The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.
The Boaz Stenographer, written in 2018, is my fourth novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.
Book Blurb
Walt Shepherd, a 35 year veteran of the White House’s stenographic team, is fired by President Andrew Kane for refusing to lie.
Walt returns to his hometown of Boaz, Alabama and renews his relationship with Regina Gillan, his high school sweetheart, who he had ditched right before graduation to marry the daughter of a prominent local businessman. Regina has recently moved back to Boaz after forty years in Chicago working at the Tribune. She is now editor of the Sand Mountain Reporter, a local newspaper.
Walt and Regina’s relationship transforms into a once in life love at the same time they are being immersed in a growing local and national divide between Democrats and traditional Republicans, and extremist Republicans (known as Kanites) who are becoming more dogmatic about the revolution that began during President Kanes campaign.
Walt accepts two part-time jobs. One as a stenography instructor at Snead State Community College in Boaz, and one as an itinerant stenographer with Rains & Associates out of Birmingham.
Walt later learns the owner of Rains & Associates is also one of five men who created the Constitution Foundation and is involved in a sinister plot to destroy President Kane, but is using an unorthodox method to achieve its objective. The Foundation is doing everything it can to prevent President Kane from being reelected in 2020, and is scheming to initiate a civil war that will hopefully restore allegiance to the U.S. Constitution.
While Walt is writing a book, The Coming Civil War, he is, unwittingly, gathering key information for the Constitution Foundation.
Will Walt discover a connection between the Foundation and the deaths of three U.S. Congressmen in time to save his relationship with Regina, prevent President Kane from being reelected as the defacto head of a Christian theocracy, and the eruption of a civil war that could destroy the Nation ?
Chapter 8
I decided to get up early and visit Mother. I was ashamed that I had only visited her five times during the nearly two months I had been back in Boaz. Other than the first visit, where she did smile at me when I walked in and whispered a goodbye when I left, our visits had become routine. I would gently knock on her door, receive no response, go in, walk-over to her sitting in your lounging chair, take her right hand, hug her, and then sit in front of her in a straight-back chair, and talk about old times, hoping and waiting for any response. There had been none, so far. I hoped today would be different.
I signed with the receptionist at the information desk and walked two long halls back to Mother’s room. I lightly tapped on her door and heard, “come in.” I was temporarily encouraged but then realized when I opened the door that the words had come from a nurse’s aide. Mother sat in her chair and looked at me. No smile, but at least she had looked my way.
“Are you Harriet’s son?”
“I am.”
“Please tell her she needs to leave the air-conditioning set on at least 78 degrees. I know it’s winter-time, but these rooms don’t know that. I came in a few minutes ago and it was nearly 90 degrees in here. If you click over to Heat, the thermostat doesn’t work, and it thinks you want to boil. If you click over to Cool and turn down the thermostat to
78 degrees or below, the unit will keep the room temperature comfortable. These old units need throwing away.”
“I’ll remind her when I leave. Would you be so kind, along with your team-mates, to look in on Mother? By the way, when is Brookdale going to address the heating and air-conditioning issue?”
“We’ll try. We have a full-house right now. Talk to the Director about your last question.” The aide said walking towards the door. “Don’t forget to remind her. Her getting too hot and breathing all this stale air can cause pneumonia. She doesn’t want that.”
“Me either.” I said as the short and wide woman left Mother’s room.
I walked over to Mother, took her right hand and hugged her, this time kissing her on her forehead. I pulled over the straight-back chair and sat down in front of her. She was dressed in a navy-blue jogging outfit, pants and top, the top being, to me, an overly thick sweatshirt. I looked her in the eyes and saw a glimpse of my real mother for the first time since I returned from D.C. I may have been simply imagining. I’m not sure. But, it seemed we were back on our back porch, sitting in the swing, that Sunday night, me at fifteen, and her at thirty-eight.
This glimpse and my mind recalling my conversation with the on-duty nurse I nearly bumped into turning down the last hallway on the way here, brought tears to my eyes. That was an understatement. I was crying.
The nurse had said Mother’s condition had deteriorated a great deal since she moved in nearly three years ago. When she arrived, Mother could get up out of her chair, and with the use of her walker, get about in her room. Now, she can barely sit up in her chair. And, she has no power to move herself at all. The nurse said that aides transfer her from her bed to her walker, from her walker to her chair, from her chair to the bathroom, even though Mother now wears diapers. Also, she said that Mother’s near inability to speak was common for
Parkinson’s patients in the disease’s final stage—something about how it affects the throat muscles. The biggest shocker came when the nurse said that Mother’s days here may be limited. When the first of two things happen, inability to swallow, or when she can no longer sit up in her chair, will be the time she must transfer to a nursing home. The nurse said Brookdale, like all other assisted living facilities, is not equipped to deal with either of these problems. These issues require skilled nursing care, the type care provided only by a nursing home.
I took out my handkerchief and dabbed my eyes. It took me a few minutes to suppress my crying. This alone, that is, my crying, troubled me. I wasn’t the crying type. All my experience told me this. However, I was now dealing with a whole new experience. One, that broke my heart. Seeing my dear mother, broken by Parkinson’s, broke my heart.
When I could finally see Mother again, she was half-pointing towards an end-table beside her chair. There was a half-folded sheet of paper with my name written on it.
“Mom, do you want the sheet of paper?” I asked feeling more tears about to surface.
She nodded her head, forward and back up just a little.
I took the paper and handed it towards her. She moved her head sideways back and forth just a little.
“Do you want me to look at it?”
Another affirmative nod, which was hardly a nod at all but I knew her response wasn’t a ‘no.’
I opened the sheet and immediately recognized DeeDee’s handwriting. It was the same that had printed my name on the outside of the paper, but I hadn’t even thought to question it.
“Mother, I assume you want me to read this. Is that correct?” Another affirmative nod.
DeeDee introduced what was to follow by saying that Mother had asked her to write all this down. I glanced down to the bottom of the sheet and it was signed, “Harriett Shepherd, by DeeDee.” Written beside her signature was the date, February 10, 2018. It was now February 25th.
Basically, Mother’s message to me was short and simple, stay open-minded about God. Apparently, Mother had shared with DeeDee several events that had taken place during my youth, including that infamous meeting on the back porch when I was fifteen. Another one was the talk we had in my room after I came in at 3:00 a.m., the morning after I graduated from Boaz High School. That meeting included her having the two of us kneel beside my bed and her praying a rather lengthy prayer which included her pleading God, Jesus, and the Holy Spirit, to gift me with what she called, ‘Walt’s Damascus Road unveiling.’ At the bottom of the sheet, DeeDee had written. “Walt, Mother had me help her get down on her knees beside her chair to pray (it took two aides to help her back up after she finished). These are her exact words, no paraphrasing, ‘Lord, open Walt’s eyes, show him your face, please
God, give me a sign before I die.”
I reread the note and looked back up at Mother. Now, she was the one with tears.
“Mother, you know I love you and have always respected your beliefs. For years now, I have had a closed mind when it came to God, but I promise you, right here, right now, I’ll change that. I’m going to be looking for that sign you talked about. I am going to be wholly open to having my Damascus Road unveiling.”
The tears kept rolling down Mother’s cheeks.
“Mother, please believe we are back on the porch having just finished the two-hour talk we had when I was fifteen.”
Until lunchtime around 11:30, I talked, and Mother listened, slightly nodding up and down, or sideways. At first, I shared with her the significant moments in our relationship. My tears almost erupted when I realized the huge gap between a host of wonderful moments growing up, and now, nearly a half-century later. While I was in college I called Mother every week. Since leaving Charlottesville in 1976, our contact had been very sporadic, maybe eight to ten times per year. I realized here, now, how I had broken Mother’s heart, the one person primarily responsible for my life.
When an aide came in with Mother’s lunch tray she told me she needed my space. I asked her to give me just a moment. I knelt down in front of Mother, reached over, with tears in my eyes, kissed her on both cheeks, bowed my head and prayed, ‘Lord, oh Jesus, I want to hear from you. And please, take care of my Mother.’
I squeezed Mother’s hands and stood with a flush-red wet and sloppy face. She slowly raised her head and smiled. I could barely breathe out the words. “Goodbye Mother, my Queen.” I turned and walked out of her room and down the two long hallways contemplating my next visit could be at Mother’s bedside in a nursing home.








































