Novel Excerpts–The Boaz Scorekeeper, Chapter 73

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.
The Boaz Scorekeeper, written in 2017, is my second novel. I'll post it a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

I knew without doubt that it would happen.  As the old saying goes, ‘the DA can indict a ham sandwich.’  The indictment process before a Grand Jury is totally secret.  The defense has no right to attend these proceedings.  The District Attorney summons witnesses to serve as jurors.  He then presents them with the evidence he wants them to hear.  It is truly a rare thing for the Grand Jury to fail to indict.

The capital murder indictment declared that I had, on Saturday, November 4, 2017, kidnapped and murdered Gina Culver Tillman.  It was a two-count indictment, one charge for kidnapping and the other one for the murder.  The indictment was made capital by statute, by one of the listed aggravating circumstances.  In my indictment, murder during a kidnapping.

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Author: Richard L. Fricks

Writer, observer, and student of presence. After decades as a CPA, attorney, and believer in inherited purpose, I now live a quieter life built around clarity, simplicity, and the freedom to begin again. I write both nonfiction and fiction: The Pencil-Driven Life, a memoir and daily practice of awareness, and the Boaz, Alabama novels—character-driven stories rooted in the complexities of ordinary life. I live on seventy acres we call Oak Hollow, where my wife and I care for seven rescued dogs and build small, intentional spaces that reflect the same philosophy I write about. Oak Hollow Cabins is in the development stage (opening March 1, 2026), and is—now and always—a lived expression of presence: cabins, trails, and quiet places shaped by the land itself. My background as a Fictionary Certified StoryCoach Editor still informs how I understand story, though I no longer offer coaching. Instead, I share reflections through The Pencil’s Edge and @thepencildrivenlife, exploring what it means to live lightly, honestly, and without a script. Whether I’m writing, building, or walking the land, my work is rooted in one simple truth: Life becomes clearer when we stop trying to control the story and start paying attention to the moment we’re in.

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