo that had to be maintained at all costs.  In 1901, it was Leroy Jones and his son Toby, the son and grandson of an ex-slave.  Leroy and family had moved to Boaz from Gadsden.  In 1926, it was David Howsley and Baynard Reed, a homosexual couple who had moved from San Francisco to Boaz to operate a flower shop David had inherited.  In 1946, Fred shared the story of Vincent Prader, the decorated war hero that Harold Maples had told me about.  The man who threatened to build a Volkswagen automobile dealership.  The final murder Fred confessed to was Shawn Taylor and his father.  Shawn was probably the only reason I was not convicted back in 1973.  This young boy had been brave enough to tell my jury that he had seen James, John, and Randall with Wendi and Cindi at the Dairy Queen, and drive off in their little blue Plymouth.  Fred told of how David Adams and Raymond Radford had compromised the brakes on Shawn’s father’s car.  This led to their crash and the death of this father and son, which, in effect, wrecked the prosecutors murder case against the Flaming Five.

Fred also admitted, after I showed him copies of several bank account statements, the Club’s illegal business activities including payoffs to several local businessmen.  After another shovel blast to his head, Fred told me in detail how the Club, with help from four select Boaz Police officers, were seizing and selling pretty Hispanic girls to the Russian mob.  I suppose it was the threat of the shovel laying across my lap that made Fred volunteer some things I hadn’t even asked about.  He told me how the Flaming Five and their fathers had rigged Deacon elections at First Baptist Church of Christ and City Councilmen elections for the past fifty years or so.

At 5:45 p.m., I gave Fred a drink of water from my canteen.  I let him stand while I took about thirty or forty pictures from several angles and multiple distances.  I then repacked the duffel bag and secured it, along with the two chairs, back to the front of the four-wheeler.  I placed the shovel into the boat.  I then unlocked the extra chain and removed it from behind the tree.  I ordered Fred into the boat after I had pulled it into the lake.  At first, he refused, but then I reached for the shovel and he stepped over into the boat.  I had Fred sit at the back of the boat while I pushed it out into the lake climbing in as the water deepened. 

After rowing a few hundred yards, I found my spot.  I had strapped the depth finder to my waist as I had secured the duffel bag.  Two weeks ago, when I had delivered the boat I had found a spot about 150 feet from the dam.  The water was 80 feet deep.  When I stopped rowing, I asked Fred if he wanted a quick death or one more like what Wendi and Cindi suffered from the force of a shovel.  By this time Fred was resigned to his death.  He knew there was no need in begging me.  While rowing to this spot I had told him about how John and Randall had died.  I even described in some detail how John looked after my fifth and final shovel blow.  “Shoot me, make it quick.”

I did.  With my 45 and my silencer that I also had removed from the duffel bag.  It seemed there was always something I hadn’t planned for.  I had brought six cement blocks with me when I delivered the boat.  Securing them to Fred’s body wasn’t difficult at all.  But, getting him out of the boat into the lake while not tipping over was a challenge.  I finally figured it out.  After I crammed his body into a body bag I had purchased online, I attached three life jackets to his wrapped body and, with considerable strain, pushed him into the lake.  I then could secure the six cement blocks with chains to his body.  Finally, I cut away the life jacket straps and his body immediately sank.

I rowed the boat across the lake to Jeff Marks’ property, got out and pulled it onto the shore.  I then hiked back down to the dam and across to where I had left my four-wheeler at the edge of the lake.  I loaded everything and headed back down the trail to the cabin at Club Eden.  By 6:30 p.m., I had the four-wheeler loaded on the trailer behind my truck.  I backed into the turning around spot and felt the second wave of terror stream through my body.  I had failed to removed Fred’s car keys before I dumped his body.  My once dangerous mission had now transformed into extremely dangerous territory.  I put on gloves and searched Fred’s Camaro.  No extra set of keys.  But, there was a cell phone on his console.  I activated it and noticed he didn’t have it secure.  No password required.  There were three missed calls.  All from his wife Phyllis.  I was glad there were no calls from Wade or James.

I thought about keeping his phone but realized what a mistake that would be.  Phones were now highly traceable.  I returned it to the car’s console.  I had no choice but to leave Fred’s red-hot Camaro setting right where it was.  No doubt it would be discovered in, at best, a few days.  Hopefully, police and investigators would not look for Fred’s body at Aurora Lake.  Idiot me, who was I kidding?  There would be an extensive search of this area and no doubt someone would discover many clues, such as the trees that had been thrown back from the hiking trail. The indentations in the grass where Fred and I sat in folded chairs having our little conversation.  Blood droplets would no doubt be on the ground right behind where the four-wheeler was parked.  I was confident that divers would be brought in and the lake would be searched.  It would be just a matter of time until Fred’s body was found.

I left in a hurry and raced to Oak Hollow, dropped off the four-wheeler and trailer and connected to the boat trailer.  I drove back to Jeff Marks, loaded the boat, and returned to Oak Hollow to drop it off.   It was almost 8:00 p.m. when I returned to the office, changed clothes, and drove toward Hickory Hollow. Then, a daring idea sprouted in my head.  I knew what I had to do.

I drove on past the turnoff to Hickory Hollow and on to Dogwood Trail and turned right.  I opened the gate at Oak Hollow and drove to the barn and backed up to the sixteen-foot flatbed trailer that was under the shed on the left side of the barn.  I connected the trailer to my truck bumper and grabbed two come-a-longs and a thirty-foot chain hanging on the wall in the center of the barn. My actions this day were now approaching the stupid zone.

I drove back to the cabin at Club Eden.  The gate on Shady Grove Road was still open.  When I was rounding the final curve, my headlights caught the front of the cabin and the door stood wide open.  For a few seconds, I thought my heart would stop.  But then, I recalled that Fred had been on the front porch when I arrived at 3:30.  My headlights then caught the red Camaro.  It was still here and for now at least, it looked as though it had not been discovered.  I turned into the driveway and backed up towards the rear of the Camaro.  It took me nearly thirty minutes to connect the chain around the Camaro’s axle and winch it up onto the trailer. It took longer because I was unable, without a key, to put the vehicle into neutral.  I secured the car to the trailer using both come-a-longs.  I slipped on a pair of gloves and removed Fred’s cell phone from the Camaro’s console.  I then walked to the cabin and, using my flashlight, took a good look inside to make sure Fred had not left anything, even though I didn’t believe he had come inside.  I walked back on the porch, locked and closed the door, and drove off. 

My sudden idea had not matured into a plan containing a destination for Fred’s Camaro.  Now, driving down the long Club Eden driveway, I had to think fast.  I pulled onto Shady Grove Road and stopped, went back and locked the gate, and raced back to my truck.  It was already headed south so I drove in that direction.  I drove until intersecting with Highway 179.  I turned north and drove until I reached Fairview Cove Road on my left.  Turning westward, I drove several miles and turned right on Bud Umphrey Road and continued north until intersecting with Little Cove Road.  I turned left and within a minute or so reached the same little road that Randall, James, and John had used.  It was a hundred yards off Little Cove Road where they had first come to dispose of Wendi and Cindi and their blue Plymouth.  I tried to find the exact spot where I recalled my Wendi and her sweet sister had met a cruel and violent death.  I spotted it up ahead and then remembered I was headed in the wrong direction.  I couldn’t unload the Camaro behind me and be able to get my truck and trailer out of this narrow and overgrown lane.  I wasn’t very good at backing a trailer but finally was able to.  This took me precious time that I didn’t believe I had.  Finally, I was back onto Little Cove Road pulling up and backing down the lane.  I had to be extremely careful not to angle the rear of the trailer down into the ravine on the west side of the lane.  I also started worrying about scratching Fred’s Camaro thinking that might give investigators a lead towards concluding that the vehicle had been transported here.  After another twenty minutes, I was backed up nearly as far as I could to be able to have a big enough spot for the Camaro to rest.  I was fortunate to have a tree close enough behind the trailer to tie to, and pull the vehicle off the trailer.  I couldn’t help but think that there is no way for a criminal to properly plan a crime.  There are simply too many variables to contend with.  No wonder most crimes are solved.  At least those that don’t involve the five prominent, well-connected families from Boaz.  After disconnecting the chain and the come-a-long I returned to the cab of my truck, put on another set of gloves, and removed Fred’s cell phone, and returning it to the Camaro’s console.  While driving here from Club Eden, I had thought about taking his phone to another location but decided if a jury ever had the opportunity to review this case they would more easily believe that Fred had been here with his Camaro if his phone was found right here too.

I raised both trailer ramps, secured them, and drove to Oak Hollow.  Approaching the gate, I noted another mistake I had made.  I left the chain gate down, unlocked.  I drove slowly to the barn and even more slowly backed the trailer under the shed.  I drove back to the law office, showered and changed into a clean set of clothes, and finally, this time, drove all the way home.

12/11/23 Biking & Listening

Here’s today’s bike ride metrics. Temperature at beginning of ride: 41 degrees. Bright sunny day, but cold.


Photos from today’s ride:

None today.

Why I ride:

Biking is something I both love and hate. The conflicting emotions arise from the undeniable physical effort it demands. However, this exertion is precisely what makes it an excellent form of exercise. Most days, I dedicate over an hour to my cycling routine, and in doing so, I’ve discovered a unique opportunity to enjoy a good book or podcast. The rhythmic pedaling and the wind against my face create a calming backdrop that allows me to fully immerse myself in the content. In these moments, the time spent on the bike seems worthwhile, as I can’t help but appreciate the mental and physical rewards it offers.

I especially like having ridden. The post-biking feeling is one of pure satisfaction. The endorphin rush, coupled with a sense of accomplishment, makes the initial struggle and fatigue worthwhile. As I dismount and catch my breath, I relish the sensation of having conquered the challenge, both physically and mentally. It’s a reminder that the things we sometimes love to hate can often be the ones that bring us the most fulfillment. In the end, the love-hate relationship with biking only deepens my appreciation for the sport, as it continually pushes me to overcome my own limitations and embrace the rewards that follow the effort.


Why you should ride:

Encourages Relaxation:

Cycling is not just a form of physical exercise; it also has a profound ability to encourage relaxation. Here are various ways in which cycling contributes to a relaxed state of mind and body:

  • Physical Activity and Stress Reduction: Engaging in physical activities like cycling can reduce the body’s stress responses. Exercise triggers the release of endorphins, the body’s natural painkillers and mood elevators, which promote relaxation. The physical effort of cycling also helps to use up the energy created by stress, aiding in calming the body.
  • Rhythmic Pedaling as a Meditative Practice: The repetitive nature of cycling, with its steady, rhythmic pedaling, can have a meditative effect. This rhythmic motion can help focus the mind, drawing attention away from stressful thoughts and allowing a sense of calm.
  • Outdoor and Nature Exposure: Cycling outdoors, especially in natural or scenic settings, can enhance relaxation. Being in nature is known to reduce stress and promote a sense of peace. The sights, sounds, and smells of the outdoors can be very soothing.
  • Mindfulness and Presence: Cycling requires a level of present-moment awareness, which is a key aspect of mindfulness. Practicing mindfulness has been shown to reduce stress and promote relaxation. When cycling, the focus on the immediate environment and bodily sensations can help achieve this state.
  • Cardiovascular Health Benefits: Regular cycling improves cardiovascular health, which can help in reducing tension in the body. A healthier heart and circulatory system can contribute to a more relaxed state overall.
  • Reduces Mental Clutter: A bike ride offers a break from daily routines and responsibilities, providing an opportunity to clear the mind. This mental break can be refreshing and relaxing, especially after a long day or during stressful periods.
  • Social Relaxation: For those who enjoy group rides, the social aspect of cycling can be relaxing. Social interactions and the sense of community found in cycling groups can contribute to overall relaxation and well-being.
  • Achievement and Satisfaction: Completing a challenging ride or reaching a cycling goal can bring about a sense of achievement and satisfaction. This positive feeling can promote a relaxed state, as it counters feelings of stress and anxiety.
  • End of Ride Relaxation Response: After a cycling session, the body often experiences a natural relaxation response. The decrease in physical activity coupled with the sense of accomplishment can lead to a profound state of relaxation.
  • Improves Sleep Quality: As cycling improves sleep quality, it indirectly promotes relaxation. Better sleep means the body is better rested and more capable of handling stress, leading to a more relaxed state during waking hours.

In summary, cycling’s ability to encourage relaxation is multifaceted, combining physical, mental, and emotional elements. By incorporating regular cycling into one’s lifestyle, it’s possible to cultivate a more relaxed state of being, beneficial for overall health and well-being.


Please watch

Here’s a couple of links to groups I like. Hopefully, they’ll encourage you to start riding a bike, no matter your age.

Cycling for those aged 70+(opens in a new tab)


Solitary Cycling(opens in a new tab)


My bike:

A Rockhopper by Specialized. I purchased it November 2021 from Venture Out in Guntersville; Mike is top notch! So is the bike. The ‘old’ man seat was salvaged from an old Walmart bike. Seat replaced with new one from Venture Out.


What I’m listening to:

NONFICTION

20 Master Plots: And How to Build Them, by Ronald B. Tobias

Give your story a solid foundation – a plot that engages readers from start to finish!

The best stories linger in the hearts and minds of readers for decades. These tales gain their power through plots that connect with the audience on both an emotional and intellectual level.

Ronald B. Tobias details these 20 time-tested plots. Each is discussed and analyzed, illustrating how a successful plot integrates all the elements of a story. Tobias then reveals how to use these plots effectively in your own work.

Tobias then goes to the next level, describing how to choose and develop plot in fiction. He reveals how to craft plot for any subject matter so that you develop your work evenly and effectively. As a result, your fiction will be more cohesive and convincing, making your story unforgettable for readers everywhere.

Blinkist nonfiction book summaries:

Ethics, by Baruch Spinoza

Nausea, by Jean-Paul Sartre

Read People Like a Book, by Patrick King

Podcasts:

Waking Up app series/courses:

None today.

FICTION

Novel:

 

Amazon abstract:

NATIONAL BESTSELLER • The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo series continues: Lisbeth Salander must face the most important battle of her life, and will finally put her past to rest in this thriller that will “leave Salander’s legion of followers clamoring for more” (The Wall Street Journal). • Also known as the Millennium series

Mikael Blomkvist is trying to reach Lisbeth Salander—the fierce, unstoppable girl with the dragon tattoo. He needs her help unraveling the identity of a man who died with Blomkvist’s phone number in his pocket—a man who does not exist in any official records and whose garbled last words hinted at knowledge that would be dangerous to important people. But Lisbeth has disappeared. She’s sold her apartment in Stockholm. She’s gone dark. She’s told no one where she is. And no one is aware that at long last she’s got her primal enemy, her twin sister, Camilla, squarely in her sights.

Look for the latest book in the Girl with the Dragon Tattoo series, The Girl in the Eagle’s Talons, coming soon!


Blinkest fiction book summaries:

None today.

Music:

Your Top Songs 2023.


Here’s a few photos from previous riding adventures: