Novel Excerpts—The Boaz Safecracker, Chapter 34

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.  
The Boaz Safecracker, written in 2019, is my seventh novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

Fred Martin, a 1972 graduate of Boaz High School, returns to his hometown after practicing law and living in Huntsville for over thirty-five years with two goals in mind.  First, to distance himself from the loss of Susan, his wife of thirty-seven years who died in 2013 of cancer.  And second, to partner with his lifelong friend, Noah Waters, to crack the safes of Elton Rawlins and Doug Barber, two men who got under their skin as high school football players.

Little did Fred and Noah realize the secrets the two old Mosler safes protected.  Who murdered three Boaz High School seniors in the fall of 1973?  Is a near-half-century-old plan to destroy Fred’s sister and steal the inheritance from a set of 44-year-old illegitimate twins still alive and well?  How far would Fred’s mother go to protect her family?   

What starts out as an almost innocent prank turns life-threateningly serious the more Fred learns and the more safes he cracks. All the while, he falls in love with Connie Stewart, his one-date high school classmate who may conceal a secret or two herself.

Chapter 34

After my appointment with Cynthia at Sand Mountain Tire, I called Noah and asked if I could borrow the key to his parents’ house.  We had planned on moving the two duffel bags Sunday afternoon, but my mind was craving an intimate look tonight.  The only other possible thing that could have distracted my quest was an evening with the lovely Connie but she, along with Rebecca and Angela, were headed on their quarterly adventure to Oneonta and Oh-So-Good Barbecue.

Noah didn’t present any opposition.  He did suggest I park my car in the garage and pull the shades when I was inside the house.  He said his parents had a slew of nosy neighbors. 

I pulled inside the garage and manually closed the heavy overhead door.  The only other exit was through a narrow room filled with gardening tools and two long shelves holding a ton of quart jars containing everything from green beans to peach pickles.  I walked through the half-open side door, across the small back yard, and onto an unlocked back porch.  At first, I thought the key Noah had given me was the wrong one.  Finally, I got it to work in the old lock that was probably installed when the house was built in the early 1920’s, according to Noah.

The house was small and had that old person’s smell, probably a combination of rubbing alcohol and Vick’s Salve.  The kitchen was large for the size of the house.  The metal cabinets reminded me of Mama Martin’s in Cincinnati but were, I’m sure, a much lower quality.  The gun cabinet was in a long narrow, pine-paneled room around the corner to my left.  Before touching the cabinet, I walked over to the rear wall and pulled the shades on four windows that looked out into the small back yard and the two-story garage apartment that looked like it could fall in at any moment.

I used the other key Noah had given me to unlock the bottom drawer of the gun cabinet.  Other than a few, mostly empty boxes of 12-gauge shotgun shells, the duffel bags had the giant drawer to themselves.  I reached for the first one and felt the pistol.  I probably should have told Noah to be careful with the bags.  He apparently, in a hurry, had simply tossed the bags in the drawer, the risky one landing upside down.

I started to unload the bags onto the kitchen table right outside the small den but decided against it.  There, I would have to turn on another light and the window above the sink didn’t have a shade.  I opted instead to sit on the floor with my back to a ratty looking couch across from the gun cabinet.  I sat the gun-toting bag upright and opened the second one.  My mind was like a laser.  I had to open and read the contents of the manila envelope titled, ‘Confidentiality Agreement.’

The first thing that struck me when I saw the document was that it was mauve-colored, the same identical paper, or so it seemed, that I had found in both Rebecca and Angela’s safes.   Before reading, I flipped the pages.  There were three.  Back on the first page I sensed what I was holding had been prepared by an attorney.  The first part set out what lawyers referred to as ‘the whereas’ section.  This is where the parties, here, Elton Rawlins, Doug Barber, and First Baptist Church of Christ, disclosed the accepted facts of their agreement.  What I was holding was a contract, an agreement between the parties for each to do and to refrain from doing certain things.  The whereas section consisted of two statements.

“1. Whereas Elton Rawlins and Doug Barber are Deacons at First Baptist Church of Christ and believe they possess incriminating information concerning: a) the misuse of member contributions and theft of purported payments to the Southern Baptist Convention, and b) other misconduct by members of the Church’s deacon board;

2. Whereas First Baptist Church of Christ believes it possesses incrimination information concerning the disappearance of Esmeralda Gomez and the death of Johnny Stewart.”

I knew it was typical of confidentiality agreements to couch the language in hypothetical terms.  None of the parties truly admitted anything.  The purpose of the contract was to keep things secret, whether they were true or not.  The mere fact the allegations went public was so negative, the parties, or at least one of them, were willing to pay to keep mouths shut.  As I read the remainder of the agreement, what was odd was that the church was willing to pay Elton and Doug a substantial sum of money, two-hundred and fifty thousand dollars each, for their eternal silence.  This told me what the two men knew, or thought they knew, that was incriminating on the church, was far worse than what the church knew, or thought it knew, against Elton and Doug.  The document was signed by these two men and by Walter Tillman as church pastor, was notarized by Nancy Frasier (odd, I thought), and was dated May 27, 1974.  It didn’t take me long to recall this was the same date that had been hand-written on the bottom of the Rebecca Rawlins’ letter I had seen in her and Elton’s safe.  The thing I couldn’t recall was whether Angela’s identical letter contained the same date.

I returned the agreement to the manila envelope and laid it on the couch behind me.  I then pulled out the accordion folder labeled, ‘Deacon Deeds.’  It contained five manila files each with its own confidentiality agreement.  These documents were clearly written by a lay person to the law.  I recognized the names of all the men: Walter Tillman, David Adams, Raymond Radford, Fitz Billingsley, and Franklin Ericson.  I thought it odd there was a confidentiality agreement between Walter Tillman, the former pastor, and his church.  These five agreements were all dated November 29, 1973, and all concerned events and circumstances involving Ricky Miller and the Safe House.  None of these agreements were couched in hypothetical language.  All admitted wrong doing, including innocuous things as spreading false rumors, to such serious actions as assault and attempted arson.  As I closed these five files all I could think about was the bravery of Ricky Miller.  He stood up to these five strong and prominent men, and, virtually the entire community, to simply exercise his constitutional right of free speech.  In his case, free speech came at the ultimate price.

It didn’t take long for me to recognize the pistol that had pointed straight at me when I opened the church’s old Mosler could pass as the twin of the one I had taken from Doug Barber’s safe.  They both were Smith & Wesson 38 caliber ‘Chiefs Specials,’ and of similar ages.

The remaining contents of the two duffel bags were mostly large manila envelopes containing photos of various church events, including shots from two or three different Vacation Bible Schools.  One envelope contained the most photos.  They were of Randy Miller’s youth group.  I found myself in one of the pictures.  It was probably taken in 1970 or 1971.  The good condition of the basement in the old sanctuary almost made me sad given my recent visit to the decaying structure.

I almost didn’t open the final manila envelope.  I was tired of looking at photos of mostly smiling teenagers.  Curious me couldn’t go the final mile.  The contents of this one seemed out of place.  They were minutes to a secret Deacons meeting held in late October 1973. I couldn’t make out the actual day since it was so smudged.  The only way I knew the meeting was secret was because the secretary had admitted as much in his opening notes.  The names of every deacon in attendance was listed, including the five prominent men who later entered into confidentiality agreements with the church.  The actual meeting notes were short, the secretary, a Harold Maples, had hand-written, “the Deacons discussed the necessity of honoring God by persuading a select group of our neighbors to confess and repent of their wayward actions.”  Maples’ final statement read, “the Deacon body voted unanimously to take whatever action is needed to stop Ricky Miller from operating the Safe House and from polluting the minds of young, but naive teenagers.”

I had seen enough for one night.  I loaded the files, folders, and envelopes back into the two duffel bags, along with the unloaded pistol, and locked them back in the gun cabinet’s bottom drawer.  As I backed out of the garage, I saw an old woman next door standing on her back-door steps, waving.  I hoped she was senile enough to think I was Noah and had a right to be visiting his parents’ home.  I certainly hoped she didn’t call the police.

Novel Excerpts—The Boaz Safecracker, Chapter 33

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.  
The Boaz Safecracker, written in 2019, is my seventh novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

Fred Martin, a 1972 graduate of Boaz High School, returns to his hometown after practicing law and living in Huntsville for over thirty-five years with two goals in mind.  First, to distance himself from the loss of Susan, his wife of thirty-seven years who died in 2013 of cancer.  And second, to partner with his lifelong friend, Noah Waters, to crack the safes of Elton Rawlins and Doug Barber, two men who got under their skin as high school football players.

Little did Fred and Noah realize the secrets the two old Mosler safes protected.  Who murdered three Boaz High School seniors in the fall of 1973?  Is a near-half-century-old plan to destroy Fred’s sister and steal the inheritance from a set of 44-year-old illegitimate twins still alive and well?  How far would Fred’s mother go to protect her family?   

What starts out as an almost innocent prank turns life-threateningly serious the more Fred learns and the more safes he cracks. All the while, he falls in love with Connie Stewart, his one-date high school classmate who may conceal a secret or two herself.

Chapter 33

I nearly ran over the courier as I walked inside Alfa’s office.  Next thing I knew I would be looking at my iPhone while driving down the highway.  I couldn’t become that stupid.

Nell and the other four Alfa agents were all in the small conference room when I got my bearings.  Two were seated and two were standing up, along with Nell.  “Fred, come in here please.”  There wasn’t anyone politer than the sweet, but old, Nell.

“We’ve drawn straws and you’ve won.”  Victor, the youngest and brightest agent of the fold, said, looking down at a death benefits check laying alone in the middle of the table.  I knew it was for a death claim because of the check’s color.  All benefits from life insurance claims were paid out with a putrid green check.  I hated them because they reminded me of, well, death and dying, and the sordid conditions that accompany every death, like they represented the stinking bile that oozed from everybody at some point.

“Fred, all silliness aside,” Nell said looking seriously at Victor, “I think you are the right person to deliver this check to Pastor Patterson at First Baptist Church of Christ.”  I wasn’t completely surprised that the church was the beneficiary of Doug Barber’s policy.  One of Elton’s policies had named the same beneficiary.  I was at a sales conference when his check arrived.  I think Nell delivered it.

“Okay, that’s not a problem.  But, I am curious why none of you heathens want to meet with the pastor?”  I knew none of them attended First Baptist, but I was pretty sure they all had a church home.

James lifted the green check from the middle of the conference room table and revealed a blue form.  “It seemed irreverent to have to ask these questions.”  I had heard of the ‘CYA’ form but had never had to use it.  Having the recipient of a death check acknowledge that he knew nothing about the perpetrator of a crime likely made for an uncomfortable conversation. 

“I’m truly surprised Alfa has issued this check.”  Nell said, reaching over and acting as though she was pondering her next statement.  “A million dollars.  I might understand if Alfa paid out twenty thousand under the present circumstances.  If a problem arises, its always harder to herd the camel back into the barn.”  She seemed to be saying something in coded language.

“The Church owned the policy.  Alfa had a duty to fulfill their promise under the contract.  As far as I know there is absolutely nothing to tie the church to Doug’s death.  What’s the issue here?”  I asked.

“Nothing for sure, but Alfa’s investigators are now suspicious of Elton Rawlins’ death.  Seems they have discovered the driver of the car, the car that hit Elton and Rebecca, and ultimately caused Elton’s death.  He’s admitted being paid to cause the wreck.”  Nell said.

“I’d like to know how they learned that.  Sounds like some mighty good investigative work.”  I said.

“We’re not sure, but the Alfa rumor is that the team received an anonymous tip, something about the driver, a beach bum by trade, coming into some money and not wanting to share.  The tip wasn’t exactly anonymous.  It was from the man’s ex-wife.”

“I hate to interrupt our party but I’m going to have to run if I go by and see Pastor Caleb and make my four-thirty appointment at Sand Mountain Tire.  To summarize, all I must do is ask the ‘CYA’ questions and get the pastor’s signature.  Right?”

“You got it.  And, be sure and express our sincere condolences for the tragic death of Doug Barber.”  Nell, ever so polite and respectful.

During my drive to First Baptist I couldn’t help but think about the manila envelope resting inside the gun case in Albertville.  I was aggravated at myself not to have taken at least fifteen or twenty seconds to peek at the confidentiality agreement inside the faded envelope before I had stuck it inside my second duffel bag.  It would no doubt have given me a more complete context for what I was about to do.  At least, this is what I pondered.

Pastor Caleb was as cordial and polite as Nell.  We met in his office on the third floor of the Education Building and he answered the ten, ‘CYA’ questions without a single hesitation.  His secretary came in and witnessed his signature on the blue form.  After I gave him Alfa’s putrid green, million-dollar check, I asked him if we could have a confidential conversation.  I liked his response, “Fred, I’m always available to listen and counsel.  You should know about the pastor and penitent privilege.”

“I do, but this is a little different.”  I had been contemplating this conversation for several weeks.  Now that I had the perfect opportunity to ask my question, I felt I was an idiot and would do nothing but embarrass myself and the gentle pastor.

“Fred, rest at ease, share what’s on your heart.”

“I know that you are my nephew.”  If I detected anything at all in Pastor Caleb’s face it was not more than a slight and instant raising of his left eyebrow.  “Mother’s death has been tough on me in more ways than one.  Dad shared this well-hidden secret with me a couple of weeks ago.”

“I’m a little surprised this secret hasn’t been discovered before now.  I must give it to your mom and dad.  They did a fantastic job of concealing my identity.”

“If you don’t mind me asking, when did you learn the truth?”  I wanted to better flesh out my question but for some reason I didn’t.

“Last year, when I was considering moving here from Prattville to become pastor, my dear mother confessed.  She told me she always knew there would come a time she would be forced to tell me the truth.  She said she simply couldn’t let me accept such a high profile and important job as pastor of the largest church in my own hometown without knowing the truth.”

“Pastor, do you mind sharing with me exactly what she told you.  I really want and need to know the facts are the same as those shared with me by Dad.  In a way, I’m a lot like you.  The truth has been kept from me for all these years.”   I said.

“Deidre, your dear sister, and the late Johnny Stewart, were, are, my biological parents.  Of course, Johnny died shortly after I was conceived.  A few months later, Deidre was whisked away to Cincinnati to conceal her pregnancy.  Your dear mother, I have to say, a very cunning woman, choreographed the private adoption with the willing participation of my mother, Helen Patterson.  I’m sorry to say my dad, Helen’s husband, went along with it but never seemed to accept me as his own.”

“I guess I know the rest of the story.  You grew up in Boaz, graduated from Boaz High School, and then went on to college and seminary.  Right?”  I asked.

“Yes, all that is true.  But, I might as well give you the full picture.  Fred don’t blame me, you asked.”  The pastor’s words felt ominous, like he was about to add color to the TV screen that had always been black and white.

“Why do I feel a bomb is about to go off?”  I said.

“Because it is.  Keep in mind we are speaking confidentially.  I suspect you take that very serious, you having spent most of your adult life in and around a courtroom.”  

“The attorney/client privilege is sacrosanct.  Just like your profession’s privilege.”

Pastor Caleb got up from behind his desk and walked over to a window that looked out onto the church’s west side parking lot.  “There’s something else common between pastors and lawyers.  They both are curious.  After Mother confessed, I did a little snooping around.  My inquiries led me to Cincinnati, Ohio.”  He turned back to face me and returned to his desk chair across from where I was seated.  “Do you want the long or the short version?”  Pastor asked.

“Can I have both?  Right now, I’m tight for time but later, at your convenience, I would love to hear every detail.”  I said.

“That’s fair.  Okay, today, the short version.  Carson Eubanks is also your nephew.”  Pastor Caleb didn’t crack a grin or reveal any emotion.  My mind went into lock down.  I couldn’t digest what the pastor had just said.

“What, who?”  As another five seconds inched by while I looked at the pastor, my mind delivered a small clue.  Carson, that’s Tyler’s father, Noah had said so, they met, at Boeing.

“Tyler, Luke’s friend.  Carson is Tyler’s father.  He works in Huntsville.  He’s your kinfolk also.”

“How?  I’m drawing the biggest blank ever.  Can you explain?”  I asked.

“Carson and I are twins.  We’re blood brothers.  It was a surprise for all, especially your mother.”

I couldn’t believe what I was hearing.  Deidre had twins?  Why had Dad not told me the complete truth?  Then, it hit me.  What if Dad himself didn’t know?”

The pastor poured me a glass of water from a small pitcher on the credenza behind his desk.  “Fred, this story is a perfect example of life, how it can throw the best curve ball in existence.  You mother had planned for months what was going to happen to her first grandchild.  Her best friend, my mother, Helen, the two of them had created a team with a carefully crafted plan.  But then, life pitched the curve ball.  Remember back then there were few if any sonograms.  Twins could slip up on a pregnant woman.  That’s what happened.  Your mother had to scramble to find Carson a home.  He grew up just around the block from your grandparents in Seven Hills.”

“One final question and I have to go to my next appointment.  Do you have any idea why Carson and Tyler are living in Boaz?  As you say, Carson works at Boeing, all the way over in Huntsville.”  I said.

“I don’t know for sure.  But one thing I figure out is that he is searching.  Maybe he has picked up a lead about his real parents.  I don’t know if he even knows he was adopted.  I really don’t know him.  He and Tyler are, what should I say?  Unbelievers, if what I hear is true.”

“Pastor, thanks so much for being so open.  I do want to talk more later if you would be so generous, but now I have to run.”

I left the Education Building and drove to Sand Mountain Tire and Battery on Highway 431.  I couldn’t tell you anything for certain, I said as I met with Cynthia Lang and discussed the new retirement plan she had chosen.

Novel Excerpts—The Boaz Safecracker, Chapter 32

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.  
The Boaz Safecracker, written in 2019, is my seventh novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

Fred Martin, a 1972 graduate of Boaz High School, returns to his hometown after practicing law and living in Huntsville for over thirty-five years with two goals in mind.  First, to distance himself from the loss of Susan, his wife of thirty-seven years who died in 2013 of cancer.  And second, to partner with his lifelong friend, Noah Waters, to crack the safes of Elton Rawlins and Doug Barber, two men who got under their skin as high school football players.

Little did Fred and Noah realize the secrets the two old Mosler safes protected.  Who murdered three Boaz High School seniors in the fall of 1973?  Is a near-half-century-old plan to destroy Fred’s sister and steal the inheritance from a set of 44-year-old illegitimate twins still alive and well?  How far would Fred’s mother go to protect her family?   

What starts out as an almost innocent prank turns life-threateningly serious the more Fred learns and the more safes he cracks. All the while, he falls in love with Connie Stewart, his one-date high school classmate who may conceal a secret or two herself.

Chapter 32

Wednesday night, I was running a few minutes late for dinner in the church’s Fellowship Hall.  When I arrived, I was surprised to see Connie sitting at our table, along with Dad, Deidre, and Ed.  I wasn’t surprised to hear the first statement from the manipulative Deidre: “I asked Connie to join us.  Thought it would be a trial run for Sunday.  She can decide if she’s ready.”  Her last words could have been interpreted several ways.  I looked at Connie and she gave me that adorable smile.  If I hadn’t had different plans I would have been excited to share a meal with Connie, and then accompany her to Prayer Meeting.  Instead, I had to lie about a non-existent insurance appointment. 

Earlier this afternoon Noah and I had made an abrupt change in our plans.  Ever since I had learned about a second safe at Rebecca’s, one holding what likely was a large hoard of cash, Noah and I had been plotting my return to 208 Thomas Avenue.  But, our secondary, longer-term plans to crack the Mosler in the church’s basement, cried out for attention.  Two things had caused us to change our minds.  The body shop at Adam’s Chevrolet had caught fire late afternoon and no doubt would require the attention of the Boaz Fire Department for hours.  And, there was a touring choir from Nigeria that Pastor Caleb had asked to present a musical after prayer meeting.  This would add an extra dose of attention and possibly confusion that would magnetize the church’s greeters and the facility guards (something the deacons had instituted after the mass murder at a church in Charleston, South Carolina two years ago).  Finally, Noah’s idea to trigger the alarm at Boaz High School would demand the balance of the police force that wasn’t already occupied directing Highway 431 traffic around the Adam’s Chevrolet fire.

As Connie and I carried our plates to the dish-washing window I told her I hated I couldn’t go with her to Prayer Meeting but that I would call her after my appointment.  I warned her that it might be ten o’clock.  She seemed eager for a roll in the hay.  That was my interpretation, recognizing that I was often wrong.

I walked out to my car, exited the church’s rear parking lot, and turned right on Elm Street.  I made a three-block circle and ended up behind an abandoned house on Sparks Avenue less than seventy-five yards from the west side of the original sanctuary built well over a hundred years ago.  There was a ground level entrance to the basement and I knew, thanks to Noah, it was not controlled by the high-tech security system that governed the new sanctuary and education building the church had built less than five years ago just to the east of the original structure.  The basement of the old building was mainly used for Training Union classes on Sunday night and for storage.  I was thankful the window next to the side entrance was unlocked, just as I had left it the last night of Doug’s ‘Death’ class.  I raised the old wooden window and slipped inside.

It didn’t take me but a couple of minutes to locate the old Mosler.  If it hadn’t been for my interview with Pastor Caleb I wouldn’t have had a clue where to start looking.  He had shared his love for old safes and how, to him, it seemed they had a mind and a heart of their own.  While he was rambling on about how he hoped the old Mosler in the basement divulged a ton of memories about life around First Baptist Church of Christ, he had mentioned, not intentionally I’m sure, that the only thing he dreaded was having to endure the piss smell from the old bathroom the youth group used back fifty years or so when they met down in the basement.  There it was, inside the boy’s bathroom and inside a closet in the corner.  I could tell there used to be a wall hiding the safe, but it had long ago been dismantled other than a couple of 2 by 4’s along the outer edges. 

The trick was gaining access.  Caleb had, in that same insurance interview, divulged that he didn’t have the combination to the safe and intended to ask Betty Tillman, the wife of Walter Tillman, the former pastor, if she could find out the correct combination.  I didn’t have any idea whether he had pursued this.  Instead, I came prepared, again thankful to Noah, to access the front of the safe.  I almost felt disrespectful to Papa Martin who had taught me the tried and true method of unlocking the safe via a long and sometimes tricky back door approach with the use of a torch and a long flathead screwdriver.  Noah, through his many resources, had discovered a device, just a NASA strength version of a DeWalt drill, that bored straight through the spinning dial and disabled the bolt lock as it vaporized the metal shavings the solid diamond bit created as it bored.  It worked better than Noah had declared.

As I opened the thick steel door with my right hand I reached in my pocket with my left for my iPhone.  Activated, it read, 6:48.  I had been inside the basement for almost seven minutes.  Mine and Noah’s limit, what we referred to as our ‘drop-dead’ time, was ten minutes.  I decided to not dilly-dally but to load up the safe’s contents in the two duffel bags I had brought and skedaddle, hopefully with a minute or so to spare.  I wasn’t worried what I might encounter when I walked out the west-facing door.  I knew Noah was somewhere, hiding in plain sight ready to execute a diversion plan if necessary.

As the safe’s heavy door fully opened I was shocked by a pistol pointing directly at me.  It was laying on its side.  I thought it rather odd for the barrel to be facing me, like someone had placed it in that exact position to warn an intruder to think twice before removing anything from this safe. 

I gently rotated the pistol barrel away from me, grabbed it by the handle, and placed it at the bottom of my first bag.  Once again, there were accordion folders full of papers.  As I loaded them in my bags I noticed one was labeled, “Deacon Deeds.”  I quickly wondered if the latter word was referring to land documents or actions performed by the church’s deacons.  I was about to close the safe door after loading the folders when I noticed a thin canary-colored envelope standing on its edge and slipped behind the maroon-colored cloth along the right side of the safe.

Normally, these safes were lined with this identical cloth material but some way, here, the lining had been torn away from the thick steel.  I removed the envelope and read the following words written in pencil on the outside: “Confidentiality Agreement: First Baptist Church of Christ, Elton Rawlins, and Doug Barber.”  I had to fight the temptation to open the envelope and read what I assumed was a contract document inside.  Instead, I stuffed it in my bag and made my way to the side door. 

In less than thirty seconds after exiting the basement I had dropped both bags inside the trunk of a tan-colored 2005 Chevrolet Impala that Noah had parked less than twenty feet away.  My job was then to walk to my car hidden on Sparks Avenue and drive to Burger King in Albertville where I was to meet Lorie, Noah’s wife, dressed as a man, and present my speech for thirty minutes concerning the benefits of purchasing a long-term health care policy.  This meeting, along with the hamburger joint’s security cameras, would give a semblance of an alibi if ever I was questioned about the burglary. 

At 9:45 p.m., I was at home.  After leaving Burger King, I met Noah at Chili’s’ Restaurant in Guntersville, just beside his security facility, where we, over apple pie, ice cream, and coffee, had discussed my adventure in the bowels of the grand old sanctuary.  Before arriving, he had already disposed of the 2005 Impala and had stored the two duffel bags inside his late father’s gun cabinet at his parents’ now-empty house at the intersection of Miller Street and Ray Avenue in Albertville.

My call to Connie and our nearly two-hour conversation was like icing on the cake.  What a successful day.  As if it couldn’t get any better, the lovely Connie mentioned, two times, how long it had been since she had sunbathed at the beach.  She had even suggested I carry her to Gulf Shores sometime soon.  When our call ended, and I lay down to sleep, the picture of Connie in a two-piece bikini was mesmerizing.

Novel Excerpts—The Boaz Safecracker, Chapter 31

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.  
The Boaz Safecracker, written in 2019, is my seventh novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

Fred Martin, a 1972 graduate of Boaz High School, returns to his hometown after practicing law and living in Huntsville for over thirty-five years with two goals in mind.  First, to distance himself from the loss of Susan, his wife of thirty-seven years who died in 2013 of cancer.  And second, to partner with his lifelong friend, Noah Waters, to crack the safes of Elton Rawlins and Doug Barber, two men who got under their skin as high school football players.

Little did Fred and Noah realize the secrets the two old Mosler safes protected.  Who murdered three Boaz High School seniors in the fall of 1973?  Is a near-half-century-old plan to destroy Fred’s sister and steal the inheritance from a set of 44-year-old illegitimate twins still alive and well?  How far would Fred’s mother go to protect her family?   

What starts out as an almost innocent prank turns life-threateningly serious the more Fred learns and the more safes he cracks. All the while, he falls in love with Connie Stewart, his one-date high school classmate who may conceal a secret or two herself.

Chapter 31

Monday was a holiday, not a State holiday, but one Alfa had instituted many years ago to honor its founder and his family.  I spent most of the morning working with Dad in his garden and reliving last night with the lovely Connie.  I couldn’t tell you a single song we had sung during the music time as we shared a songbook, nor did I remember any specifics from Pastor Caleb’s sermon on the power of prayer.  But I did recall every second I spent on Connie’s couch after we returned with a half-gallon of Brier’s Black Walnut ice cream we bought at Walmart after church.  This morning, sweaty and dirty from pulling weeds from a long row of peas, I was proud of myself for initiating a long passionate kiss after following Connie back to the kitchen with our empty bowls.  I had been totally surprised she had returned my passion.  I’m beginning to think that her sex life has been so-longed suppressed that once it is unleashed, I might have to seek out what is commonly known as ‘the little blue pill.’  I must have had a strange look on my face because Dad kept asking me if I was okay.

A little before noon I returned to my cabin and showered.  I laid down across my bed and picked up Angela’s 1971 journal.  I had been reading a few pages every night for the past two weeks.  It had been my way of forcing myself to get through all three books of her mostly teenage girl ramblings.

In November 1971, I recognized a growing frustration, almost anger, she was developing over her Sunday School teacher’s persistent emphasis on prayer and its importance to every young person desiring a close walk with Jesus.  His name was Farris Pauly and he was a local used car dealer.  Apparently, his favorite Bible verse on prayer was John 15:7: “If ye abide in me, and my words abide in you, ye shall ask what ye will, and it shall be done unto you.”  Pauly routinely argued that all a true believer had to do was ask and she would receive.  It never failed that he emphasized that the requester had to be in the right relationship with Jesus for this promise to be fulfilled. 

From Angela’s writings, there was no doubt a proper understanding of ‘abide’ had often led to heated arguments in the high school youth department, especially in Pauly’s tenth grade class.  One example she shared concerned the death of fellow student Brandy Peterson the night of Halloween 1971.  It seemed the young girl had been seriously injured in an auto accident after witnesses had observed her staggering around the Piggly Wiggly grocery store.  They said she appeared to have been drunk as a skunk.  Angela and the entire youth group had staged a three-day prayer vigil for Brandy as she lingered at Boaz-Albertville Hospital.  Angela had written: “I know I did everything I could possibly do to be in right relationship with Jesus, yet Brandy died.  Prayer sucks.”  Less than two weeks later, Angela shared that an autopsy of Brandy’s body revealed she had ingested a drug known as methaqualone.

I got up and walked to the box I had stored at the top of the kitchen’s pantry.  I thought I had seen a similar name on one of the bottles I had taken from Doug’s safe.  I was right.  There were two bottles labeled “Quaalude-300.”  I recalled the Google article I had read that stated the drug produced barbiturate-like effects.  It could depress the central nervous system, reduce heart and respiration rates, and numb the fingers and toes.  I took my iPhone from my pocket and conducted another quick search.  This time my query was “Quaalude-300 and accidental deaths.”  Google found an article titled, “More Quaalude deaths from injuries than overdose.”  Here, I learned that actual overdoses of the widely abused sedative produced a drunken-like stupor.

I returned the bottles and box to the top shelf and walked back to my bedroom.  In December 1971, Angela and her four closest friends, Rebecca, Johnny, Allan, and Tommy, were all members of Ricky Miller’s school club known as The Brights.  Angela was the only one of the five who wasn’t allowed to attend the meetings because of her parent’s command, but she nonetheless spent time with the Biology teacher/secular activist.  She wasn’t exactly clear how she was able to have private meetings unless it was after school.  Angela shared how she had talked on several occasions with Miller about Farris Pauly and his insistent claims about the power of prayer, and its importance to sincere Christians.

In reading Angela’s journal through the end of December 1971, I gathered that he had challenged her and her four friends to do their own investigation into the authenticity of prayer.  Within several journal entries Angela had written what Ricky Miller had told the five of them.  Things like, “prayer works equally as well as coincidence,” and “John 15:7 is possibly the clearest and strongest indictment of the Christian faith.  Either there is no Christian who truly abides in Jesus, the Bible is lying, or God’s Son is wholly incapable of fulfilling his promise.  Either way, prayer doesn’t work.”

Ricky had encouraged the five to start attending Prayer Meeting every Wednesday night at First Baptist Church of Christ.  He suggested at least one, maybe two, of the five attended while the others attended his brother’s youth group sessions.  Ricky instructed Angela and her friends to record every prayer request that was made, especially those by the adults in Prayer Meeting, and then to monitor the results.  He even gave them a form he had developed to record their findings.

Angela’s entry on December 31, 1971 revealed her internal struggle with her faith.  She summarized what her and her four friends had done all during the month of December and how eye-opening it was to learn that, at best, prayer worked only about fifty percent of the time.  One thing she noted, I thought it was brilliant, that out of all five of the prayer meetings either her or one of her four friends had attended during December, the boldest prayer was one made by Nancy Frasier, the librarian, for her granddaughter’s left arm to be restored to full health.  It seemed the girl had fallen out of a tree house and not only broken her arm but injured it so severely she would lose all practical use for the rest of her life.

Other than Nancy’s request, Angela shared how no adult at prayer meeting ever prayed boldly.  No one asked God to grow back a leg that had to be amputated.  No doubt Angela was truly impacted by the death of Brandy Peterson back in November.  Angela referenced that horrible event once again as she closed out her December 1971 journal.  She pondered two questions: “if John 15:7 is true, why didn’t Brandy survive?” and “out of all the hundreds of local folks who were praying for her survival, was not one of them truly abiding in Jesus as required in this Bible verse?”

At 4:30 p.m., I had to get up and move.  I had read enough of Angela’s ramblings.  I changed into a pair of more comfortable shorts and a tee shirt and headed out for a long walk.  I passed the barn at the back of the cabin on my way to Martin Road and couldn’t help but think about the twice-stolen jewelry and coins resting comfortably in an army surplus box beneath a ton of hay.  This prompted me to ponder where my and Noah’s vendetta against Elton Rawlins and Doug Barber was going to lead.  I surmised there was a long-suppressed story hidden somewhere among the clues that we had taken from the two Mosler safes.  I felt an electricity surge along the bottom of my spine like it was a signal to seriously consider cracking another safe or two to determine whether they, too would divulge some aspect of the story that seemed to be loosely coalescing in my mind.

Novel Excerpts—The Boaz Safecracker, Chapter 30

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.  
The Boaz Safecracker, written in 2019, is my seventh novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

Fred Martin, a 1972 graduate of Boaz High School, returns to his hometown after practicing law and living in Huntsville for over thirty-five years with two goals in mind.  First, to distance himself from the loss of Susan, his wife of thirty-seven years who died in 2013 of cancer.  And second, to partner with his lifelong friend, Noah Waters, to crack the safes of Elton Rawlins and Doug Barber, two men who got under their skin as high school football players.

Little did Fred and Noah realize the secrets the two old Mosler safes protected.  Who murdered three Boaz High School seniors in the fall of 1973?  Is a near-half-century-old plan to destroy Fred’s sister and steal the inheritance from a set of 44-year-old illegitimate twins still alive and well?  How far would Fred’s mother go to protect her family?   

What starts out as an almost innocent prank turns life-threateningly serious the more Fred learns and the more safes he cracks. All the while, he falls in love with Connie Stewart, his one-date high school classmate who may conceal a secret or two herself.

Chapter 30

Once again, after lunch, I chose not to join the family gathering on Martin Mansion’s front porch.  I was too close to ballistic with Deidre.  Just one more turn of the knife she had been wielding could trigger my attack.  I didn’t want that.  Instead, I walked home, changed clothes, and pushed back in my recliner.  My goal was both rest and to generate the courage to call Connie and see if I could sit with her at church tonight.

I had just dozed off when Noah called my iPhone.  “Nancy Frasier still amazes me.”

“Who?”  My mind was having problems becoming alert.

“Librarian Nancy, the one with a near photographic memory, especially of every book lining her shelves.”

I figured Noah had a point to make but I wasn’t interested in hearing more about the old, but sweet, woman who had maintained the Boaz Public Library since I was barely out of diapers.  It was Mother who had taught me to read years before I began first grade at Boaz Elementary, and it was Mother who carried me to the library to check out one book per week from Drew Nelson’s series on “Bible Characters to Emulate.”  “She must be in her nineties.  I saw her the other day.  She looked fit as a fiddle, but what’s your point?” 

“I dropped by the library yesterday to pick up a book Nancy had ordered for me through the interlibrary loan service.”

“Was it a coloring book or The Three Little Pigs?”

“No, asshole, it was A History of Electronic Security Systems by Ben Applegate.  It’s a classic.”

“I pity Lorie, she must get pretty bored with your infatuations.”

“Listen, I don’t have all day.  Matter of fact, Lorie and I are leaving for Mentone in an hour or so.  Just a little getaway.”

“Thanks for calling and letting me know.”  I said, really getting frustrated with Noah.

“While at the library, Nancy asked me if I had the contract for Doug Barber’s security system.”

“Why did she ask that?”  I asked.

“Seems like she has had an interest in a certain pistol that went missing over half a century ago.”  Noah said.  To me it shouldn’t take this long to say what he’d called to say.  “When I told her that I did maintain Doug’s system at the pharmacy, she asked if I knew what type pistol was used in his murder.”

“What did you say?”

“I told her that I had heard it was probably a 38 caliber, but I didn’t know for sure, since Doug’s autopsy hadn’t been completed.”

“Did she say anything else about the missing pistol?”  I asked.

“She seemed a little confused, like she was considering whether the pistol that was used to kill Doug was the same one that was stolen from Randy Miller back in 1973.”

“Was she referring to the former youth pastor?”  I’m sure I already knew the answer.

“Nancy’s daughter, I can’t remember her name, had been a member of Miller’s youth group back in the seventies and was also a kid reporter for The Pirate Times, you know, the high school newspaper.  Apparently, Gail, that’s her name, had written an article not long after the gun went missing.”  Noah’s story was growing weirder by the sentence.

“It seems kind of odd that a youth pastor would have a pistol.”  I said, noticing I had just received a text from Connie.  “Hurry up, I’ve got better things to attend to.  Connie just sent me a text.”

“Oh boy, quick, go get an ice pack.  You don’t need to get overheated.”

“Funny.  Looks like she’s solved my problem.  She wants to know if I’ll go to church with her tonight.”

“Fred, you sound like a girl, a teenage girl at that.  I don’t need to know any details about your sex life.”

“Don’t even go there.  I need to respond, so, please finish up your little story.”

“One final thing.  Nancy asked me about Doug’s home-security system and whether I knew if the rumor was true.”

“What rumor?”  I asked.

“Whether there was a pistol taken from his safe during the burglary, you know, the one you conducted.”

“I damn hope you have scrambled this call.”  It was unlikely, but it was too risky for Noah to be saying such things.”

“Don’t worry man, I’ve got us covered.  Lorie’s calling, so I’ve got to run.  I just wanted to call and tell you not to hock that Smith and Wesson you have in your barn loft.”  Noah said almost bursting my ear drum with his overloud laugh.  “Oh, one other thing.”

“I thought you had to go?”

“I almost forgot.  I ran into Tyler’s father the other day.  You know, Luke’s friend, the one you’ve been telling me is leading your nephew into a life of sin.”

“That’s not exactly how I would put it, but what about Tyler’s father?”  I asked.

“He works for Boeing in Huntsville.  We’ve just signed a contract to upgrade the security in his department.   He’s a nice fellow, Carson’s his name.  Did you know he grew up in Cincinnati?”  Noah asked.

“I’ve never met the man.”

“Well, he seemed to know a lot about your grandfather.”

“What?  That seems unlikely.”

“From what he said he must have grown up in the same neighborhood.  Said he graduated from Seven Hills High School.  Hey, isn’t that where your parents went?”

“Yes.  The two of you certainly had a long conversation.”

“It was nearly an all-day meeting with him and several of his associates.  I think when he learned I was originally from Boaz, it just sparked an interest, especially since he and Tyler are living here.”

“I still find that kind of strange.  Can I go now, I don’t want Connie to think I’m ignoring her.”  It had been a long time since I had played the game of privately being one-hundred percent interested in knowing a girl, and publicly acting as though I didn’t care one way or the other.

“Catch you later.”

After our call ended I immediately responded to Connie’s text telling her I had already planned on calling her to ask about church tonight, but that Noah had called. 

When she responded with, “pick me up at my house at 6:30,” I almost laughed out loud.  Connie was certainly not passive and timid.  This was a little surprising from what I remembered about her in high school.

I spent the next few hours without interruption laying back in my recliner.  But, I didn’t sleep.  All my mind wanted to do was rotate its thoughts between the long-missing Smith and Wesson pistol, and how in the heck did Carson Eubanks know my grandfather?

Novel Excerpts—The Boaz Safecracker, Chapter 29

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.  
The Boaz Safecracker, written in 2019, is my seventh novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

Fred Martin, a 1972 graduate of Boaz High School, returns to his hometown after practicing law and living in Huntsville for over thirty-five years with two goals in mind.  First, to distance himself from the loss of Susan, his wife of thirty-seven years who died in 2013 of cancer.  And second, to partner with his lifelong friend, Noah Waters, to crack the safes of Elton Rawlins and Doug Barber, two men who got under their skin as high school football players.

Little did Fred and Noah realize the secrets the two old Mosler safes protected.  Who murdered three Boaz High School seniors in the fall of 1973?  Is a near-half-century-old plan to destroy Fred’s sister and steal the inheritance from a set of 44-year-old illegitimate twins still alive and well?  How far would Fred’s mother go to protect her family?   

What starts out as an almost innocent prank turns life-threateningly serious the more Fred learns and the more safes he cracks. All the while, he falls in love with Connie Stewart, his one-date high school classmate who may conceal a secret or two herself.

Chapter 29

I was glad I had changed my mind.  Last night around 10:30, Connie had called and invited me to Sunday School.  She was an active member of the Singles Department and thought I might enjoy fellowship and study with men and women, young and old, from the area who were never-married, or single from either divorce or death of a spouse.  I had, without thinking, agreed, and promised to meet her at 8:30 a.m. outside the old but well-kept house beside the church where the Singles met.  It had been a correct decision to call her at 7:00 this morning and tell her I would take a rain check.  I hated lying, but I knew it would make for a potentially bad scene for me to be a Bible student.  It had been hard enough sitting in Doug’s ‘Death’ class, but that was not strictly a Bible subject.

Instead of formal Sunday School, I opted for my old standby.  Almost since I had moved back to Boaz I had arrived twenty or thirty minutes before the Worship hour and sat in the balcony awaiting services to begin.  It was my way of observing and pondering, from afar, the smiles, handshakes, nods, and other interactions of folks who came to First Baptist Church of Christ every week and who truly believed in the supernatural.

This morning I couldn’t help but think about mine and Luke’s discussion yesterday while fishing.  I had two competing thoughts.  What if something happened that was a dead giveaway that God existed?  Maybe, God, a real human-looking figure, appeared in the sky?  And, He said, where everybody on earth could hear Him, “I am God, Jehovah, the Beginning and the End, the one who has always been.  Believe on me and receive a mansion in Heaven that is built and awaits each of my followers after his or her death.”  Or, something similar.

The opposite thought was that something happened that just as clearly revealed there was no God.  Maybe, scientists, cosmologists, found Heaven and it was empty.  That was silly.  No, let’s say the body of Jesus was discovered.  He was found where a few of the disciples had buried him.  Someway, scientists were able to do two things: determine this was the one and only Jesus, the one spoken of in the New Testament, and second, they determined His DNA was no different than any other human. 

This opposite thought left me with the certainty that it wouldn’t change anything for any of the people milling around downstairs.  First, they wouldn’t believe it, but second, and more importantly, even if they someway said it was true, the discovery was just God testing them.  No doubt, their lives wouldn’t change in any significant way; church attendance would remain the same.  This was the hallmark of delusion.  As Pastor Caleb took to the pulpit I brainstormed what on earth would have to take place for folks to seriously and sincerely examine the real evidence.  I almost laughed out loud when I thought it was a miracle every time a die-hard Southern Baptist fundamentalist Christian rejected his or her faith.  I couldn’t think of that happening in a long, long time.

Sunday lunch at Martin Mansion was back to normal, well, as normal as it could be without my dear, sweet mother.  Deidre and Gabby made sure the family stayed together, that we didn’t forsake our long-held tradition.  I couldn’t help but admire Deidre and all the effort she had made to prepare a meal that at least looked like one of Mom’s.  No one, including me, said a thing about how different everything tasted.  It was all good but Mother had such a way with food.  She could make green beans taste as good as homemade ice cream.

“I’ve got a suggestion to make.”  Deidre said looking over at me after asking me about her green bean casserole.  She kept looking at me as though she was waiting for my response.

I finally said I was open to a suggestion.

“Since you and gorgeous Connie Stewart are now a thing, why don’t you invite her to our Sunday lunches.  I hope this doesn’t hurt your feelings, but I suggest she sit in Susan’s chair.  Don’t you think it’s been empty long enough?”  Deidre smiled and then started passing the mashed potatoes.

I offered a half-hearted laugh and said, “I may have missed something.  I often do, but I wouldn’t characterize one date with the lovely Connie as creating a ‘thing’ as you describe it.”

“Fred, you can be so dense.  Sometimes I wonder how you were smart enough to become a lawyer.  You two have been a thing for nearly half a century, well, at least to Connie.”  Deidre was making absolutely no sense.

“Since you know so much, why don’t you educate me?”  Sometimes I was too curious.

“You must have pushed Connie’s buttons when you two went out on your one date in high school.  What was it?  When you were in the tenth grade?”

“Something like that.”  Deidre was exactly right but I didn’t want to appear too interested in the details.

“Connie, your own Susan called her cunning Connie.  She tried her best to drive a wedge between you two.  Even talked her sweet cousin, Johnny, into making his best move on the innocent Susan.”

“Sister, you are deluded.  How could this have been going on without me knowing it?”

“Maybe you and Mr. Noah were too focused on football and fiction.”

“What does that mean?”  As soon as I asked the question I figured out what Deidre was saying.

“Fiction, as in listening and believing the tall tales Ricky Miller was sharing at the Safe House.  While you two were immersed in him, you were ignoring your girlfriend.    Of course, their little fling was pretty much a secret, but you know girls share more than boys.”

“Well, that was half a century ago.  I guess I shouldn’t blame Susan for straying just a little.  Bottom line is she married me.”

“And now Miss Connie has you where she’s always wanted you.  Wrapped around her little finger.”  Deidre could be, should I say it, such a bitch.

“Pass the biscuits and pause the bull.  If you don’t mind.” 

As things quieted down, I realized that Sunday lunches would never be the same without Mother.  I honestly didn’t believe she would have allowed Deidre to intimidate me like she had done.

Novel Excerpts—The Boaz Safecracker, Chapter 28

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.  
The Boaz Safecracker, written in 2019, is my seventh novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

Fred Martin, a 1972 graduate of Boaz High School, returns to his hometown after practicing law and living in Huntsville for over thirty-five years with two goals in mind.  First, to distance himself from the loss of Susan, his wife of thirty-seven years who died in 2013 of cancer.  And second, to partner with his lifelong friend, Noah Waters, to crack the safes of Elton Rawlins and Doug Barber, two men who got under their skin as high school football players.

Little did Fred and Noah realize the secrets the two old Mosler safes protected.  Who murdered three Boaz High School seniors in the fall of 1973?  Is a near-half-century-old plan to destroy Fred’s sister and steal the inheritance from a set of 44-year-old illegitimate twins still alive and well?  How far would Fred’s mother go to protect her family?   

What starts out as an almost innocent prank turns life-threateningly serious the more Fred learns and the more safes he cracks. All the while, he falls in love with Connie Stewart, his one-date high school classmate who may conceal a secret or two herself.

Chapter 28

It was just a dream but at the time I didn’t know that.  It seemed so real.  It had to be early.  Someway, probably with some exceptionally exacting high-tech camera or air-sniffing DNA nebulizer, the police had learned I was the man in the black suit inside the Rawlins mansion.  They were nice enough not to knock down my door, but they were still pounding and yelling.  That’s when I realized it was a dream.  “Uncle Fred, get up.  Let’s go fishing.”

I reached over and activated my iPhone.  It was 7:20 a.m., Saturday morning.  I hadn’t returned from Connie’s until almost 1:00.  “Hold on, I’m coming.”  I could barely speak, much less yell.  It certainly wasn’t from all the kissing Connie and I had done.  I got up, slipped on a pair of running shorts and walked to the door.

Not only was Luke standing there, but Dad also.  Both were smiling.  “You’re going to lose a crop.”  It was one of Dad’s favorite sayings ever since I was a kid.  He kept on smiling.  I had to be patient.  At least he was doing something besides moping around, going through Mother’s things, and sitting at the kitchen table crying.

“We spent the night with Papa.  He promised to take me fishing and thought you might want to come.  Do you?”  I couldn’t tell if Luke was play-acting just for Dad.  The kid was 14, no 15 years old, and could go fishing on his own.  No doubt, he loved his great-grand.

“Let me get dressed and grab a pop-tart.”  I so badly needed to go back to bed but I simply couldn’t miss this opportunity to be with Dad.  My going surely would reflect how much I cared for the grieving old man.

“Skip the food.  We have a ton.  Mama D got up and cooked us biscuits.  Mom helped but she sucks at everything but French Fries and Chicken Fingers.”  Luke was full of words today.  I wondered if he was on Ritalin or something.  Dad just smiled and kept his mouth shut.

After we arrived and set-up our fishing lines, Luke handed me a sausage biscuit and asked if I’d follow him around the pond.  He said he wanted me to watch him catch a big bass off the special lure his dad had given him.  My mind was still half-asleep, but I figured Luke had another one of his unending questions.  I tried to opt out for now and stay with Dad under the giant oak, but he insisted I go.

When we walked outside of Dad’s earshot, which wasn’t far given his hearing loss, Luke said, “Tyler is trying to get me to ask Brother Robert to provide some evidence that God exists.”  Luke sure didn’t waste any time.

“Do you think you’re ready for that?”  I said, casting Dad’s green frog lure towards the shallow end of the pond.

“What do you mean?  Ready for what?”

“Luke, it’s one thing to talk privately about your beliefs, especially about your doubts, but it can open a whole can of worms when you start asking the wrong questions, especially to your youth pastor.”  Vivid and not so satisfying thoughts jumped into my mind from my own youth where I had come-out as the saying goes.  Funny thing, I had shared my doubts with Brother Robert’s grandfather, youth pastor Randy Miller.

“You’re saying I’ll be labeled an atheist?”  Luke asked.

“Possibly, but for sure you will become a focus for prayer, restoration, and revival.  It might get embarrassing.  Isn’t that still how it works?  The straying sheep gets attention, special efforts to win the weak back to the fold.”  I knew the routine.

“For now, what do you think Brother Robert would tell me, that is, if I asked him to provide evidence for God?”  Luke was a good kid, having never given his parents, my niece and her husband Brad, a minute’s trouble.  I feared what earthquake could be coming.

“I suspect he would point to both the Bible and nature.  He would call these things, special and general revelation.  Probably he would say something like, ‘Luke, God has revealed himself throughout the ages and continues to do so today.  All you must do is look around.  All nature, plants, animals, humans, scream out that they are created.  That’s enough alone to know God is real.  But, God loved us so much He gave us His written word.  The Bible reveals the heart of God.  It is infallible and inerrant.’”

“Yea, I can hear him now.  It’s almost like you were reading from his memorized text.  Let me ask, if Brother Robert responded to you just like you said, what would you say?”  I was hoping the small bass Luke had just pulled in would divert his attention.  I didn’t answer him but kept easing along casting.  “Next one will be a giant.  I just know it.  Hey Uncle Fred, did you hear me?”

“I heard you.  Luke, I’ve been on both sides of the divide, believer and non-believer.  There is far more evidence for the absence of God than His existence.  Christianity is a myth, a story that someway got started.  There’s no real solid evidence there ever was a Jesus but even if there was, that doesn’t mean he was who the Bible claims He was.  A good myth, and Christianity is probably the best one ever, builds a made-up story around something that is claimed to be historical.  In my opinion, the Bible itself, how it came to be, with all its inconsistencies, strongly denies the existence of the Christian God.  Keep in mind we are speaking of only one god, there have been and continue to be tons of gods people believe in.”

“Like Allah.”

“Right.  I would also say, since you asked, that although there are a lot scientists who still don’t know, there is no reason from what is known to conclude God, or any god, is needed.  All we can really speak to is our own universe.  We know so very little about the cosmos, what’s beyond our own giant world.  It could be that the natural world has always been here.”

“That’s where Brother Robert would go crazy.  He would say, ‘that defies common sense.  Everything must have a beginning.  Scientists themselves tell us the world came into being at the big bang.’”

“I don’t doubt him saying that.  Even though scientists don’t know what happened before the big bang there is, again, no reason to say, ‘God did it.’  Another universe could have birthed ours.  Christians like to argue that God is the first mover, the initial cause.  They often say, ‘something can’t come from nothing.’”

“Except, God.  Brother Robert would say that ‘God has always been, there has never been a time when He didn’t exist.”  Luke was trying to free his line from one of the underwater trees Dad had placed in the shallow end several years ago.

“There’s no evidence for that.  You could tell your youth pastor that maybe the universe, even the cosmos, has always been.  Here’s the thing.  There is no doubt many people sincerely believe the Bible story.  They love to talk about the miracles.  Truth is, all of them are fictional but they do make for a great story.  Even if the miracles occurred, say, Jesus did turn water into wine, if the details were truly known, there would be a natural explanation.  I always found it odd, especially when I was your age, that Jesus someway stopped performing miracles.”  I said.

“Brother Robert would say that God, Jesus, is still in the miracle-working business.”  Luke, no doubt, was a good listener.  He had spent fifteen years being filled with the great myth, while being kept away from the other side, the side that had some real evidence.

“I agree.  He would say that, but he couldn’t prove it.”

“Maybe not but he would say ‘to be a Christian requires faith.’”

“Luke, have you ever really thought about that statement?  Faith is belief in the absence of evidence, even belief despite contrary evidence.  Do you think if you had proof of something you would need faith?”  I probably was saying more than I should.

“That’s interesting.  I’ve never heard that.  The church makes you believe faith can move mountains, and that we should constantly pray for more faith.”  Luke could be a preacher right now.

I heard Dad yell. I turned and looked back.  He was still seated and was struggling with a big fish.  “Luke, go help Papa.  He may have caught Jaws.”   As Luke handed me his rod and reel and jogged towards Dad, I recalled how the big fish myth in the Martin pond had started and grown.  Granddad had admitted it wasn’t true, yet I had believed it, probably still do.

I continued around the pond for another thirty minutes, not getting a solid strike.  Dad hadn’t caught Jaws but from my view it was a nice bass.  Thoughts of Connie sprang to mind every time I threw out my line.  It was a good analogy.  I had gone fishing last night too.  With Connie.  I hadn’t caught anything then either.  I had to get control of my urges.  Even though I was sixty-four, I still wanted sexual pleasure.  More importantly, I still needed intimacy of another sort, the kind that only comes from deep conversation, walks in the rain, and sharing chocolate cupcakes in the dark. 

After a great meal at Oh-So-Good Barbecue, we returned to Connie’s.  She invited me in for coffee.  We sat on her couch in the great room and looked at old high school albums.  We both were littered across the pages.  The photos made for some good laughs.  The highlight of the evening, at least for me, was when she walked me to the door and gave me a quick kiss on the lips before I left.  We both smiled.  I wanted to say thanks or something else stupid, but I kept my mouth shut.   I could still taste the sweet strawberry lip gloss she was wearing.

Novel Excerpts—The Boaz Safecracker, Chapter 27

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.  
The Boaz Safecracker, written in 2019, is my seventh novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

Fred Martin, a 1972 graduate of Boaz High School, returns to his hometown after practicing law and living in Huntsville for over thirty-five years with two goals in mind.  First, to distance himself from the loss of Susan, his wife of thirty-seven years who died in 2013 of cancer.  And second, to partner with his lifelong friend, Noah Waters, to crack the safes of Elton Rawlins and Doug Barber, two men who got under their skin as high school football players.

Little did Fred and Noah realize the secrets the two old Mosler safes protected.  Who murdered three Boaz High School seniors in the fall of 1973?  Is a near-half-century-old plan to destroy Fred’s sister and steal the inheritance from a set of 44-year-old illegitimate twins still alive and well?  How far would Fred’s mother go to protect her family?   

What starts out as an almost innocent prank turns life-threateningly serious the more Fred learns and the more safes he cracks. All the while, he falls in love with Connie Stewart, his one-date high school classmate who may conceal a secret or two herself.

Chapter 27

Time crawled by all afternoon.  After leaving Rebecca’s I had driven home and tried to sleep in my recliner. That hadn’t gone so well.  Instead, I returned to Alfa and fielded calls for Nell since she was tied up with a State auditor.  The other agents had been smarter than me by cold-calling for new prospects outside the office, something we all hated to do.

At 5:00 p.m., I drove home, took a shower, and dressed for my first date (other than with Susan) in almost fifty years.   Beginning a year or so after she died on 09/18/2013, Noah had tried to get me back on the circuit, as he called it.  I felt guilty even thinking about it.  Although Susan and I had, regrettably, lost the passion we experienced the first few years after we married, we were comfortable with the other’s presence.  No doubt we loved each other but there was a negative side of becoming comfortable. 

Driving to Connie’s it dawned on me she was the last girl I dated before marrying Susan on June 12th, 1976, a little over two weeks after the two of us graduated from high school.  I wasn’t exactly sure when it was, but I believe it had to be in the fall of 1969.  Susan and I were in the tenth grade and our relationship was more on and off than on forever.  That came a little later.  Pulling into Connie’s driveway I thought how fragile life really was.  Things, simple things, can redirect one’s life so easily.  Who knows, just one more date with Connie back when I was barely fifteen could have pulled me away from Susan and every experience we shared for half a century.  I guess it was a good thing I had been too scared to ask the beautiful and sophisticated Connie out for that second date. 

I walked to the front door and although it was cracked open like before, I rang the doorbell.  Connie could have forgotten she had left it open and didn’t intend for it to be a signal for me to come on in.  I was about five minutes early.  What if she was half-naked running across the great-room?  I couldn’t let my mind go there.

It took her a couple of minutes to answer my ring.  It was silly, but I had broken out in a sweat while waiting, imagining she had changed her mind.  Finally, she opened the door.  “Sorry, I was out back looking at my roses.  I slipped coming up the stairs when I heard the bell.”  She leaned over and I saw a bad scrape on her left shin.  I couldn’t help but notice she had on a rather low-cut flowered dress.  My suspicion that she was well-endowed was empirically proven.

“Oh, that must hurt.  Let’s get that seen about.”  Now, I was ready to play doctor.  What was my mind doing?  I was thinking like that fifteen-year-old teenager I was the last time Connie and I went out.

“I get a little woozy at the site of blood.  I’m going to the sun room and sit down.  Do you mind getting my First Aid kit?  It’s in the linen closet inside the master bathroom, at the end of the hallway on the right.”

“Let me help you sit down then I’ll get the kit.”  I took Connie’s left arm with my left hand and placed my right hand and arm behind her for stability.  We made it fine until we reached the sun room.  It was two steps down from the great room.  I stepped down ahead of her, turned and faced her, and took both her hands.  She made the first step with only a little wobble.  The second step worked perfect for me.  It was as though she fainted and fell forward into me.  I caught her without discriminating how I did it.  She didn’t seem to mind that my right hand had no choice but to grab whatever was available to prevent another nasty fall.  Her butt was round and firm.  Another hypothesis proved.

“I’m so embarrassed for you to see me this way.  I’m such a wimp.”  Connie said as I finally got her to the swing.  “I’ll be okay here.  If you will, go fetch the First Aid kit.  You may have to push some towels around to find it.”

“Okay, I’ll be right back.  You sit still, don’t try to get up.  Promise?”  I wanted Connie healthy and mobile.  I sure didn’t want to spend Friday night at the Emergency Room. 

“I promise.”  She said, our eyes meeting for the first time since I discovered her bleeding leg.  They seemed a lighter blue than I remembered.  That might have been caused by her over-red face.  No doubt Connie didn’t like to reveal her vulnerability.

I turned and walked back into the great-room and down a long hallway passing a small library on my left, a half-bath on the right, and a guest bedroom on the left.  The master bedroom was on the right and it was a big one.  The room was furnished with expensive-looking antiques.  The bed was not made.  That surprised me.  But it wasn’t all tumbled up like my bed at home.  The covers on the left side were turned down and two pillows were backed up against the giant oak headboard.  She might have taken an afternoon nap.  Probably resting up for a hot date with the hot Fred Martin.  Settle down Fred, settle.

The master bathroom also was large, over-sized.   The linen closet was along the right wall as I entered.  Next to it was an antique washstand almost identical to Mother’s.  I opened the closet door and didn’t see the kit.  I moved some towels around on the shelf that was shoulder height.  No kit.  It must be on the next one up.  There was a step-stool on the floor of the closet under the first shelf from the bottom.  I pulled it out and stepped up, giving me another ten or twelve inches of height.  The kit was along the right wall of the closet.  I could read the lettering on the end of the plastic box.  I pushed a stack of sheets to the left and reached in and removed the kit.  As I was stepping off the stool it slipped out of my hand and fell to the floor.  I knelt on one knee.  That’s when I saw it.  A small sensor, like the type Noah used with his higher-end security systems.  I thought it was an odd place to hang the two inch by two-inch device.

I didn’t have time to ponder.  I grabbed the First Aid Kit and shoved the stool back inside the closet and returned to a smiling Connie.

“Do you mind doing the honors?”  She said, looking up at me but not smiling.  No doubt she was seriously allergic to the sight of blood.

“I’d be honored.”  My response made me feel like a drone, someone just tagging alone, virtually useless.  I looked around the room and saw a small table holding a single pot of a weird looking flower.  It looked almost like a jalapeno pepper plant.  I walked to it, set the pot on the floor and returned to Connie who was laying her head back against the top of the swing.  “Here, put your leg on top like this.”  As I instructed her I took her left leg by the ankle and lifted it across the top of the little table.

It didn’t take but a couple of minutes to open the kit and sterilize the scrap by daubing it with alcohol poured out on a thick piece of gauze.  I also sterilized my own right hand and spread some antibiotic ointment around and across the scrap.  I was glad the bleeding had stopped.  To be frank, I had, many times, worse places on my eyeball, as the old saying goes.  This thought led me to think maybe Connie was being overly dramatic just to get me to play with her leg.  As I firmly pressed the edges of a four-inch square band-aid over the wound I concluded I would be willing to play that game with the mysterious Connie anytime she wanted.

“Well, that’s about all the doctor can do for now.”  I said, hoping she hadn’t fallen asleep as I had given her the healing touch while I visibly explored the shapely and tanned legs of the woman who seemed to defy the aging process. 

Connie aroused quickly and within five minutes of me returning the weird flower to its perch while she refreshed her makeup we were in my car headed to Ft. Payne.  It had been her suggestion.  Oh-So-Good Barbecue had recently opened its second location.  The two-location chain had started in Oneonta, Alabama twenty years ago.  She shared how her, Angela, and Rebecca had for years eaten there once per quarter.

As we crossed Highway 431 headed towards Kilpatrick on Highway 168 I asked Connie how Angela was doing.

Connie hesitated, as though she didn’t hear me, or she was trying to frame just the proper response.  “Guilty, that’s how I would describe her.  And, that might not be totally accurate.”

“What would she have to be guilty over?”  I asked.

“I don’t know a whole lot, this was one area the two of them stayed mum, as though they held a closely guarded secret.”

“Who is they, you said the two of them?” 

“Angela and Rebecca.  You must have heard rumors about how their marriages came about.”  Connie said, placing her left elbow on the car’s console, touching my arm contending for the same space.

“No, I guess I haven’t.”

“Church scuttlebutt.  Elton and Doug fell for Rebecca and Angela’s advances.  The two men were still married.  This was less than five years ago.  You know Elton and Doug are a good ten years older than Rebecca and Angela?”

“Oh yes, I remember the two bastards from high school, hanging around trying to revive their former glory.”

“Woo sounds like you didn’t like those two.”

“I didn’t.  Back to your story.  How did Rebecca and Angela convince those two?”  I must have liked Connie’s description of the two bastards.

“Like I said, I really don’t know the inside scoop.  But, I do know that it was after the robbery.”  Connie said, now fooling with the air conditioner vent.  “My bad fall has me all hot, how do you turn up the air conditioner?”  My mind raced to the cesspool Mother constantly warned me about from the time I reached puberty.   Hot, hay, heaven.  With Connie, naked. 

I adjusted the temperature gage all the way to 60 degrees.  “What robbery?”  I asked feeling like I was a complete outsider to the community I had grown up in.

“First Baptist Church of Christ.  Five or so years ago.  The coins and jewelry Benjamin Ericson, well, his family after his death, gave to the church.  Stolen right out of an old safe.”

“Who was accosted?”  It was a confusing question at best.  I knew robbery and burglary were two distinct crimes.  Robbery was the forceful taking of property from another person.  Burglary didn’t include this element.

“Accosted?  Do you mean confronted?”  Connie asked.

“You could say that.  When you said robbery I automatically concluded the coins and jewelry were taken by force.”

“Sorry, I’m not a lawyer.  I should have said the items were taken.  No one was confronted.  I think it was a Sunday night after church.  Pastor Warren discovered the burglary the next morning.”

“I’m confused.  Refresh me, what does this have to do with Angela and Rebecca?”

“Again, I’m not sure but that’s when two couples started taking shape.”  Connie said, pulling a Kleenex from her purse and tamping it across her forehead.

“Are you okay?”  You seem uncomfortable.”

“I’ll be fine.  I think it’s just one of my hot flashes.  Either that or you’re sending out some vibes.”  She said and laughed a too-loud a laugh.

“So, Angela and Rebecca kind of conned Elton and Doug into marrying them?  Is that what you’re saying?”

“Maybe.  Remember, the three of us have been driving to Oneonta for barbecue for years.  It seemed they were more open and willing to talk when we were out of town together.”

“My guess is that the two ladies could have wanted to charm the older men.  Gain access to their money.  Isn’t that how it normally works?”  I asked.

“Do you think that’s what I’m doing now?  You are definitely older than me.”  Connie had a wicked sense of humor.

“By two years.  That doesn’t qualify.  And, I’m not loaded like I suspect those two were.”  I must really like ‘those two.’

“It may have had something to do with the money, but I think it was much more than that.  Angela and Rebecca can be, let me see how to put this.  They can be cruel.  I have a feeling they had something on the two old codgers and played their hand just right.”

This struck me as odd.  During my meetings with Rebecca I hadn’t noticed anything but sadness and serious looks of loss.  “Do you have any idea what the two ladies knew?”

“Again, I’m not sure, but you should know they, Rebecca and Angela, had every right to seek some revenge against Elton and Doug.  Those two were the ring leaders back in high school against Rebecca, Angela, and the other three aliens: Johnny Stewart, Allan Floyd, and Tommy Jones.”

“Those five were called the Aliens.  I’ve heard.  Did the Bible burning precipitate the bad blood between those seven?”

We continued to talk on the same subject all the way to Ft. Payne.  So far, the night hadn’t been much akin to a date.  As we walked into Oh-So-Good Barbecue, I hoped things could transform towards becoming friends and more.

Novel Excerpts—The Boaz Safecracker, Chapter 26

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.  
The Boaz Safecracker, written in 2019, is my seventh novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

Fred Martin, a 1972 graduate of Boaz High School, returns to his hometown after practicing law and living in Huntsville for over thirty-five years with two goals in mind.  First, to distance himself from the loss of Susan, his wife of thirty-seven years who died in 2013 of cancer.  And second, to partner with his lifelong friend, Noah Waters, to crack the safes of Elton Rawlins and Doug Barber, two men who got under their skin as high school football players.

Little did Fred and Noah realize the secrets the two old Mosler safes protected.  Who murdered three Boaz High School seniors in the fall of 1973?  Is a near-half-century-old plan to destroy Fred’s sister and steal the inheritance from a set of 44-year-old illegitimate twins still alive and well?  How far would Fred’s mother go to protect her family?   

What starts out as an almost innocent prank turns life-threateningly serious the more Fred learns and the more safes he cracks. All the while, he falls in love with Connie Stewart, his one-date high school classmate who may conceal a secret or two herself.

Chapter 26

Alfa’s underwriting department was either taking on Red Bull intravenously or I was becoming a master at selecting near-perfect clients, those individuals who posed the least risk for the company.  Rebecca’s policy arrived by courier late yesterday afternoon.  I had called her a little before 5:00 p.m. and gave her the news.  I had hoped to deliver the policy and have all day today to focus on my date tonight with the lovely Connie.  Even before asking her if I could drop by, Rebecca announced she was getting ready for a dinner at Angela’s house.  She asked if I could come this morning.  She had even said, “that will give us more time to talk.” 

 When I arrived, Rebecca asked me to follow her to the library.  From my earlier uninvited visit, I had seen the large dining room to the right of the front entrance.  On my drive over, I figured that is where she would want to meet.  It felt strange to return to the site of my first safe-cracking conquest, almost, I suppose, like returning to the battlefield where someway courage and bravery won out over fear and cowardice.

Rebecca motioned me to sit in a dark brown leather chair across from the giant oak desk that backed up towards a wall of bookshelves filled with a ton of books.  “This was Elton’s favorite room in this grand old house.  Every morning, early, he would come to this desk and either read or scribble.  He always wanted to write a book but, as far as I know, never could pull it off.  He had trouble keeping his butt in this chair long enough to write that much.”

I wanted to be considerate, so I said, “I want to say again how sorry I am for your loss.  I suspect it is lonely in this wonderful home without Elton.” 

“It is but what makes it even worse is not knowing if I’ll be able to stay here.  Elton was a wealthy man but most of his assets were in land and buildings.  Dalton is trying to sort it all out.  There is a little money but there’s some rather obtuse trust language he is trying to interpret.”

I had almost forgotten that I was carrying a check for $560,000 from Alfa Insurance payable to Elton Rawlins.  “Let me go ahead and give you this.”  I opened my notebook and removed the check.  When Rebecca took it from my outstretched hand she said, “I could still kill Elton.  He was supposed to re-title the coins and jewelry to me.  He kept promising but just never got around to it.”

“I wish he had.  I apologize for Alfa having to make the check out to Elton.  By law, they must pay the policyholder when there’s a claim.  In this case, the estate of the policyholder.”  I wish there was something I could have done to help you.”

“That’s sweet.  There is something you can do.  I would be most grateful if you would look at Elton’s will.  You’re a lawyer and most likely will know what it means.”

“I am a lawyer, but I no longer practice law.  I feel it’s probably best if you talk with Dalton and see what he says.”  I wanted to help Rebecca, but I also didn’t want to deal with the appearance of any impropriety.  Then, it dawned on me.  Why would Rebecca have Elton’s will?  Especially, if Dalton was handling his estate.  He would have the original document.  There shouldn’t be a copy in existence.

“You lawyers have this look.  I can tell you are confused and asking yourself why I have Elton’s will.”  Rebecca said.

“You definitely have a mind-reading skill.”

“Please don’t say anything about this but the will I have is a new one.  For some reason, when Elton and I were in Gulf Shores he had this idea of simplifying all his finances.  Other than the two trusts.  He had me drive him to a lawyer in Orange Beach.  Here, please look this over.  I really need your opinion.  I’m more than willing to pay you.”

“No need for that but just know I’m not acting here as your attorney.  I’ll look at it simply as a friend.  Agree?”  I had to make sure Rebecca understood exactly what I was offering.

She left the room.  “Give me a minute.”  When she returned and handed me the document, titled, “Last Will and Testament of Elton Frank Rawlins,” I immediately became suspicious.  At most, I was holding a two or three page will.  This was unusual for someone like Elton who owned a lot of real estate, and stolen coins and jewelry.  I was glad I was thinking and not speaking.

“Elton said this will leaves everything to me.  He did it because he felt guilty about not having kept his word over the coins and jewelry, and a few other unfulfilled promises.”

I took a couple of minutes and read the document.  It appeared to be authentic, from its face that is.  It was properly signed, notarized, and even had the optional affidavit attached that waives the executor’s duty of producing the witnesses at the time the will is probated.  Rebecca was correct.  Elton, by this will, left everything he owned to Rebecca.  “Just to be clear, you realize a will only dictates what happens to the decedent’s property, what he owns at death?  It wouldn’t cover, for example, properties owned by an irrevocable trust, or life insurance proceeds that were payable to a beneficiary other than the estate.”  I figured I lost Rebecca when I mentioned a trust.

“I know all that stuff.  I also know both of Elton’s trusts were irrevocable.  He placed quite a bit of his real estate in those trusts.”

“It’s none of my business, but may I ask who the beneficiaries of those trusts are?”

“That damn woman, Rita Battles, Elton’s first wife.”

“I hate to put it this way, but I thought she was dead.”  I said.

“You’re thinking of Ellen Cranford.  I don’t count her.  That one didn’t last very long.  Elton and Rita were married for nearly fifty years.  He grew to hate the woman, but I suspect she knew where the bodies were buried.”  I looked at Rebecca, shocked that she would say such a thing.  “I was only kidding.”

“Something else that’s none of my business, but I’ll ask anyway.  What assets did Elton own at his death?  Outright?”

“This house for one thing.  And some cash.  Of course, the coins and jewelry.”

“Now, I have a question.  Would I be better off forgetting this will and just being satisfied with the cash?”  Rebecca asked confusing me even more.

“The only way for you to become the legal owner of Elton’s property, what he owned at his death, is to have this will, his final will and testament, probated.  Please hear this carefully, Dalton, with the guidance of the probate court, will have to determine which of the two wills is valid.  No one can die with two wills.”

“Here’s possibly a critical point.  What if only I know about the cash?”  Now, I wished I hadn’t agreed to this conversation.

“What exactly do you mean?  The bank would know of the cash.  The account or accounts would be titled to Elton.”  I said, trying to avoid what I suspected was coming.

“The money isn’t in the bank.  Elton made sure of that.”  That was what I was expecting.  Elton Rawlins, for sure, wasn’t the fine deacon everybody thought him to be.  He was most likely doing deals and someway avoiding paying taxes.

“Rebecca, you should know it isn’t safe to keep a lot of cash lying around.  It can grow wings and fly away if you know what I mean.  It can also expose you to some unsavory people.”

“I appreciate your concern but it’s safe from both angles.  Its locked away in a grand old safe and no one besides me and you know the cash even exists.”  My mind raced back to that fateful night when I was here in this very room exploring that grand old safe.  Could I have missed the cash?  What a dumb question.  There was no way.”

“Here’s a thought.  It seems odd the burglars didn’t take the cash when they stole your, Elton’s, coins and jewelry?”  I said, feeling I needed to get up and walk away, but we still hadn’t discussed Rebecca’s long-term health care policy.  I had to get her signature on the Alfa receipt form.

“Good question, but the burglar, it seems there was only one according to Elton’s camera, didn’t know about it.  It’s apparently better hid than this one.”  I couldn’t believe Rebecca got out of her chair and walked over to the smaller bookshelf in the corner.  She reached behind a set of Thomas Jefferson biographies and flipped a switch.  Just like I had done.  The shelves swiveled and the grand old Mosler stood exactly where it was a few weeks ago.  “This is where the burglar found the coins and jewelry.  Elton was too smart to put all his eggs in one basket.  But, apparently, he was dumb enough to share the combination.  The burglar had to have it to access the safe’s contents.  I’m trusting he didn’t share with anyone about the hidden cash.”

My best efforts to redirect the conversation were successful.  I advised Rebecca to discuss the Orange Beach will with Dalton.  Neither of us was in much of a mood to discuss her new policy.  She was satisfied that it was issued as requested.  With the signed receipt in hand, along with a check covering the entire first year’s premium, I escaped the Hunt house, eager to talk with Noah about a newly discovered safe loaded with cash.  No doubt, I was out of my mind.

Novel Excerpts—The Boaz Safecracker, Chapter 25

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.  
The Boaz Safecracker, written in 2019, is my seventh novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

Fred Martin, a 1972 graduate of Boaz High School, returns to his hometown after practicing law and living in Huntsville for over thirty-five years with two goals in mind.  First, to distance himself from the loss of Susan, his wife of thirty-seven years who died in 2013 of cancer.  And second, to partner with his lifelong friend, Noah Waters, to crack the safes of Elton Rawlins and Doug Barber, two men who got under their skin as high school football players.

Little did Fred and Noah realize the secrets the two old Mosler safes protected.  Who murdered three Boaz High School seniors in the fall of 1973?  Is a near-half-century-old plan to destroy Fred’s sister and steal the inheritance from a set of 44-year-old illegitimate twins still alive and well?  How far would Fred’s mother go to protect her family?   

What starts out as an almost innocent prank turns life-threateningly serious the more Fred learns and the more safes he cracks. All the while, he falls in love with Connie Stewart, his one-date high school classmate who may conceal a secret or two herself.

Chapter 25

When I arrived at the office Nell directed me to drive to Gadsden and the Goodyear Tire and Rubber plant.  It seemed Ted Eubanks, another agent in the office, had also called in sick and couldn’t make his three o’clock appointment.  I didn’t have any choice but to comply.  Goodyear was our biggest account and once every month me or one of the other five agents in the Boaz office met with the new hires to discuss and enroll them in our supplemental medical plan that offered great coverages for catastrophic illnesses such as cancer and dementia.  It was Ted’s day, but I was backup.

During the drive down, all I could think about was Elton and Doug.  In a twisted sort of way, I entertained thoughts of being happy they both were dead.  It’s a little weird how things that had happened nearly half a century earlier were powerful enough to drive thoughts and actions today.  I’m not sure how I made it to the Goodyear plant because I certainly didn’t focus on my driving.

The first time I saw them was after football practice one day when I was in the ninth grade.  Both Elton and Doug were former football stars at Boaz High in the early 1960’s.  Thus, they were around ten years older than me.  When I first met them, they had already completed college.  I think Elton finished at Alabama and Doug at Auburn, in their School of Pharmacy.  What started my disdain for Elton was his eagerness to show off his athletic skills even though he had been out of high school for going on ten years.  That day, even though practice was over, Coach Hicks let the two talk to the team and demonstrate some pass-rushing techniques.  I don’t know why Noah and I were chosen.  We, lowly ninth-graders, and though good enough to make the B team, were still on the scraggly side of physical strength and fitness.  Neither Noah or I fared too well as we attempted to block Elton and Doug’s attempt to reach Coach Hicks standing in as quarterback.  Elton busted my chin with what I always believed was an illegal upper cut, and Doug twisted Noah’s right arm enough to cause a bad sprain.

If that had been the extent of mine and Noah’s observations and dealings with Elton and Doug, I likely wouldn’t remember it today.  But, it was much more.  Someway, the two fully infiltrated both the football team and the youth group.  Coach Hicks made them assistant coaches.  Youth Pastor Randy Miller willingly let the two be right-hand teachers and quasi-ministers.  Seeing Elton and Doug in two environments gave us a very mixed picture of who the men really were.  During football practices (they seemed to always be there), they were like most any other heathen, yelling and cussing, and occasionally (at least once per week) telling an off-color joke, either about a woman or a black person.  At youth group, they were virtually Jesus clones, meek and mild, humble and encouraging.

This went on during all my high school days.  Things got worse when Biology teacher Ricky Miller started the Brights club and his Safe House in downtown Boaz.  Elton and Doug attempted to shut both down.  Both men were community leaders and apparently well-respected.  Elton, after college, had joined his family’s long-established business, Rawlins Real Estate & Development Company.  Doug worked for Boaz Discount Drugs several years before starting the Neighborhood Pharmacy.  Elton, to no avail, tried to get the City to condemn Ricky’s building.  Doug constantly tried to stir up local sentiment, arguing that Robert was polluting the minds of our young people and eventually the City would become a Sodom and Gomorrah. 

The most file attack ever upon my favorite teacher was outlandish accusations Elton and Doug spread about the disappearance of Esmeralda Gomez.  At the end of my ninth grade, this beautiful, sweet, and athletic fourteen-year-old had moved to Boaz with her family.  She was mine and Noah’s age.  By the tenth grade she had made cheerleader and ranked number one in our class academically.  Also, less than a year after arriving in town, she was a faithful member of the Bright’s club.  She ran for class president in the eleventh grade and vigorously encouraged all students to become a Bright. 

I remember it as though it was yesterday.  It was after the Albertville game of my eleventh-grade year.  It was a home game.  After Noah and I had removed our sweaty and grungy uniforms and showered we came out of the field house and saw Elton and Doug in the end zone of the football field with several of the cheerleaders including Esmeralda.  For a reason I still to this day don’t know, as Noah and I walked outside the stadium he motioned me to hide behind the ticket booth right next to the entrance gate.  In a few minutes we saw Denise and Vanessa and Wanda pass through the gate, get in Vanessa’s car and drive off.  After what seemed like another ten minutes I whispered to Noah that I was ready to leave.  About that time, we heard Elton saying something like, “your parents may have to work later than they planned.  Doug and I can drive you to your house.”  I will never forget what Esmeralda said, “I’m not allowed that.”  Doug then said, “you sure don’t need to stay here.  It’s not safe for a pretty girl to be alone.”  It was like she was torn between wanting to obey her parents and knowing they would want her safe. 

The next day, Noah and I heard that Esmeralda had disappeared.  We told our parents what we had seen and heard, and they had made us tell Boaz police the same thing.  From everything Noah and I ever saw or heard, life went on just the same for Elton and Doug.  Except for their lying.  Rumors were, they had given a statement to Boaz police they had seen Esmeralda at the Safe House later that Friday night and that, as best they could tell, only her and Ricky were present. 

I arrived at the Goodyear employee lounge just as my mind wanted to dwell on the ordeal Ricky faced from being falsely accused.  It still made me mad how Elton and Doug skated past a criminal charge.  Of course, I didn’t know for sure, but my gut had always told me that Elton and Doug had kidnapped Esmeralda, probably raped her, and later killed her and disposed of her body.  I had wanted all my life for that cold case to heat up.