Welcome back to The Pencil’s Edge! In this post, we’ll dive into Fictionary’s 38 Story Elements—the essential building blocks of storytelling that can take your manuscript from good to great. These elements are divided into three supercategories: Character, Plot, and Setting. By analyzing and refining each of these, you’ll ensure your story engages readers on every level.
Let’s summarily explore these elements acknowledging we’ll go much deeper into each story element over the next several weeks.
Character Story Elements
1. Characters per Scene
Identify which characters are present in each scene. Ensure the right characters are getting the appropriate “page time” and contributing meaningfully to the story.
2. Point of View (POV)
Consistency in POV builds trust with readers. Ensure each scene’s POV character provides a unique lens to experience the story.
3. POV Goal
The POV character’s goal drives the scene forward. Ask: What does this character want in this moment?
4. Character Arc
Focus on the protagonist’s external journey. Each scene should impact them positively or negatively, moving them closer to their ultimate goal.
5. POV Goal Internal
This internal goal ties to the character’s personal struggles or weaknesses. How does their internal conflict shape their decisions?
6. Goal Related to Plot
Ensure each goal is relevant to the overarching plot, enhancing believability and cohesion.
7. What if Goal Fails?
High stakes keep readers engaged. Clarify what the character risks if they fail to achieve their goal.
8. Scene Impact on POV Character and Protagonist
Track the emotional arc of your characters. Does the scene positively or negatively impact them?
9. POV Knowledge Gained
Consider what the POV character learns in each scene. Does it influence their decisions and drive the plot forward?
10. Characters in Motion
Characters should be actively engaging with their environment. Movement adds depth and keeps scenes dynamic.
Plot Story Elements
11. Scene Name
Each scene should have a clear purpose. A descriptive scene name helps track its role in the story.
12. Story Arc
Your story’s arc should include five critical points: Inciting Incident, Plot Point 1, Midpoint, Plot Point 2, and Climax. These provide structure without being formulaic.
13. Purpose
Every scene must serve the story. If a scene doesn’t drive the plot or develop characters, consider revising or cutting it.
14. Scene Opening Type
Scenes can open with dialogue, thought, description, or action. Vary your openings to keep readers intrigued.
15. Scene Closing Type
The way you close a scene matters. Dialogue, thought, description, or action can leave a lasting impression.
16. Anchored
Anchor every scene in POV, setting, and time to orient your readers.
17. Entry Hook
Grab attention immediately with a compelling hook. Ask: Does the opening make the reader want to keep going?
18. Exit Hook
End each scene with a question, twist, or revelation that compels readers to continue.
19. Tension
Every scene should include tension to maintain reader engagement.
20. Conflict
Conflict is the action driving the scene, whether it’s a fight, argument, or a battle of wills.
21. Revelation
When a character learns something new, it should prompt a decision or change in action.
22. Backstory
Introduce backstory strategically, avoiding info dumps that slow pacing.
23. Flashback
Use flashbacks sparingly and actively. Ensure they serve the story and enrich the reader’s understanding.
24. Scene Middle
Every scene should have a beginning, middle, and end. The middle is where tension escalates or complications arise.
25. Scene Climax
Each scene’s climax should resolve or intensify the main conflict, keeping the story’s momentum.
26. Action/Sequel
Alternate between action (events happening) and sequel (characters reacting). This balance keeps the pacing dynamic.
Setting Story Elements
27. Location
Choose meaningful settings that enhance the plot, characters, or theme. Ask: Why is this location important?
28. Date/Time
Establishing when scenes take place helps readers follow the timeline.
29. Objects
Objects can anchor a scene and add layers of meaning. Ensure props and details are purposeful.
30. Sights
Use descriptive visuals to bring your setting to life.
31. Smells
Smells can evoke memories or set the mood. Use them strategically.
32. Sounds
Incorporate auditory details to immerse readers.
33. Tastes
Taste is an often-overlooked sense but can add depth to scenes.
34. Touch
Describe textures or sensations to help readers feel connected to the world you’ve built.
35. Emotional Impact
Select locations that amplify the emotional stakes of a scene.
36. Location Split
A location change mid-scene can add tension or shift pacing. Alternatively, merge short scenes in the same location to slow the pace if needed.
37. Weather
Weather isn’t just background; it can set the tone, create obstacles, or heighten tension.
Final Thoughts
Fictionary’s 38 Story Elements provide a robust framework for analyzing and enhancing your story. By considering how each element contributes to your manuscript, you can create a cohesive, engaging, and emotionally resonant narrative.
In our next post, we’ll dive deeper into Character Story Elements, exploring how to create unforgettable characters that resonate with readers. Stay tuned and keep crafting!
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