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The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.

The Boaz Schoolteacher, written in 2018, is my fifth novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

In the summer of 2017, Katie Sims and her daughter Cullie, moved from New York City to Katie’s hometown of Boaz, Alabama for her to teach English and for Cullie to attend Boaz High School .  Fifteen years earlier, during the Christmas holidays, five men from prominent local families sexually assaulted Katie.  Nine months later, Katie’s only daughter was born.

Almost from the beginning of the new school year, as Katie and fellow-teacher Cindy Barker shared English, Literature, and Creative Writing duties for more than 300 students, they became lifelong friends.  

For weeks, Katie and Cindy endured the almost constant sexual harassment at the hands of the assistant principal.  In mid-October, after Cindy suffered an attack similar to Katie’s from fifteen years earlier, the two teachers designed a unique method to teach the six predators a lesson they would never forget.  Katie and Cindy dubbed their plan Six Red Apples.

Read this mystery-thriller to experience the dilemma the two teachers created for themselves, and to learn the true meaning of real justice.  And, eternal friendship. 

Epilogue

Somehow, the calf steeled me for Cindy’s funeral.  What I had feared would come close to killing my four children, and me, transformed into a type of celebration.  It was the first time I had understood the oft-heard Southern Baptist expressions: ‘she’s in a better place,’ and ‘she’s dancing in the arms of Jesus.’  Not that I fully believed them, but during Cindy’s send off, I chose to believe the dearest friend one could ever have lived on and was at peace.  I will forever be thankful for Mr. Harrison and every teacher, teacher’s aide, substitute, administration and janitorial worker for their outpouring of love.  Mitt McCoy of McCoy’s Funeral Home said it was the biggest gathering in Boaz history, for a funeral.  He was thankful I had encouraged him to hold the service inside the high school gymnasium.

After returning to school on January the 2nd, reality set in.  At first, I couldn’t get back in the groove.  During the first week, I cried every day during my planning and lunch periods.  I was alone.  I wasn’t supposed to be alone.  Once again, my students came to my rescue.  This time it was Friday afternoon and my twenty Creative Writing students marched into my room at ten minutes after one and demanded that I help them.  “Are you going to abandon us?  People die all the time.  You are still living.  We will never complete Real Justice unless the best writing teacher in America shows up.”  They certainly knew how to embellish.  One calf and twenty students were all it took for Cindy to smack me down tight in my saddle.  I was finally ready to ride.  

And so were our four children.  Alysa, I already had clearly recognized that she was a spitting image of Cindy, spoke her mother’s words, “fail to plan and plan to fail.”  She took charge of Anita and Arlon and inspired Cullie to team up and march forward.  I’m proud to say that their school grades didn’t falter at all.  Home life was almost as good, even though prayer time (which I hated Cindy for at first) was where the pain showed through.  But really it was healthy.  Each in their own way, they let it out.  They knew they had my full permission to express themselves.  I especially learned that teenage girls’ emotions were close cousins to those of forty-five-year-old women.  Crying one minute and laughing the next.  I still needed work in the laughing department.

Cindy had left her finances just like she had promised.  Matt Bearden helped guide me through the process, made much easier because Cindy, with his advice, had set up a trust.  I was the trustee.  She left everything to her three children, but they were granted generous benefits to be directed by me.  The sprawling ranch-style home and eighty acres were to be used as their home for as long as they wanted.  Once they all reached age twenty-one, they could sell it and divide the proceeds.  Cindy’s life insurance policy was sufficient to pay off the existing mortgage.  She left her portion of our ‘red apple’ earnings to me as a direct bequest, no strings attached.  With the money left in trust from Steve’s life insurance, to be used for the health and welfare of their children, along with a little over a million I had now at Wells Fargo Bank, I think we can make a go of it from a financial perspective.  And, this didn’t include the nearly one and a half million dollars I had received from Raymond and Cynthia to settle my threat of suing them to settle Darla’s estate.  I still didn’t know how Cynthia escaped prison after Nathan Johnson, Nathan L, spilled the beans before returning to Texas a free man. 

At the end of May, at the end of my first year of teaching at Boaz High School, two big events took place.  First, Wayne asked me to marry him.  He had spent the months since Cindy’s death dancing lightly around the subject, indicating at times, what he was seeing in our future.  I let him lead.  I knew how I felt.  Almost from the first time I heard him say, “Katie is now a good time to talk.”  I wanted him to know, absolutely know, he was ready to move on without Karen.  On Friday, May 25th, he finally verbalized the long-anticipated question.  I accepted immediately.  Before we started our walk back towards Cindy’s house (I still call it her house), from that same spot we had seen the newborn calf, my mind grabbed one of those unmoored dots that seemed to hover around my head.  Friday, May 25th, 2018.  It was exactly forty-six years ago to the day that Darla, my dear mother, had attended her 1972 high school graduation party at Club Eden.  It was there, I had been conceived.  Now, here I was conceiving something else, something I hoped would someday produce something, certainly not a baby, a lifelong love affair that would bring hope and happiness to many a destitute and sad stranger.

Today was also May’s second big event.  The steak supper I had promised the beginning of school.  I could almost quote my words, the words I had said to my tenth graders the first day in English class: “There will be an all-you-can-eat steak supper at my place in the country for every student who pursues Literature this next year like you were a starving man.  Or woman.”  I hadn’t excluded one of my 245 students.  I had even invited all of Cindy’s students.  It was a grand affair and would have been totally impossible if it hadn’t been for over forty deputies from Marshall, Dekalb, and Etowah counties.  It was beneficial being engaged to Sheriff Waldrup.  The giant picnic was well worth the nearly $6,000 I spent.  My favorite part was the reading of Real Justice.  The idea wasn’t mine; it came from my twenty Creative Writing students.  They, behind my back, and Wayne had arranged to have a fifty-three-foot flatbed trailer brought in along with a PA system capable of reaching Guntersville Lake.  I think the twenty of them, along with about fifty volunteering outliers, read for nearly eight hours, several hours after ninety percent of the folks had left.  I was proud of their determination to read the entire book.  It was a very good book for a first novel.  I was more than proud.

It’s now Monday morning, August the sixth.  The first day of my second year to teach at Boaz High School.  What a privilege.  What a privilege to be Katie Waldrup.  What a privilege to have such a wonderful life with four beautiful children, and what can I say, a beautiful man.

But, one thing will have to change.  No playing beneath the sheets at 4:30 a.m.  That time is still reserved for The Thread, the slightly remodeled little closet beside the laundry room the gorgeous redhead had used for her reading and writing before I moved in.

THE END.

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.

The Boaz Schoolteacher, written in 2018, is my fifth novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

In the summer of 2017, Katie Sims and her daughter Cullie, moved from New York City to Katie’s hometown of Boaz, Alabama for her to teach English and for Cullie to attend Boaz High School .  Fifteen years earlier, during the Christmas holidays, five men from prominent local families sexually assaulted Katie.  Nine months later, Katie’s only daughter was born.

Almost from the beginning of the new school year, as Katie and fellow-teacher Cindy Barker shared English, Literature, and Creative Writing duties for more than 300 students, they became lifelong friends.  

For weeks, Katie and Cindy endured the almost constant sexual harassment at the hands of the assistant principal.  In mid-October, after Cindy suffered an attack similar to Katie’s from fifteen years earlier, the two teachers designed a unique method to teach the six predators a lesson they would never forget.  Katie and Cindy dubbed their plan Six Red Apples.

Read this mystery-thriller to experience the dilemma the two teachers created for themselves, and to learn the true meaning of real justice.  And, eternal friendship. 

Chapter 60

It was 1:30 p.m. Sunday afternoon before I woke up.  I was in Cindy’s bed.  Wayne was sitting in an old, oak wooden rocker next to a sliding glass door that led to a small balcony.  I turned my head and looked the other direction, toward Cindy’s giant walk-in closet.  I would have sworn I saw through the closed door and inside to Cindy, on her hospital bed but sitting upright, smiling, with arms wide open saying, “come here my baby dearest.  You did it.  Now, all is well.”

“Katie, Katie, look at me.”  Wayne said.  His hand on my shoulder felt foreign, unwelcome.

“How’s Cindy?  Where’s Cindy?”  I, no doubt, was hallucinating.  Dr. Ireland came out of the closet, passed between those thick white curtains.

Wayne pulled back my covers and took my hands.  Pulled me up and turned me so I sat on the side of the bed.  My feet on the floor.  He massaged my face with a wet cloth.

“Cindy is dead.  You are still drugged.”  He said, I think several times, moving the old rocker next to my bed, Cindy’s bed.

Time stopped.  Nothing happened, for hours.  Time started.  Nothing happened.  At some point, time rebooted.  I landed.  I was back.  At least halfway.

“You don’t remember Dr. Ireland coming?”

“Here?”  I asked.

“You were a total wreck.  Rightly so.  I called the hospital, the intensive care unit.  The nurse, the nurse who told us about Cindy.  She called Dr. Ireland.  He was already heading back to Guntersville.  He is a good man.  He turned around and I directed him here.  He prescribed you some Valium.”  Wayne said, now holding both my hands.

“The kids.  Where are the kids?”

“With Maxine.  And, Cindy’s mother is here.  Along with a few other relatives.  They’re still arriving.”  My mind was walking back towards a semblance of normal.  I saw his face twitch.  It was a combination smile and frown.  I read him to say.  “Those people are weird.”

“Oh my, oh my Heavens.  And, Hell.  What am I going to do?  What is going to happen to those dear children?”  I asked.

“One day at a time.  That’s all we can do.  Katie, I’m here for you and the children.  We, together, will survive.  Someday, maybe we can thrive.  I know we can get through this.”  Wayne Waldrup was my rock.  He was the foundation, the only thing that could keep me alive.

He helped me up and into a pink and adorable knee-length house-coat he found in the closet.  It matched the gown I was wearing.  Both were Cindy’s.

When we walked into the living room and saw the children all sitting like ducks on one couch, like they were marching, but getting nowhere, their faces sad, like they had lost their mother.  For Cullie.  For Cullie, like she had lost her mother.

I went to them and none of them stood.  I knelt and, one by one, hugged them, and cried, and shook, and let Anita and Arlon scream, and Alysa sat along the couch’s edge trying to console all three of us.  Cullie, sat motionless, just staring towards the fireplace along the outer wall. I’m not sure how this scene ended but I think it was Wayne, might have been Maxine, encouraged the children to join him, her, for a walk.

I stayed inside and hugged and talked with Cindy’s mother.  She looked different now, different from less than two months ago, when Steve had died.  She looked older.  Talked slower.  Cindy’s father hadn’t been able to make the drive up from south of Montgomery, Union Hill, Hope Hull, Hell Hole.  I forgot the name of the single-store town.  Adelia was eighty-two.  Looked, maybe sixty.  A tall, thin woman, with a sagging chest and an over-sized butt.  She kept bragging about how she was forty-two when Cindy was born.  Like Cindy, now forty, was forty, should have survived, not let a simple thing like a pregnancy kill her.  She never showed any sadness, any real love for the most remarkable woman I’d ever known.  I clearly saw why my dear Cindy thought she had won the lottery when Steve landed in that little diner and whisked the high school senior away.

The next several hours were like two days.  I wasn’t a very good mother to Cullie or to my three other children.  The thought of the sharp turn my life had taken had led me to visit the pool-house after fleeing the cold, icy Adelia.  Wayne had seen me and told me to take care of myself, that he wasn’t leaving the kids. 

I don’t know how long I stayed locked up inside the tiny building beside the pool.  It was no surprise my mind was determined to reminisce.  It took me by both hands and threw me down a deep dark hole.  I closed my eyes and dreamed.  I lay beside Patrick Wilkins in the grave dug by Cindy and me.  Except, he wasn’t there.  He had escaped.  But, I was there.  And, so was Cindy.  We were both dead.  We both died before we got there. 

What woke me, I’m sure, was the smell of those apples.  What had started as six red apples laying between Cindy and me in the damp, dark grave, had devolved into six rotten, stinking apples.  That’s when Wilkins and Warren and his four fakes appeared.  They had dug through the limbs, the leaves, and the dirt and found us.  They had crawled in with us.  Warren had said, “you may have killed us all, but you killed yourself also.  Sooner or later you both will die and you both will still smell like rotten apples.”

Someway, the dream, along with the horrible afterthoughts, ended and the gorgeous Cindy appeared.  She even pulled up a chair and sat beside me.  Why she pulled a sack of chlorine onto her lap, I’m not sure.  We held hands.  She talked, and I listened.  I heard her say she would never leave me.  She would always be there for me and to give me advice.  That’s when she reminded me of my promise.  The one I would break Hell wide open if I didn’t keep.  I had promised to take care of her children.  She said, real justice comes with a price.  I can almost hear her words, “I paid the ultimate price.  You’re getting off on the cheap.  My forever friend, I am depending on you to keep your promise.  It’ll be easy and enjoyable.  Forge forward, living one day at a time, loving our four children.  Leading them to a life like I had before trouble appeared.”

It was six o’clock when Wayne knocked on the pool-house door.  He was waving my iPhone in front of the window.  I got up, walked over, and unlocked the door.

“It’s Riley Radford.  She says it’s important.  I didn’t know exactly what to do.  Here, you decide.”  He handed me my phone and walked back toward the house.

For a minute I just stood there, looking out toward the pool, wondering why the cover was lying along the edge and not over the pool.  Finally, I faintly heard, “Katie, are you there.  Katie.”

“Riley, I’m here.”

“I’m sorry.  I tried to warn you.”  She said without emotion.  What did she mean?  Here was a young girl who had just lost her father in the worst possible way.

“Warn me?  What do you mean?”  I asked.

“Yesterday afternoon I caught Daddy in the garage.  He was loading up some rope, tarps, shovels and picks.  I confronted him about what he was doing.  All he would say is, ‘I’m going to take care of you.  You are my one and only daughter.  I trust you to trust me.”

“What did he mean?  Then, what happened?”

“He hugged me and drove away.  It took me an hour or more, but I finally figured it out.  It was like the Real Justice Facebook comments scrolled across my mind.  You know, Stella’s daughter, Candy.  She was kidnapped.  I then realized that Daddy was talking about Cullie.  He was going to get rid of Cullie.”

“And, you tried to reach me?  To warn me?”  I asked.

“Yes, I didn’t do a good job until I finally posted a plea on Facebook.  Someone said Cindy was in the hospital.  I figured you were there.  I had my mother take me, but I couldn’t find you.”

“Riley, you tried.  While you were trying to reach me, no doubt, your father and his friends had already taken Cullie and Alysa.  It’s over now, the girls are safe.  And, I’m very sorry about your father.  I hate that I had to kill him.”  My last statement came out wrong.  It was too harsh.  But, it was the truth.

“You want to know something weird?”  Riley asked.

“I guess so.”

“After all the hell I’ve put you and Cullie through, I’m not mad at what you did.  I probably would be trying to kill you right now if it weren’t for my mother.  We just had a very serious talk.  She revealed to me things about my Daddy, my granddaddy Randall, and my great-grandfather Raymond, that I never knew.  Sounds like you got lucky.  For the Radford’s, I apologize for all you had to go through.”  By the time she finished her little speech I had a whole new and better impression of Riley Radford.

It was Monday morning, Christmas day, before my mind caught the unmoored dots.  A house full of at least thirty people had just finished a breakfast that could have fed the staff of Boaz High School and half my students.  Wayne and I thankfully had the same idea at the same time.  We walked down the little gravel road behind Cindy’s that continued their driveway but went on a half a mile to their pond and barn along the front edge of their second pasture, “the back forty as Steve had called it.”   Wayne just held my hand and let me think.  That’s when the dots connected.

Saturday night, two days ago, was December the 23rd.  That was fifteen years to the day from when the Faking Five had abducted me and driven me to Club Eden’s army tent and gang-raped me for over two hours.  Two other dots cried out for attention.  The exact times.  I had arrived at Club Eden, hidden my parked car, and started making my way towards the rear of the tent hoping to find Cindy and Alysa.  The time had to be virtually the time of my arrival fifteen years earlier.  That time, tied up in the back of a van.

Wayne and I kept walking.  I couldn’t stand to explore the thought of what might have happened to Cullie and Alysa if I hadn’t installed the little Spy Bug.  Then, it hit me.  I owed everything to Riley Radford.  If it hadn’t been for her mischievousness in bugging my office I would never have been able to save my two precious teenagers.  It was both real mercy and real justice.  I had, Cindy and I had been in charge, pretty much at least, of achieving real justice.  I had to think that the mercy, saving Cullie and Alysa from, what no doubt would have been, rape and murder, was God’s work.  That’s what I would think.  That’s what I would believe.  That’s what Cindy would want me to believe.

“Look.”  Wayne said as I was still looking down at the road, deep in thought.  We had just rounded a little curve and headed up a small hill towards the barn.

“What?”  I asked.

“It’s a newborn.  A newborn calf.  See?”

“I looked to where Wayne was pointing.  At first, I only saw a big black cow.

“Besides its mother.  The calf.”

Then, I saw four spindly legs trying to gain their balance.  We walked over to the edge of the road and leaned against a wooden fence.  Unlike the calf that died, the one the children saw, expelled from its mother’s womb, lifeless, bloody, dreamless and hopeless.  This calf, now in full view, was looking up, stepping forward.  Like it was reaching out and grabbing hold of life, thankful it wasn’t alone.

“It’s beautiful.  Take a picture, I left my phone.”

Wayne climbed over the fence to get closer.  I continued to lean against the fence and knew without a doubt that someway, somehow, Cindy, and maybe God by her side, had given me this picture of hope.  It was all I needed to stand straight and walk forward in my mind.  I vowed to do the same with every fiber of my being.  I owed it to Cindy.  And our four children.

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.

The Boaz Schoolteacher, written in 2018, is my fifth novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

In the summer of 2017, Katie Sims and her daughter Cullie, moved from New York City to Katie’s hometown of Boaz, Alabama for her to teach English and for Cullie to attend Boaz High School .  Fifteen years earlier, during the Christmas holidays, five men from prominent local families sexually assaulted Katie.  Nine months later, Katie’s only daughter was born.

Almost from the beginning of the new school year, as Katie and fellow-teacher Cindy Barker shared English, Literature, and Creative Writing duties for more than 300 students, they became lifelong friends.  

For weeks, Katie and Cindy endured the almost constant sexual harassment at the hands of the assistant principal.  In mid-October, after Cindy suffered an attack similar to Katie’s from fifteen years earlier, the two teachers designed a unique method to teach the six predators a lesson they would never forget.  Katie and Cindy dubbed their plan Six Red Apples.

Read this mystery-thriller to experience the dilemma the two teachers created for themselves, and to learn the true meaning of real justice.  And, eternal friendship. 

Chapter 59

I spent most of Friday Christmas shopping.  A cloud of sadness had followed me from the Boaz Walmart to the Gadsden Mall and back, smothering me with the thought that my dear daughter preferred being with Cindy and her family instead of me.  Should I have refused Cullie last night when she called to request permission to continue her stay with a real family, even one without the near-perfect Steve?  The low-lying fog and light rain fought hard to match my mental cloudiness.  I was in Albertville before I realized I had missed my right-hand turn onto Sardis Road.  Five miles too far.  Five apples in a fire.  After pondering this random and strange thought I finally realized it wasn’t the alarm of a fire truck but the horn of an over-sized Ford pickup blaring at me from behind as I sat at the green light halfway into the intersection of Highway 75.

I had returned home in one piece, thankfully.  It was two hours later than I had anticipated since I had tried making the best of my cruise to Albertville.  Ollie’s, and the other stores in Albertville’s newest shopping center, had more good junk than I had seen since the Trailer Park in New York City.  Of course, Ollie’s is imitation junk, closeout merchandise and excess inventory.  At the Trailer Park, you can find real stuff.  Like a box of old 1920’s black and white photos.  Like I did one time.  Like an ancient medicinal bottle set.  Like I did one time.  As I sat at the kitchen bar eating my five-dollar Little Caesars Pizza, I admitted, out loud, I was a terrible mother.  My life without Cullie was a pile of junk.

Then, I had thoughts of Wayne.  Junk of a different type, man junk.  As if my thoughts couldn’t get worse.  The last thing I needed was turning my one and only real love affair into a sex thing.  I was trying to climb above the figurative fog when the beautiful Wayne vibrated my phone.  And me.

“Katie, is now a good time to talk?”  I won’t even say it.

“Perfect.  I was just thinking about your junk.”  For some reason I felt like playing with words, seeing if Wayne knew any urban language.

“I know.  I need to clean out the study.  Way too many arrowheads.”  Now I know why I love the man.  He is as pure as the driven snow.  If he knew the real Katie, he would flee and forever be satisfied dreaming of the perfect Karen.

“What’s up Walt?”

“This is Wayne.”

“You doofus.  You know how I’m in love with the rough and ready Walt Whitmire from Netflix.  Now, what’s up Wayne?”

“Nathan Johnson is singing like a bird.  Well, he’s at least practicing.”

“Uh, I’m not quiet following you.”

“He says he will tell all if we cut him a deal.”  Wayne said.

“About how he torched Beverly and Sammie, and the house we were all in?” 

“That and a few other things, including the murders of your mother and Nathan Johnson.”

“Nathan’s twin brother.  I thought they used nicknames.”  I said.

“Nate and Nattie, but I still stay confused.  Let’s call them Nathan L for living and Nathan D for dead.  Okay?”

“That’s much better.  You’re more creative than I realized.”

“He, Nathan L, a clever man, says he can help us or hurt us.  Meaning, he can confuse the hell out of a jury.  Quite frankly, he’s right.  We can’t, Walmart can’t, no one can, except maybe Nathan L, say who purchased the gas cans used in your fire.  Also, we have the same problem with which twin Barbara and Clara saw outside Raymond’s house.  Finally, we don’t know which one was with Danny Ericson that morning at Ralph Williams’ pasture.”

“And, those issues are not exhaustive.  Without him, Nathan L, you don’t have anyone to testify about anything remotely relevant to any of three crimes.”  I said.

“We have the blood in Raymond’s house, your mother’s blood.  And, the 22-caliber pistol.”

“I think the non-lawyer that I am could drop a mother-load of reasonable doubt into a jury’s head concerning those pieces of evidence.” 

“Katie, I have no doubt you’re correct.  Here’s what’s going on.  The DA is considering offering Nathan L a deal.  He, the DA, wants to talk with Raymond, Ryan, and Cynthia one more time and try to pressure them into confessing.  That’s not happening fast enough.  All with Raymond in the hospital and Christmas being Monday.”

“Does Ryan know this?  I hope so.  I want him to have a dreadful holiday.”

“He does.  Mr. Abbott called him and gave the orders.  Told Ryan to be in the DA’s office Tuesday morning at 9:00 a.m., and to bring Cynthia.  That meeting is taking place whether Raymond has been discharged or not.  I have no doubt Ryan Radford will have a very long weekend.”

 Somehow, mine and Wayne’s conversation made the grand detour towards house plans and home construction.  On two occasions now, I had shared my hopes of someday rebuilding Beverly’s house.  He had suggested a couple of builders but had surprised me with offering to sell me his home and a few acres this side of the pond.  If I didn’t know Wayne, I would have thought he was trying to keep his little playmate in the sandbox.  This time, I was glad when he told me, “duty calls.”

I ate a giant bowl of Black Walnut ice-cream, watched two episodes of Grace and Frankie, and went to bed.

The call woke me at 2:30, in the deepest part of the night, two hours before I was due in The Thread.

It was Cullie.  The problem was Cindy.  The ambulance had just arrived and would be transporting her, listless, virtually lifeless, to Marshall-Medical Center South.  “One of the med-techs said she’s in a coma.”

“I’ll meet you at the ER.”  I said recognizing how serious this could be.

“Mother, if Arlon had not had a stomach ache and gone into Cindy’s room we wouldn’t have known she was so bad.”  Cullie said, realizing how serious things were.

“You stay there.  Let me know if you need anything.  As always, lock the doors.”

They wouldn’t let me see Cindy when I arrived at the hospital.  Or, for the next several hours.  All a nurse would tell me was that she was critical, and that they were fighting to get her blood pressure under control.  I was worried sick, mainly because Cindy and I had talked a lot about eclampsia, high blood pressure, and protein in the urine that can cause a pregnant woman to develop seizures or a coma.

By 7:30 a.m., two hours after Dr. Ireland had arrived, Cindy was in intensive care.  I hoped this move was positive, but she was still in a coma.  I learned when he finally talked with me.  “It’s touch and go.  There’s a chance she will never regain consciousness.”

“Doctor, isn’t there more you can do?  What about UAB?  What about any other facility?  Isn’t there somewhere she could get more specialized care?  I’m sorry but isn’t there someone who knows more than you?  No insult intended.”  I asked, willing to do anything and everything I could for my dearest friend.

“Unfortunately, no.  Please know I’m consulting with two world-renowned obstetrician-gynecologists, including Dr. Steven Gabbe with the Wexner Medical Center at Ohio State University.  He is the world’s expert on eclampsia.  I assure you we are doing all he recommends.”  I liked Dr. Ireland, and really had no choice but to trust his judgment.

After he told me to wait and pray, and pray and wait, I walked to the cafeteria for a much-needed cup of coffee.  This became my day.  Drinking, praying, and waiting.  And, calling Cullie every three hours.

At 4:30 p.m., after looking through the glass door outside Cindy’s room in intensive care, I walked to the chapel.  My new favorite spot to pray.  As I opened the door, a young girl and her mother came into the hall, reminding me that I needed to call Cullie again.  It had been a little over three hours and I was a little worried when no adult was around while her and Alysa cooked.  As the phone rang and rang I realized I needed to brag on her, and Alysa, for trying, for being up doing something, trying to keep things in perspective.  What I hadn’t liked was her ignoring my call.  No doubt, the two teenagers were knee deep in flour making their favorite thing, breaded tortillas.

I tried calling one more time before going into the chapel.  No answer.  I went in and tried calling God.  No answer.  I had knelt at the altar but had gotten up when my right leg began to cramp.  I had just sat down on a cushioned bench when I received a text.  It was my spy app notifying me of an active transmission.  I was alone, so I opened the App and pressed ‘Current,’ referring to the sounds that the device was hearing right now.

“Keep’em tied to the bed for now.”

“Go ahead and call. Ryan and Danny are on their way.”

“She’s at the hospital.  What if Wayne is with her?”

“First thing you say is, ‘we have Cullie, don’t say a word to anyone or she dies.’”

I could barely breathe as I forced myself to continue listening, but I wasn’t sitting still.  I was walking as fast as I could out of the hospital and to my car.  The two voices were Fulton Billingsley and Justin Adams.

“Call her.  Let’s get this thing over with.”  The App from hell sounded, raising the eyebrows of a young Hispanic girl, causing her to stare at me as she walked into the Radiology Department.

It wasn’t ten seconds until my phone rang.  I had taken it off vibrate.  “Private caller” appeared on my iPhone screen.  I answered, “if you hurt Cullie I will kill you and everyone in your family.”

“Katie, what’s wrong?”  It was Wayne.  Just checking in, as he had today, four times already.

“Wayne, they have Cullie.  I know they have Cullie and I know where she is.  I’m headed there now.”

“Who has Cullie?”  Wayne asked.

“Fulton, Justin.  All four, they’re at Club Eden.”  I said.

“Club Eden?”

“Across from Aurora Quik Mart.  Chert road.  There’s a gate.”

“I’m leaving Scottsboro now.”

“Scottsboro?”

“I’ll dispatch my deputies; Sheriff Entrekin in Etowah County may be there before me.”

I parked along the chert road right before the last curve to the cabin.  I pulled my car off the gravel road enough, hidden enough, hopefully, so that no one passing would see it.  I walked a hundred feet and remembered, I still had Cindy’s green knapsack in my trunk.  It had the other SR9 pistol we had used target shooting.  And, its sister was hidden at the cabin, outside, on the porch, over the front door, lying along a giant wooden beam.

My phone kept ringing.  I switched back to vibrate.  I let it ring.  It had continued to do so every few minutes as I had sped down Highway 179.  I let it vibrate.  As I slid into a patch of woods to my right, I caught a glimpse of the cabin up ahead.  I knew this route.  It leads to the back side of the tent.  The statement, “Keep’em tied to the bed for now,” rang in my ears.  I was glad I had listened, heard this.  There was no bed in the cabin.  I learned this when I planted the little spy bug in the old cast-iron coffee pot.  But, there were two giant beds out back, inside the old army tent. 

I crossed the creek and turned my ankle as I jumped onto the far bank.  It took me several minutes before I could continue.  I wish I had my boots on and not these Nike sneakers.  It was a long hundred yards before I saw the back side of the tent across the creek.  I could see the cabin’s lights, two outside beams pointing toward the front flap of the green tarpaulin structure.  I had to wade the creek.  It was deeper here.  I decided against going to the front door.  It was too risky.  They might be looking out the cabin’s windows.  I found a sharp rock and started cutting through the back wall.  It was slow going.  I figured the material was cotton or hemp, like they used way back in the Civil War.  No doubt this was a very old tent. 

Alysa saw me first.  Her mouth was gagged but she could still sound out a muffled, but barbaric scream.  Her and Cullie were tied to the bed frames.  One girl per bed.  I guess they were surprised, even shocked to see me, and to see me hold up the SR9 to my lips and breathed a near-silent “shoo.”  The knots were easy enough to untie.  I didn’t take time for pleasantries.  They both pulled duct tape from their mouths and revealed the maxi pads that had been used as gags.

“Follow me, be quick, be silent.”  I sounded like I knew what I was doing.

Twenty steps and we were at the creek.  “I hear a car.”  Alysa said.

“Come on, now, across the creek.”  The girls were more adept than me.  I was confused why they both had on their hiking boots.

As we cleared the creek, I could hear Ryan.  I knew his voice from anywhere.  “What the fuck?  Hey idiots, they’re gone.”  He had no doubt walked inside the front door of the tent.

“Back wall, it’s been cut.”  That had to be Danny.

We kept walking farther north, west, a direction away from the back side of the tent, and deeper into the woods.

“There, across the creek.”  Two of them said at the same time.  I looked back and caught Ryan’s eyes.  He and the other three, Fulton, Justin, and Danny were nearly across the creek, halfway up the slight embankment.

I half-shouted.  “Come on girls.  We must run.  They’re coming.”  Right as I turned away from the four bastards, I caught a glimpse of a blue light.  Eerie, as if a flying saucer had landed and its light was penetrating the woods, announcing every one of us would be sucked up and beamed to Galatia, even the stick-peopled trees wouldn’t be spared.  Maybe, it was the deputies.  Then, the sounds that I had always hated.  The siren.  Now, it invigorated my head and gut like Heart of Courage, or The Sound of Music. 

Just then I heard Cullie scream.  “My ankle. I can’t walk.  Mother, help, please help me.”  By the time I turned and rushed back to her, I could see the hole and limb she likely had tripped over.

“Get up, we have to move.  They’re closing in.”  I said feeling trapped, seeing the fog closing in for its final choke.

I told Alysa to keep going, to get away the best she could. 

The gunshot surprised me.  Maybe it was the cracking limb above mine and Cullie’s head, just a few feet to our right. 

By the time I stepped over Cullie and took a knee, the SR9 safety was off.  My first shot hit Ryan.  He was the largest of the three by far and it was his gun that flew out of his hand when two rounds of 147 hollow point passed through his heart.

I never considered whether the other three were armed.  They stood. Frozen.  I couldn’t see their hands for the descending and engulfing fog.  They all looked down at what I figured was a dead or dying Ryan.  Then, they started raising their hands.  The fog curled up like a stage curtain.  I saw their hands.  “The three red apples have hands.”  It was as though Cindy was right behind me, whispering in my ear.  Hands armed with pistols, rifles, bazooka’s, ICBM’s. 

Cullie screamed, “shoot mother shoot.  They’re going to kill us.”

I emptied the SR9, all remaining fifteen rounds.  Three men disappeared.  I couldn’t tell if it was the fog, the fire, or both.  The stage curtain rolled down, down.

It took the four Etowah County deputies another three or four minutes before they found us.  They were all talking over each other.  All I understood as they lifted Cullie and relieved me of my weapon was they had gone inside the cabin before they heard the first shots.  Someway, the thick log walls had made them believe the sounds, the shots, were coming from the other direction, back toward the lake, ninety degrees from where the real action was taking place, where real justice was happening.

Five minutes after we reached the cabin, Wayne drove in behind three ambulances, and an unmarked Chevrolet SUV.  It was Sheriff Entrekin from Etowah County.  After the two sheriffs exchanged a few words, Wayne walked to me sitting in a rocker on the cabin’s front porch with Cullie and Alysa beside me in matching chairs. 

“Good to see you Katie.  You too girls.  I got here as soon as I could.  Sounds like your practice paid off.  Sorry, my deputies got lost.”  I guess he could tell we were okay.  We were okay because we were sitting, rocking, breathing.

“Sit tight till I get back.”  He said following Sheriff Entrekin down behind the cabin and across the creek to the scene.  It was no doubt a crime scene.  One Chekhov might have included in one of his short stories.  Certainly, it would have been deeply edited after the first draft.  I raised my head and could faintly see just a smidgen of the SR9 lying along the top of the wooden beam.  Right where I had left it two days ago.  It was right there, like it was hanging on the wall, still waiting to be taken down and shot.  No, Chekhov would have said, “If in the first act you have hung a pistol on the wall, then in the following one it should be fired.  Otherwise don’t put it there.” 

While we waited on the two sheriffs to return, I fantasized about how I would have rewritten the scene if I had not left Cindy’s green knapsack with enclosed SR9 in the trunk of my car.  No doubt, everything would have played out pretty much the same.  Or, so I hoped.  I would have sneaked onto the front porch, retrieved the hidden Ruger, and blasted my way into the cabin directing bullets through skin, livers, lungs, and hearts. 

As Wayne walked back up the steps, I was so thankful no redrafts were needed.  I just know I would have fallen out of this rocking chair as I stood on its two arms reaching for the weapon resting on the overhead beam.

At 2:00 a.m., after a long and further-exhausting trip to Etowah County and an agonizing interrogation at the Sheriff’s office, Wayne drove Cullie, Alysa, and me back to Club Eden for my car. 

I would always be ashamed of me and the two brave teenage girls by my side, that we had not thought of poor Anita and Arlon until we turned onto their drive.  They too had been brave, tied to their chairs locked inside the pool house.  All they could say was, “they had masks and guns. They took Cullie and Alysa.”

After Maxine arrived to stay with the children, Wayne drove the two of us back to the hospital. 

As we stepped inside the Intensive Care unit, I saw that the curtains were pulled across Cindy’s sliding glass door.  A different nurse than the one I had seen when I last visited at 4:15 yesterday afternoon pushed through the gap created by two curtains meeting.  It reminded me of the Club Eden tent and me slashing through to save Cullie and Alysa.  I suddenly knew things were different.  The nurse’s face, now drooped, as did her mouth, eyes, and chin.  Sad, sad.  “I’m so sorry.  She’s gone.”

If it had not been for Wayne, I would have fallen to the floor.  He caught me as I screamed, “No, no, God no.”

I have virtually no memory of the next two hours, including our trip back to Cindy’s house to tell four anxious children the most horrible news of their lives.

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.

The Boaz Schoolteacher, written in 2018, is my fifth novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

In the summer of 2017, Katie Sims and her daughter Cullie, moved from New York City to Katie’s hometown of Boaz, Alabama for her to teach English and for Cullie to attend Boaz High School .  Fifteen years earlier, during the Christmas holidays, five men from prominent local families sexually assaulted Katie.  Nine months later, Katie’s only daughter was born.

Almost from the beginning of the new school year, as Katie and fellow-teacher Cindy Barker shared English, Literature, and Creative Writing duties for more than 300 students, they became lifelong friends.  

For weeks, Katie and Cindy endured the almost constant sexual harassment at the hands of the assistant principal.  In mid-October, after Cindy suffered an attack similar to Katie’s from fifteen years earlier, the two teachers designed a unique method to teach the six predators a lesson they would never forget.  Katie and Cindy dubbed their plan Six Red Apples.

Read this mystery-thriller to experience the dilemma the two teachers created for themselves, and to learn the true meaning of real justice.  And, eternal friendship. 

Chapter 58

It rarely happened.  One lesson plan for every class.  Thursday was rare.  Record-breaking cold, a bout of snow, my own recent and frequent sick day absences, two surprise fire drills, and an unscheduled visit from newly elected Senator Doug Jones that precipitated a school-wide, gymnasium-busting, presentation, had converged to create the rarity. 

My students and I had spent all day discussing Anton Pavlovich Chekhov.  He was a Russian playwright and short story writer, considered by many literary critics to be the greatest writer of short fiction in history.  Even though I had, at different times, assigned to each of my five classes, the task of preparing an investigative report on Mr. Chekhov, at no time had we spent class time discussing any of his actual works.  Today’s focus, in every class, had been The Kiss, my favorite of Chekhov’s early stories. 

It’s the story of Ryabovich, an artillery brigade officer who attends a party with several of his fellow officers at the country home of a retired general.  At some point during the night Ryabovich wanders down a lonely hallway and into a dark room and experiences the thrill of his boring life.  He isn’t alone.  A woman kisses Ryabovich, mistaking him for someone else.  The woman recoils and Ryabovich rushes away.  He becomes obsessed with the event.  The story continues with him surging and sagging from joy to torment.  Ryabovich is in love with an unknown woman who he will never see again.  It is a wonderful story and the students loved it.

After the last bell, I sat in my office waiting for Cullie, and couldn’t get Mr. Chekhov off my mind.  I kept thinking of the solid piece of writing craft he is universally known for. The advice comes two ways, with both packing the same intent: “One must never place a loaded rifle on the stage if it isn’t going to go off. It’s wrong to make promises you don’t mean to keep.”  And, “If in the first act you have hung a pistol on the wall, then in the following one it should be fired. Otherwise don’t put it there.” 

Since the first creative writing course I took in college, my teachers had tried their best to instill this advice into me and each of my fellow, aspiring writers.  I could hear Professor Killian now, “Chekhov’s gun is a dramatic principle that states that every element in a story must be necessary, and irrelevant elements should be removed; elements should not appear to make false promises by never coming into the story.”

Cullie was running later than normal.  Cindy poked her head in and said goodbye.  Alysa stood beside her but didn’t wave or smile.  It’s funny how just seeing someone often causes them to unwittingly rush into the last scene that was actively playing in your mind immediately before they appeared.  After the two beauties walked away, my mind somehow placed Chekhov’s gun into Cindy’s hand.  Actually, it was Cindy’s gun in my hand. 

We had spent the last two weekends, in part, with her guns and my pasture (Wayne’s actually) target practicing.  It had been her idea.  It seemed Steve, an avid hunter (as well as fisherman) had left her with a hefty stockpile of pistols, rifles, shotguns, bow and arrows, knives, and hatchets.  He must have loved Ruger since Cindy seemed to have an endless supply of SR9’s.  Cindy was one of the best teachers I had ever seen but her skills were limited to the English language classroom.  She absolutely sucked at firearm instruction.  But Wayne Waldrup was the master.  Not only had he joined us both afternoons, he seemed to not mind the almost limitless times I needed personal attention in just exactly how to hold the weapon.  I’m glad he liked hands on instruction.  As Cullie walked into my classroom looking a little haggard, I was pondering Wayne’s last statement Saturday afternoon as he was about to leave on a work call, “Half of my deputies right now can’t shoot as good as you.  You may be a beginner, but you’re definitely a natural.”

Cullie was silent on the way home.  No doubt upset over something.  Since she wouldn’t give me a hint what was bothering her I let it slide, assuming some boy had dissed her, or her hormones were soaring or sagging.  Before I turned right on Highway 431, she asked if I would carry her to Alysa’s.  I was in a hurry to get home but couldn’t help but realize how difficult it was to be a teenage girl, especially one in the ninth grade, in a new school, in a new town.  I turned left instead and dropped her off ten minutes later at Cindy’s. 

It’s not unusual for me to replay the day’s classes and the most marvelous moments mentoring minors as Ellen Fink like to say.  I could hear her, the spry little New York City teacher who no doubt had prepared me for my roller-coaster ride with Cindy: “Katie, you need to expand your thinking.  Five m’s or five of anything will drown your mental sluggishness.”  I made a mental note to at least email the energetic, enigmatic, elegant, eager, and enlightening Ellen.  Wow, six e’s. 

Replay I did.  Chekhov’s gun kept pointing at me all the way home.  It didn’t relent as I changed clothes and drank a glass of milk and ate four Oreos.  I lay on the couch until dark.  After sitting up to talk with Cullie who pleaded with me to let her spend the night with Alysa, the weirdest and wildest idea clutched my mind and promised to not let go until I had fully submitted.

Maybe the idea would never have appeared if Cindy hadn’t left two SR9’s at my house last Saturday afternoon.  I walked to Wayne’s study, rolled the bookcase from the wall, entered the security code and opened the safe.  The green knapsack hadn’t moved since I had stored it there before Cindy had left.  It was amazing how generous Wayne was.  He not only shared his gorgeous body with me but his giant safe.

It was risky, but I went anyway.  For some unknown reason, I was propelled to take the chance and sneak back to Club Eden.  From the Spy App, I suppose my mind knew that something was going down Saturday night at the little cabin in the Aurora woods.  Even though my clothes were wet from sweat and my heart was tired from its heavy beating, after climbing over the gate and walking a half-mile under a glowing moon, the worst feeling occurred during my return trip home.  My mind auto-played one sentence: “If in the first act you have hung a pistol on the wall, then in the following one it should be fired. Otherwise don’t put it there.”  When I turned left off Sardis Road onto Wayne’s long driveway, I surrendered to the fact my life was caught in a story I had not written.  It was like Cindy and I were actors on a stage.  But, not just any type actors.  We were first and foremost prisoners and the play director was making us dress-up, rehearse, and prepare for the first night’s performance.

As I rounded the curve before reaching the back side of my wonderful and rent-free ranch-style home, I saw Wayne’s tan and gold Sheriff’s car with the red taillights glowing.

I nearly panicked.  This wasn’t a good time for Wayne to show up.  He often called before coming, but not always.  During these latter times I had never minded because I hadn’t been sneaking around planting guns at places I wasn’t supposed to be. 

After I parked, and we shared a sweaty hug, my sweat, I invited him in.  It was obvious he noticed how unkempt, disheveled, and anxious I was.  Thankfully, he didn’t ask any questions.

“I needed to talk with you.  I hope you don’t mind me dropping by.”  Sometimes I wish he weren’t so damn polite.

“No problem.  You seem tense.  Is there anything wrong?”  I asked, noticing I wasn’t the only one with darting and blinking eyes.

“I’ve just come from the hospital, Marshall-Medical South.  Raymond Radford is there.  Another heart attack but fortunately for him not deadly serious.”

“You now making hospital calls?”  I asked.

“No, he called me, asked if I would come talk to him.”

“Reckon which will kill him first?  I bet it’s his heart.  His guilty heart probably.”  I said recalling the deep hole he was in with two murder indictments hanging around his neck.

“He wanted to get something off his chest and try to use it for his benefit.  Said he had tried to reach the DA but he’s in Denver at some conference.”

“What did he have to say?”

“Katie, I think, surely, we are close enough by now for you to be able to confide in me.  I hope you know how much I care for you.  You know that don’t you?”

“I do.  And, the feelings are mutual.  Certainly, you know that.”

“I do.  After Karen died I didn’t think I would ever care for another woman, certainly not care for one like I care for you.  That’s why I want us to have a little talk.  It’s important to me that you know what caring for a woman means to me.”

“Okay, we can talk.”  Wayne sat at the kitchen bar and I put on a pot of coffee.

“I’m going to be direct.  Raymond told me an almost unbelievable story.  He said if someone else had told him the same story about his family that he would think the guy was making it up.   Raymond told me about how Darla got pregnant.”  Wayne said and stopped.  I guess he was wanting me to respond.

“He did?”

“He told me how you came to be.”

“That’s an odd way to put it.”  I said.

“Katie, I know that Darla got pregnant during her graduation party May 25, 1972, and that nine months later, to the day, according to Raymond, you were born.”

“Seems like mother dear liked to party.”  I poured us both a cup of coffee.  Three creams and one sugar for Wayne.  Three sugars and one cream for me.

“You’ve never mentioned your father.”  I couldn’t tell if Wayne was asking me a question or simply making a statement.

“No.  It’s a little difficult to talk about someone you’ve never met, and don’t even know their name.”

“Do you want to know his name?”  Wayne now had my full attention.

“Until tonight my answer to that question had always been no.  Now, I’m not sure.  Should I want to know?”  I asked, still standing across the bar from Wayne.

“Yes, I think you should.”

“Okay, I’ll trust your judgment.  Who’s my daddy?”  I halfway was trying to be funny.

“Randall Radford.  At least that’s what Raymond said.”

“Oh, hell yes.  That’s just perfect.  Ryan Radford is Cullie’s father and Ryan’s father, Randall, is my father.  The Radford’s must have some aggressive sperm.

“I know this is shocking to you and I wouldn’t dare have come here and pushed this on you if it weren’t for Raymond and what he offered.”

“He wanted you to stop pursuing his grandson.  Right?”  I asked, pouring half my coffee down the sink.

“Actually, he asked on his and Cynthia’s behalf.”

“No doubt.  She, along with Ryan, are one excited utterance away from prison.  Why wouldn’t she also want to make a deal.”

“I thought the same thing.  To begin with.  But, I think Raymond is seriously trying to do everything he can to straighten out his life, do what he can to make some amends.”

“I assume since he knows Randall was the winner of sorts among the Flaming Five, then Darla knew also?”  I asked, pulling a step-stool out of the pantry and using it to remove a half-empty bottle of Jack Daniels from the top shelf nestled behind the three #10 cans of mixed vegetables Wayne had left and that I hated.

“He said that he and Darla had agreed to investigate whether Randall was the father.  It seems the paternity test results had something to do with him, Raymond, marrying your mother.  He knew Randall wouldn’t take responsibility for you, so he decided he would, in his sort of way.”

“I’m still confused.  What did he offer?”  I asked, reading Wayne’s head motion that he wanted a round of Jack.

“To give you what he had promised Darla in their prenuptial agreement.  Half of his estate.  You know the details.”

“What did he want in return?  It has to be something.”

“For you and Ryan to be real parents to Cullie.”

I’ve heard about people whose anger can ignite in a nano-second, but I had never experienced such instant rage.  Until this moment.  I had to assume Raymond knew the truth.  How Ryan had raped me.  Or, did he?  Had Ryan simply made up a story about how the two of us had an affair.  Either way, the end of the road and dying Raymond wants his grandson and me to be real parents.  Does that include working on reconciling and remarrying, marrying.  I was mad as hell.  “I don’t suppose the repentant Raymond told you Ryan raped me, that’s how I became pregnant with Cullie?”  My words had poured out of me almost as quickly as my anger had boiled up.

“Oh no.  My dear Katie.  No, he didn’t.  I’m sorry, so sorry, I didn’t know that.”  Wayne said standing up and walking around the bar to me.  I stepped back just as he reached for me.

“And, no doubt you don’t know that Ryan’s four buddies, Fulton Billingsley, Danny Ericson, Justin Adams, and the late Warren Tillman joined in the fun and gang-raped me for two plus hours during the late afternoon of December 23, 2002?”  The words kept pouring.

Wayne stood still, frozen, his eyes and face flashed anger and sadness as he slowly shook his head.  He bit his lower lip and said, “Katie, let me in, let me support you.  Katie, I love you and I’m here for you.”  I could tell he was dying for my response, for me to reach for him.

“I’ve lived with it for almost fifteen years.  I’ve never told anyone except Cindy.  I hate you found out this way.”  I moved my body inch by inch towards Wayne.  He stepped forward half a foot and then stopped.  Just another sign of his respect, his politeness and tenderness.

“All I want is to take care of you.  Oh, that didn’t come out right.  I know you’re strong.  I didn’t mean to imply you needed me.”  He wanted to keep apologizing, but I shut down his words.

“Oh Wayne, stop trying to be so damn nice.  Hold me.  I am strong, but that doesn’t mean I don’t need you and your strong arms around me.”

Over the next three hours, we made Jack disappear.  He had followed Wayne and me to my bedroom and had vanished somewhere between two passionate scenes, both involving the most aggressive love-making the beautiful Wayne had ever revealed.

Thoughts, I’m convinced of it, come unsolicited.  As I lay in Wayne’s arms, all I could think about was how strange it was for Marshall County Schools to postpone the beginning of the two-week Christmas holidays until Thursday, December 21st.  I suspected the late November’s coldest four days in recorded history had something to do with it.

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.

The Boaz Schoolteacher, written in 2018, is my fifth novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

In the summer of 2017, Katie Sims and her daughter Cullie, moved from New York City to Katie’s hometown of Boaz, Alabama for her to teach English and for Cullie to attend Boaz High School .  Fifteen years earlier, during the Christmas holidays, five men from prominent local families sexually assaulted Katie.  Nine months later, Katie’s only daughter was born.

Almost from the beginning of the new school year, as Katie and fellow-teacher Cindy Barker shared English, Literature, and Creative Writing duties for more than 300 students, they became lifelong friends.  

For weeks, Katie and Cindy endured the almost constant sexual harassment at the hands of the assistant principal.  In mid-October, after Cindy suffered an attack similar to Katie’s from fifteen years earlier, the two teachers designed a unique method to teach the six predators a lesson they would never forget.  Katie and Cindy dubbed their plan Six Red Apples.

Read this mystery-thriller to experience the dilemma the two teachers created for themselves, and to learn the true meaning of real justice.  And, eternal friendship. 

Chapter 57

Cindy didn’t go to church Sunday morning.  Neither did I, even though we had agreed she’d drop by and pick Cullie and me up.  Her non-tan-colored van had plenty of seats.  She called at ten minutes past six, just a few minutes after I walked out of The Thread.  “I’ve decided to stay home.  It’s going to be a circus on Sparks Avenue.”  Cindy said, and my mind jumped like a frog to flies and afterbirth, things nature provided in spades (I was regretting mine and Cindy’s final visit to the pasture after the kids had run in and said the calf was born dead).

“Circus?  Are you talking about church?”  I asked.

“According to Facebook, the Deacons have planned a memorial for Warren, one on steroids.  They’re bringing in pastors from all around: Albertville, Guntersville, Sardis, Douglas.  I imagine this is just a warm-up to the funeral, which is Saturday, assuming the autopsy is finalized.”

“I’m glad I limit my Facebook time to my groups.”  I said, pouring another thermos of coffee.

“Speaking of Real Justice, I don’t suppose you’ve yet visited your two outlier groups?”

“Meaning, the groups my tenth and eleventh graders set up in defiance of my refusal to include them in the novel writing project?” 

“Yes.  There’s already been several comments to Riley Radford’s post.”  Cindy said.

“Riley?  She’s a ninth grader.”

“I guess someone added her to the tenth-grade group.  Doesn’t matter.  She posted that the four jaybirds had kidnapped Stella’s daughter and were holding her at a cabin in the backwoods of Cherry Log.  The comments are all over the place but basically address various components of Riley’s story, such as who lured Candy (that’s Stella’s daughter), how they abducted her, and what they planned on doing with her.”  Cindy had apparently been up since 4:30 as I had.

“Did I hear you say four?”  There are five jaybirds: Mason Campbell, Noah Fletcher, Aiden Walker, Jackson Burke, and Daniel Taylor.”  I said with almost perfect knowledge of the story.

“Seems like your third character, Mr. Walker, the pastor of First United Baptist Church, is halfway to Heaven, kind of like my Ruger, depending on what you believe about purgatory.”

“That’s not part of either one of the story-lines.  Certainly not from my five Creative Writing teams, the official Real Justice project.”  I said.

“It’s more difficult to control outliers.  I guess that’s why they’re called outliers.  But, here’s my concern.  Sorry, is now a good time to talk?”  Cindy asked.  She could be so funny, without realizing it.

“I’d tell you if Wayne was here.”

“You wouldn’t have to.  I’m not deaf.  I could hear your heavy breathing.”

“Don’t go there.”  Cindy’s words reminded me that I wouldn’t see him today.  “Back to your concern dear.”  I sometimes had to redirect Cindy, or she would chase two rabbits in four different directions.

“The place Riley described sounded eerily like Club Eden.  Obviously, I wouldn’t have been able to see in my mind’s eye the inside of the cabin close to Aurora Lake and almost feel the rough and rusty cast iron coffee pot where you planted your little bug, if you hadn’t given your jot and tittle description yesterday while I was chefing.”

“And to think, I believed Riley.  She was so humble and apologetic, virtually swearing she had learned a good lesson.  She’s such a busy body, always trying to stir shit up.”  I said.

“I don’t want to alarm you, but she scares me.  Not so much her, but what if she is creating this shit, as you call it, from a mix of truth and imagination?”  Cindy asked.

“Oh shit, you’re saying Riley might be hearing, someway picking up on some words or vibes around her, maybe at home?”

“I’m getting another call.  Let’s talk more later.”  Cindy said ending our call before I could respond.

Cindy wasn’t the only one who received a call.  Before my two slices of bread popped out of the toaster, Wayne called. “Morning beautiful.”

“Morning beautiful.”  He was the most beautiful between us.  If he could see me now he would say, “makeup is a gift from God.”

I could tell he wasn’t alone.  I couldn’t make out what they were saying but it appeared two or three deputies were having a conversation in the background.  “I’m missing you already and that doesn’t include missing you yesterday and last night.”  I loved hearing a beautiful man tell me he was lonely for me.  This had never happened, not with Colton Lee Brunner, or anyone.

“What’s up?  I suspect you’re in a meeting or something.”

“I am and have some news, other than my longing for you.  Sorry, I’m turning into a deranged romantic.”

“There’s no such thing, but I like whatever you’re becoming.” 

“Back to the news.  It seems Walmart keeps extensive records.  They have some more sophisticated software.  They can match a sale to a customer.  The gas cans that were discovered at Beverly’s were not purchased or acquired from Radford Hardware as we earlier thought.  I must admit I’ve learned something that most fifth graders would have easily known.  Two of my deputies had learned early on in this investigation that Walmart, both local Walmart’s, sold the identical gas cans used in your fire.  They had been able to tell us when the gas cans were purchased and that they were bought with cash.  But, we failed to ask one more question—a broad, catch-all type inquiry: can you tell us anything else about this purchase?  Sit down, here comes a shocker.  On Friday, September 15th, at 3:40 p.m., Nathan Johnson bought the three gas cans that were used to torch yours and Beverly’s home.  Bought them at the Boaz Walmart.”

“Wait a minute.  That can’t be right.  You’re sounding like a preschooler.  Nathan Johnson was already dead.”  I said, thinking Wayne was losing his ability to reason.  Was his loneliness and our love-making leaving his mind in a puddle?

“Not so fast Sherlock.  Remain seated.  Nathan Johnson and Nathan Johnson are twins.”

“Their parents named them the same thing?”  I asked, never hearing of such a weird thing.

“Seems so, but I doubt it was intentional, a screw-up in the birth certificates.  According to my friend, Sheriff Blaylock in San Marcos, although he did say they had different nicknames.

“So, you believe the Radford’s are behind this?  Pretty much what I had thought.”  I figured I was saying the obvious.

“I don’t have time to go deeper into the details.  It’s an interesting story.  I’ll leave it at that.  Brother rivalries sometimes turn deadly.  Recall Cain and Abel, don’t you?”  Wayne asked.

“I think so.  Tell me every detail as soon as you can.  I appreciate you calling.”  I knew he was busy and I always hated myself when I became too clingy.

“Not so fast literature lady. I don’t know if Darla was writing fiction or the real thing, but it seems she had or imagined she had a daughter conceived by an unknown man.  I’ve had my secretary reading through all of Darla’s journals.  I just wanted to ask you if she was a writer wannabe, maybe inspired you to start writing.  I didn’t think you had a long-lost sister, at least you’d never mentioned her.”

I surprised myself at how quickly I framed my response.  “I inherited Darla’s imagination gene, no doubt.”

“I figured that and just wanted to share a little story, hoping it would bring back good memories.  Revisiting them is important, you know.”

If I was one to have a panic attack now would have been a good time.  “Get back to work and call me tonight if you have time.”

After our call ended, for the first time, I felt the initial rumblings of a desire, maybe a need, to reveal my past to Wayne.  At least some of my past, maybe the part about Darla becoming pregnant with me during the night of her high school graduation party at Club Eden.

I was as giddy as a teenager.  Wayne should arrive within an hour.  Late Sunday afternoon he had called and said something came up. An emergency trip to Texas.  He later had explained that the Lone Star state acts quickly on extradition warrants.  Wayne had left Alabama in a hurry and flown to Dallas, taking a rental car to San Marcos.  He hadn’t been in such a rush to return.  He had spent nearly three days with Sheriff Blaylock, working the case, as he put it.  He and Nathan Johnson, the living breathing one, had landed in Huntsville, along with their 747 I suppose.  I was anxious to crawl under the sheets with the beautiful Wayne, but I was nearly as eager to hear his Texas story.

At 9:15 p.m., I had just walked back in from the patio and looked down the long driveway hoping to see Wayne rolling towards me when I heard my cell phone vibrating on the coffee table.  It was a text notification that my Club Eden bug was active.  I certainly didn’t understand the technology, but the spy gadget had come with an offer from the manufacturer to subscribe to a service they provided through a sophisticated App.  Instead of carrying around the receiver, I could listen on my iPhone to what was being transmitted from the spy sight.  After receiving a text notification that the transmitter was live, I could either open the App and listen as the conversations and sounds were occurring or I could listen to them via a recording the $19.99 App had waiting on me.

By the time I opened the App to hear the live version, all I heard was, “8:30 p.m., just like at Warren’s.”  The voice sounded like Fulton’s but could have been Justin Adams.  I wasn’t sure.  I knew it wasn’t Ryan.

I selected the ‘Unopened Recordings’ file and heard the complete conversation that had just occurred in a little cabin next to Aurora Lake.

“Fire out?” 

“Yea.  You lock the cabinet?”

“Don’t worry.”

“But, I do.  Be sure and relay every detail we discussed at the fire with Ryan.  I’ll do the same with Danny.  Clockwork, it has to be exact, but you know that.”

“Saturday, right after Warren’s funeral.  Let’s make him proud.”

“8:30 p.m., just like at Warren’s.”

I replayed the recording three more times.  All I could figure was that the Faking Five, now the Faking Four, had something up their sleeve, and it was to take place Saturday, December 23rd.  No doubt, this year.

Wayne tapped on my back door as I was about to listen the fifth time.

The primary aim of the "Novel Excerpts" blog category is to showcase my creative writing, specifically from the novels I've written. Hopefully, these posts will provide a glimpse into my storytelling style, themes, and narrative skills. It's an opportunity to share my artistic expressions and the worlds I've created through my novels.

The Boaz Schoolteacher, written in 2018, is my fifth novel. I'll post a chapter a day over the next few weeks.

Book Blurb

In the summer of 2017, Katie Sims and her daughter Cullie, moved from New York City to Katie’s hometown of Boaz, Alabama for her to teach English and for Cullie to attend Boaz High School .  Fifteen years earlier, during the Christmas holidays, five men from prominent local families sexually assaulted Katie.  Nine months later, Katie’s only daughter was born.

Almost from the beginning of the new school year, as Katie and fellow-teacher Cindy Barker shared English, Literature, and Creative Writing duties for more than 300 students, they became lifelong friends.  

For weeks, Katie and Cindy endured the almost constant sexual harassment at the hands of the assistant principal.  In mid-October, after Cindy suffered an attack similar to Katie’s from fifteen years earlier, the two teachers designed a unique method to teach the six predators a lesson they would never forget.  Katie and Cindy dubbed their plan Six Red Apples.

Read this mystery-thriller to experience the dilemma the two teachers created for themselves, and to learn the true meaning of real justice.  And, eternal friendship. 

Chapter 56

After staying at Cindy’s until almost midnight Wednesday night, I almost used another sick day on Thursday.  It would have been a mistake.  Both Thursday and Friday were surprisingly focused and productive.  There were no Real Justice discoveries and no one except Ben Gilbert for some odd reason, was late turning in their short, short story (Piggly Wiggly, a spoof of John Updike’s A & P) I had assigned via Facebook on Sunday night.  It was almost like everything was back to normal.  Other than the absence of Cindy, and that would be changing this coming Monday. 

The only thing I could honestly claim was even remotely uncomfortable was Riley Radford’s surprise visit to my office at 10:30 a.m. on Thursday.  I had never seen her so humble and contrite.  She just kept apologizing and saying that her father had put her up to bugging my office as a joke.  She relayed he had somehow obtained a key to my office and that she had sneaked in during a Friday afternoon pep-rally last August.  As she was walking out, she also apologized for how she had been maligning (not her word) Cullie and promised she would start treating her like a real sister.  I hoped she was sincere.

Last night, with Cullie at Cindy’s, Wayne and I spent some quality time beneath the sheets.  Well, at least until a little after 11:00 when he was called away.  Earlier, during a candlelight dinner over another customized meal by Pirates Cove, he explained why Ryan and Danny and Cynthia had been able to make bail.  “Money and power.”  He had said while dipping another plate of spaghetti.  “Judge Tyler Broadside probably wouldn’t be sitting on his bench if it weren’t for the five most powerful families in Boaz.  Even with their money and influence he only won the last election by forty-three votes.  It was dessert time before I asked him for the day and time of their preliminary hearing. 

“Katie, ever since Cindy was released on Wednesday, I’ve been trying to find the best time to tell you.  I apologize for the delay.  I feel I’ve broken my promise to keep you posted about what’s going on in your mother’s case.”  He had pushed aside the slice of coconut pie I had just sat in front of him, pulled out his chair, and stood beside me as I reached for his hand.  I wasn’t sure if I should kiss him or slap him.  The latter certainly wasn’t feasible or seriously considered.

“Okay, what has had you so reluctant to talk to me?”  I said.

“Barbara Burgess is missing.  DA Abbott told me late Wednesday afternoon after Cindy’s hearing.  I don’t think you knew, but I stuck my head in the back of the courtroom for a few minutes.  I left when you were called to the witness stand.  I didn’t want to make you nervous.  I waited out in the hall.  Never did come back inside.  But I did follow Abbott to his office before you, Cindy, Matt, and Jed Cole exited.”

“What exactly does this mean?”

“There won’t be a preliminary hearing.  Its main value is for the defendant, for an opportunity for the Judge to determine whether the DA has legal reason to go forth with his case and to determine the amount of bail, if any.  Since the three defendants have posted a bond, they are free, so that’s not an issue.  Abbott will be taking their case to a grand jury, but that probably won’t happen until Ms. Burgess is found.”

“You’re telling me her testimony is critical.  Right?”  I asked.

“Absolutely, without her or Ms. Robinson there is no way for the DA to present the excited utterance.”

“What about the written copy, what Clara had Barbara write out?  It describes exactly what the two women saw.”  I said.

“It does.  Abbott says he’s never seen such a legal quandary.  An excited utterance is normally admissible as an exception to the hearsay rule.  The utterance can be admitted even if it is written, but it must have a foundation.  That brings up the authenticity issue in our case.  Without Barbara to testify that Ms. Robinson had her write out what both had seen and what she had said, the excited utterance that ‘they have killed Darla,’ the written document is strictly hearsay.”

“Let me see if I have this correct.  A criminal defense attorney would argue at trial, right before DA Abbott was about to offer Clara’s written statement into evidence, her excited utterance, that the document was hearsay and that it hadn’t been properly authenticated.  He, the defense lawyer, would argue that the DA himself could have written the statement a few minutes before the trial began.  Am I right?”

“Absolutely.  You now see why I didn’t want to tell you this.  Again, I’m sorry.  Please forgive me.”  Wayne said, pulling me to him.  This was about the time my body started talking louder than my mind, but I did find the strength to ask one final question.

“Barbara Burgess won’t ever testify.  Will she?”

“Katie, we have no evidence of what you’re thinking but you have every right to believe there is foul play at work here.”  Wayne said.

“The sorry bastard, bastards, have killed the dear, sweet Barbara.  I feel it in my bones.  There can’t be another explanation.”

“Don’t repeat me, but I suspect you are correct.  I’ve had my deputies looking for her, calling her cell and her two out-of-state children since Wednesday night.  I also had them go by her apartment and make an emergency entrance, thinking she might be inside and in trouble.  No one seems to know where she is or what has happened.”

I almost felt guilty taking Wayne’s hand and leading him to my bedroom.  After several minutes of passionate kissing and as he unbuttoned my blouse with us still standing, my mind released a non-verbal whisper, “would a loving daughter who had just found out the three people who had killed her mother, choose love-making over a night of crying and hand-wringing?”  My choice to crawl beneath the sheets was clear evidence that mother and I had never been close.  At least I was truthful.  But it still pained and encouraged me to do everything I could so Cullie knew she was the most important person in my life.

Saturday afternoon I went to pick-up Cullie at Cindy’s.  She insisted the two of us stay for dinner.  It was unseasonably warm and for some reason all four kids stayed outside until dark infatuated over a cow giving birth in the pasture along the fence line next to the Barker’s driveway.  Cindy and I had walked out twice and finally decided to let nature take its course, including the raw and bloody education of four smart, but naive, children.

For nearly two hours, I sat at Cindy’s kitchen bar while she cooked an elaborate meal including her grandmother’s sweet-potato cobbler.  With its hand-crafted dough, it took more time than the six-layered salad, the three-meat casserole, and the one-dough homemade bread, all combined.

“I guess you’re dying to know how I straightened out the mess you made?”  Cindy said, facing away from me, as I pulled and tied off her red mane.

“It’s been on my mind.  Along with the matching mess you made.”  I was again reminded of how much I had missed our talks.  I couldn’t imagine two people being closer friends and enjoying more engaging dialog.

“It had to be God’s will.  Thanksgiving was a disaster.  After everyone went to bed that night I went driving and wound up buying a six-pack of beer.  Can you believe that?  Why on God’s green earth would I do that?  Looking back, I suppose there’s something true about that old saying, ‘beer, alcohol, and whiskey, gives you liquid courage.’  After two beers, I was buzzing.  Halfway through my third I was buzzing more and madder than hell.  The beer and blinding memories, whatever they were, prompted me to relive the conversation Warren and Paula had on his patio outside his basement.  I could have walked across a bed of burning coals.  I ended up hiding my car behind an abandoned house on Sparks Avenue, west of the church, and walking to the parsonage.  I sneaked through the hedges and crawled beside the brick wall.  You know it.  This was probably midnight, might have been a little later.  Here’s the weird and crazy part, so far at least.  After fifteen minutes or so alternating between looking over the wall into Warren’s basement and lying on my back, remember, I am still pregnant, looking at the stars overhead, I fell asleep.  I probably would have slept till sunrise if I hadn’t smelled cigarette smoke.  I’ve told you how my sense of smell has transformed into an eagle’s since I’ve been pregnant.  Eagles have keen eyesight.  Maybe, it’s dogs that have such a keen sense of smell.  Anyway, I rolled over and eased onto my elbows and saw Warren outside, on the patio, smoking.”  Cindy stopped and pushed a pan of bread into the oven and used her blender to mix seven eggs, eight ounces of flour, and way too much milk.

“How in the hell did you get inside the house?”  I asked.

“Rain, righteousness, and Ruger.  The last motivated Warren more than doing the right thing.  It was barely drizzling when he was smoking but apparently it had rained enough earlier for the leaves to lose their voices.  I was able to sneak down the stairs without his detection.  The nine-millimeter Ruger spoke clearly even though, at the time, it didn’t make a sound.  As God would have it, Warren had disabled his alarm when he came outside for a five-minute smoke.  Oh, the power of small blessings.”

“You’re an idiot.  Warren knew exactly who you were.  Still knows.”  I said.

“That could be a problem.  If he goes back on his promise.”

“Promise.  You got him to promise he wouldn’t tell?  And, then you shot him.  Two times?”  This was turning into more of a horror story than I had imagined.

“Shot the windows three times.  That for sure was a mistake.  Shot them from inside Warren’s basement.”

“How on earth did he survive two blasts from a nine-millimeter?”  I asked.

“God works in mysterious ways I guess.  I would have sworn I killed him.  Looking back, it didn’t make much sense to tease out that promise from him.  Does it?”  Cindy asked buzzing around the kitchen like she was a professional chef.

“So, before you shot him, he gave you the tape.  Where is it now?”

“That’s how I got arrested.  After I got back to my car I smashed it up pretty good with my boots, even pulled out most of the tape.  As I was driving down Mill Avenue I must have been going too fast or driving a little erratic.  I saw the blue lights behind me as I got into the curve at Five Points.  I slowed but then at the last moment I jerked toward Bethsaida Road and tossed the tape out the passenger window.  There’s a drainage ditch there.  I then pulled into Dollar General’s parking lot and waited on the cop to circle back around.”

“I’m afraid to ask what happened to your Ruger.”  All I could think was why hadn’t Cindy already been arrested.  God must be taking care of her to keep Warren quiet.

“I hid it under the porch at the abandoned house on Sparks Avenue.  Don’t ask me why I didn’t leave the tape there.  Also, don’t worry.  I sneaked back over there late morning for my Ruger.  It’s halfway to Heaven by now.”  Cindy said, looking at me with both hands raised with palms pushing back and forth towards my face.  “Don’t ask.”

Cindy’s dinner was ten times better than anything I could have imagined preparing, even better than the Pirates Cove meal I had fed Wayne last night.  After three episodes of Quantico on Netflix, Cindy’s cell phone rang.  It was nearly ten o’clock.  It didn’t take long to figure out it was Maxine.  The caller had undoubtedly asked if Cindy was coming to church tomorrow.  As I paused the TV, I heard Cindy say, “oh goodness, that is so sad, so tragic.”  Less than a minute later the call ended, and Cindy returned her iPhone to the coffee table.

“Sad, tragic, but real justice.  Warren Tillman died tonight at 7:30. That was Maxine.  She had just heard.”  Cindy said without emotion, the only indication of what she was feeling was a slight smile, almost a smirk.

“What else did she say?”  I asked.

“Just how the doctors were surprised that he never regained consciousness after his surgery.”

“Maybe we can conclude he never got a chance to tell who shot him.”  I said.

“Looks that way.  Let’s watch Grace and Frankie.  You like that don’t you?”  Cindy certainly was putting on an act.  Surely, she wasn’t this cold of a person.  It was like she had swatted two big green flies.  It wasn’t at all like she had killed two people in the last two months.  But, what did I know?  I didn’t have a clue what it was like to lose the love of my life, a man who had rescued me from a harsh and hillbilly upbringing, who had loved me like a princess until the night he left my bedside and never returned to say goodbye.