Internal Obstacles

I’m currently taking a writing and blogging sabbatical due to family health issues. For now, I’ll repost selected articles from my Fiction Writing School.

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An obstacle is the manifestation in a plot event of a problem. Internal obstacles are the instances of opposition that the character faces which arise out of her or his internal problem. Stories establish a direction by setting a want and a goal for the character. On the way to that goal, the author hurls every obstacle possible at the character – because if things are easy for the character, there is no tension in the story. The biggest obstacle may come from within, from the internal problem. This may be the most important thing for the character to learn or overcome in order to grow into a changed, usually better person. Before the climax, the scale of the problem must become clear, which means the character cannot overcome an internal obstacle first time round.

In stories, characters are faced with obstacles.

These obstacles come in various forms and degrees of magnitude. And they may have different dimensions: they may be internal, external, or antagonistic.

Often the obstacles that resound most with a significant proportion of the audience are the ones that force the main characters to face and deal with problems within themselves, in their nature. In other words, with their internal problem.


Internal obstacles are the symptoms of the characters’ flaws or shortcomings, i.e. of the internal problem. The audience perceives them in scenes in which the character’s flaw prevents her progress. 


Not every story features characters with internal problems. An internal problem is not strictly speaking necessary in order to create an exciting story.

But it helps.

The Emotional Truth

An internal problem makes the character appear fallible – and thus more credible, more human, more like us. Internal problems are invariably emotional and private. They express the inner life of a character, and often reflect our own inner feelings. They are therefore usually far closer to the reality experienced by the recipient of the story, the audience or reader, than the surface structure of the story, which is based on the external problems of the characters. Everybody knows feelings like doubt, fear, pride, desire, anger, etc. We can relate to emotions like that more intensely than we can relate to, say, the work of an FBI agent, the adventures of an archaeologist, even the ordinary life of an Irishman on a June day in 1904. Or rather, we are interested in the work of the FBI agent, the adventures of the archaeologist, the ordinary life of the Irishman because they have emotions that we know.

So fairly early on in the story, while the audience or reader is being introduced to the characters, the story may also provide clues about the main character’s internal problem. The character then sets forth on the story journey, hoping to achieve the want and the goal, which the story has also established quite early on.

The Story Journey

At first, small hindrances turn up that need to be overcome or circumnavigated in order to continue. They may appear as tests.

It is vital for the whole concept of the internal problem that in the first few instances where the character bumps into obstacles that challenge the internal problem, the character will fail. These obstacles or tests show the audience/reader as well as the character that the internal problem is jeopardizing the character’s chances of overall success. The problem reveals itself as a negative character trait which will prevent the character from achieving his or her want. Only if the character can recognize the negativity of the character trait – usually round about the middle of the story – and change it into a positive one towards the end, will the character have overcome the internal obstacle and solved the internal problem.

In other words, an internal obstacle is a manifestation of the internal problem. The obstacle shows us, the audience, an instance of how behaviour typical to the character is engendered by the character’s internal problem, and how that hinders the character.

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Internal obstacles arise as manifestations of the character’s inner problem. They are instances that occur only because of particular character traits the character really needs to address. 

So if the character’s internal problem is excessive doubt, fear, pride, desire or anger, the first few times the character runs into obstacles, the character will react to them with excessive doubt, fear, pride, desire or anger, and will therefore suffer a setback. Eventually, after an escalation of setbacks, a revelation may occur in the character when he or she recognises the reason why such setbacks occur.

At the goal, which is the gateway to the want, the character then faces the final battle with the most massive form of the internal obstacle.

By this time, the story may have woven the various sorts of obstacles together, so that the climax is about the character overcoming them all at the same time.

Now, what we’ve described here is an archetypal way stories are structured. It sounds a little simplistic when put in abstract terms like this. But look at your favourite stories, whatever they are – however literary and high-brow or popular and entertaining they may be – and you will probably find that the basic gist of the story can be described in such abstract terms. If you want to tell a story, and you are in the process of composition, it might help to set some internal obstacles for your character to overcome.

The internal obstacles a character encounters in a story are the consequences of the character’s internal problem. Dealing with these obstacles helps the character to recognize her or his real need.

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Author: Richard L. Fricks

Former CPA, attorney, and lifelong wanderer. I'm now a full-time skeptic and part-time novelist. The rest of my time I spend biking, gardening, photographing, reading, writing, and encouraging others to adopt The Pencil Driven Life.

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